Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 28, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-36721Association of Food Environment with Diet Quality and Body Mass Index (BMI) of School-going Adolescents in NepalPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Sharma, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 11 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. 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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This study aimed to determine how certain features of the home food environment affect the diet quality and Body Mass Index (BMI) of school-going adolescents. The methods are well described, but some parts need more explanation and discussion. I recommend checking all the text for clarity and consistency of information. Sometimes, the writing makes the text difficult to read. Furthermore, the manuscript is not in the journal's template, which has many details of how to present each section of the manuscript. Methods I did not find Table 1, but your work includes many tables and images, more than the journal allows. So, I recommend including Table 1 in the supporting files. Which software did you use to do the statistical analysis? You need to mention this in your manuscript. Results I recommend doing more complete title tables, including the place and year of the study. I did not find Figure 2. And where is Figure 1? You did not mention it in the text? In Tables 3 and 4, did you think to characterize your sample by GDR score (categorized) and BMI (categorized)? It would be interesting to see if there is some kind of difference. Table 4: In the footnote, include all the aspects you included in model 3 of the home food environment. You also need to make clear the outcome variable of your model. You can put the outcome variable in a line above the models. Based on my comments on Table 4, I recommend revising Table 5. You do not put a footnote in Table 5. Discussion I miss citations of studies about the importance of the school environment in adolescents’ food consumption. In the third paragraph, you did not cite one article to discuss this theme; in the next paragraph, when you cited this theme again, you did not mention any previous work. In your discussion, you cite other works that found similar results. However, I miss you discussing possible reasons for the findings you found, reasons that could justify why you see some patterns in your sample. You only mention the conceptual framework in the discussion. It should be mentioned in your methods and explain how you use it. Furthermore, citing the supplementary material in the text is recommended so the readers can go to the site and learn that these files exist and learn more about your work. Reviewer #2: General Considerations The article has a clear line of reasoning consistent with the components of the text. The procedures used are described in a way that allows for the replication of the study. The instruments appear to be appropriate and utilize reliable methods for data treatment. The conclusions address the objective proposed by the authors. The following corrections are suggested to enhance the value of the work for future publication. Specific Comments: Title: Appropriate and conveys the study’s purpose. Abstract: Well-written and consistent. I believe the conclusion could be phrased more effectively. Introduction: Clearly presents and connects the facts related to the topic. However, I felt the need for a deeper exploration of the concepts related to the home food environment, as addressed in Gálvez-Espinoza’s (2017) conceptual model, which explores the food environment in Low- and Middle-Income Countries (LMICs). Additionally, it lacks an overview of the nutritional status of adolescents in Nepal, which would better contextualize the findings in the discussion. Moreover, the second paragraph is somewhat confusing. I suggest using this paragraph to discuss the GDR and its relevance to this type of study or why assessing diet quality is important in this population. Nonetheless, after reading the introduction in its entirety, the motivations for conducting the study are clear. Methods: Comprehensive and explanatory, allowing for easy replication of the study. My suggestion is to clarify exactly which sociodemographic variables were used in each regression model, as there are many. Results: The results are clearly presented and support the subsequent discussions. Regarding the tables, the captions could be more explicit, in line with the earlier suggestion about detailing the sociodemographic variables used in each regression model. Additionally, what is the relevance of the data on the "most popular media source"? It is shown in Table 2 but was not used in any analysis. Was there a hypothesis regarding this variable? Discussion: The discussion addresses all the results and corroborates the findings with prior literature, but I found the text a bit tedious due to its repetitive structure in each paragraph: presenting the finding in one sentence, bringing in one or two studies that support or contradict it, and then offering hypotheses. I suggest rewriting and better connecting the paragraphs for smoother reading. I am uncertain about the conclusion that positive parental modeling is associated with higher BMI being a healthy pattern. What is the predominant nutritional status of adolescents in the same age group in the country? Is there any population-based study that supports this conclusion? I did not find references cited in this paragraph. 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Association of food environment with diet quality and Body Mass Index (BMI) of school-going adolescents in Nepal PONE-D-24-36721R1 Dear Dr. Sharma, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Larissa Loures Mendes, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): The revision met all the demands and suggestions of the reviewers and I believe that the article in its current format will contribute to the advancement of the theme of food environments. |
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PONE-D-24-36721R1 PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Sharma, I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now being handed over to our production team. At this stage, our production department will prepare your paper for publication. This includes ensuring the following: * All references, tables, and figures are properly cited * All relevant supporting information is included in the manuscript submission, * There are no issues that prevent the paper from being properly typeset If revisions are needed, the production department will contact you directly to resolve them. If no revisions are needed, you will receive an email when the publication date has been set. At this time, we do not offer pre-publication proofs to authors during production of the accepted work. Please keep in mind that we are working through a large volume of accepted articles, so please give us a few weeks to review your paper and let you know the next and final steps. Lastly, if your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at customercare@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Larissa Loures Mendes Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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