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PONE-D-24-44674Convolutional neural network using magnetic resonance brain imaging to predict outcome from tuberculosis meningitisPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Dong, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised by two reviewers below. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 12 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please also indicate clearly a lead author for this group along with a contact email address. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I find this manuscript highly interesting and promising, particularly in its potential to enhance the diagnostic utility of MRI as an additional tool for tuberculosis meningitis (TBM). However, I have several comments for consideration: Accessibility for Clinicians: The manuscript is highly technical, which may limit its practical application for clinicians in routine care. Simplifying the language and providing more direct clinical insights would enhance its relevance and usability in daily practice. Definition of Outcomes: The definition of "events" as outcomes in this paper seems somewhat arbitrary. Death and neurological deficits represent distinct outcomes with a wide range of severity. It would be beneficial for the authors to provide a clear justification for grouping these outcomes together or, alternatively, analyze them separately. MRI Findings and Model Explanation: The discussion of the MRI findings and the defined model is insufficiently detailed. The authors should expand on how specific MRI lesions relate to clinical features and outcomes, providing more thorough explanations and discussions to strengthen the paper's conclusions. Reviewer #2: In this manuscript, the authors used a convolutional neural network to predict outcome from tuberculosis meningitis using imaging data only or fused with clinical and laboratory data. This is an interesting study in which the authors show that MRI has additional information in predicting the occurrence of death or neurological complications in the first two months after the MRI. However, there are a number of issues that the authors should clarify. The study of Canas et al. (ref 40) is using the same dataset and it should be mentioned in the beginning what the difference is with this study since there is clearly some overlap. In the discussion one cannot use this study to discuss similarities since this is expected if you use similar methodology on the same dataset. This part of the discussion should be removed. Performance values were compared between the HIV positive and HIV negative group but this is only descriptive and no statistical analysis is performed. Without a proper statistical analysis, we cannot conclude much from a descriptive observation. Specific comments Figure 1: The arrow in panel C is not very well visible and this can be improved. Who checked the quality of the MRI? Was it visually checked by a neuroradiologist? How many scans were excluded? The authors mention that a patient was excluded if no other scan was available as a replacement but this is unclear. Did you included other sequences besides a T1w-MPRAGE or did some patients have multiple scans? If the latter is true, which image was used or were all images used? Missing variables were imputed within the training process and this is a valid technique provided that the number of missing data is small compared the collected data. How many missing data were present for the different variables? MRI scans were rigidly registered into MNI space but I assume that scaling was applied as well. This could be mentioned explicitly. Intensities were normalized to range [0,1]? How was this done exactly? Scaling with respect to the maximum in the image can be a problem depending where this voxel is located. It would be interesting to see a correlation matrix between all the non-imaging features. How are features which are highly correlated (if present) handled? The caption of figure 2 is very minimal and should be extended. It is unclear to me how the vector of 512 imaging features is compressed into a latent vector of length 24. P7, line 206: it is mentioned that equation 2 (with alpha = beta = 1) is analogous to concurrently maximizing the likelihood of the three tasks but I am not sure if this is indeed the case. I would expect that this depends on the relative loss with respect to the others. P7, line 232: the model was recalibrated by fitting an intercept-only logistic regression on the observed class and the predicted scores as the offset in order to correct for class imbalance. Is there a reference for this procedure showing that this will indeed correct for class imbalance? It is not clear what the smooth gradient based saliency maps are representing? Is it some sort of relative weight of a voxel which reflects its contribution to the final output? In table 3, event should be replaced by new neurological event (including death) within 2 months or is it representing something else? The age of 24 (1st quartile for the whole group) is different form the value in the text which is 25. I would also add a separate table for the test set to see how representative this test set is. P10, line 271 it is mentioned that 79 out of 215 participants (50.2%) were infected with HIV but I don’t understand what the 50.2% is representing. 79 out of 215 is much smaller than 50%. Is there a reference or an argument why the authors selected some of the hyperparameters such as weight decay at 0.12 for each feature? Figure 5: the quality of the figure is poor and values and text were difficult to read. I would also recommend to use the same scale for panels C and D and for panels E and F so that the reader can more easily compare the results of the validation and test set. The n=10 is confusing. I would rather mention the actual number of patients used. In figure 6, I do not see coronal planes while this is mentioned in the caption. I would also add a colour bar. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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<div>PONE-D-24-44674R1Convolutional neural network using magnetic resonance brain imaging to predict outcome from tuberculosis meningitisPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Dong. Apologies for delay but was awaiting comments from a second reviewer who previously reviewed. Given time lapse, I have decided to proceed with comments of the one reviewer who has again carefully reviewed your manuscript. Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 14 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: First, the author has tried to address all the reviewer's comments and requests; however, the absence of a tracked changes file makes it more challenging to follow the revisions. Secondly, the overall clinical applicability of the article remains limited, potentially making it more relevant to a statistical audience than to clinicians. The extensive focus on methodology may diminish its practical value for clinical implementation. I recommend that the author revise the article's objective, replacing phrases such as "predict the occurrence of any neurological complication" or "expand the insight in clinical prognostications" with a more technically precise and focused expression. Alternatively, the author could enhance the article by including clear clinical conclusions in the first paragraph of the discussion and elaborating on the clinical implications in the conclusion section at the end of the discussion. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Sofiati Dian ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. 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Convolutional neural network using magnetic resonance brain imaging to predict outcome from tuberculosis meningitis PONE-D-24-44674R2 Dear Dr. Trinh Dong, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Steve Stephen Michael Graham, FRACP, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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