Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 3, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-21504Time-motion study in Primary Health Care in Moldova: How do family doctors and medical assistants spend their work time?PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Muho, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== A very interesting study to see the workload of family doctors in PHC as the backbone of healthcare in every country. From the study, we can see that as a doctor, you are not only provide services to patients but are also inseparable from the demands of administrative workload and community service outside the building, because that is the essence of a doctor's job especially in PHC. This study has given us information regarding the amount of time needed in one working hour cycle to do the three things above. However, it would be better if you could add information regarding the following matters: 1. Why do we need to know the work-time allocation of FD and MA? For what purposes is this data needed? Is it part of some development roadmap? 2. Number of patients per doctor per day 3. Number of working hours per day and per week 4. Office hours or shift work 5. Situation: outpatient clinic only, or includes emergency room and inpatient care? 6. The reason why it is taken 5 days in a row, does it include weekdays and/or weekends 7. What do doctors and medical assistants do during the 8 minute and 5-minute consultations? � Can you explain how long it takes for history taking, physical examination, and education in one consultation? 8. Before meeting the doctor, is there a nurse station that has taken previous clinical data? Was it part of the whole consultation process? 9. Are there other health personnel who work as part of the patient examination series at the PHC? 10. Why are hypertensive and pediatric visits the most frequent and time consuming? What is discussed during the consultation meeting? Does it only depend on the doctor-patient interaction? Or are there other collaborative services? 11. What are the specific implications/impacts on services inside and outside the building from Health personnel contracted for 1.5 full-time equivalents worked over 10 hours per week shorter than required by their working contracts? 12. Table 1. What time-period data? 13. Observation mechanism? Timer used, if any? Who is involved in data collection? 14. What are the differences in the background, qualifications and job descriptions of FD and MA? Because experience in medicine are not much different (11 years vs 10 years) 15. Calculation of sample size: to ensure that 24 FD and 24 adequately represent the population ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 09 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Overall, the study was written in good English, easy to digest and important for health care manager. The topic might be important only for that particular area, being investigated. However, the idea and the way to observe are actually good for health managers to replicate in their own areas. Therefore, authors should reveal a little bit in the methodology related with operational definition, i.e. how to measure duration, which one is the starting point to observe and to conclude as end consultation time. How do authors define hypertension patients? perhaps the one who need consultation with doctors were the newly diagnosed, or patients with complications, whereas MAs only doing the follow-up, blood pressure monitoring, etc. How did the interprofessional collaboration between MAs and FDs? Whether they work simultaneously, first MA to gather information continues with FDs? How is the working hours? Is there any specific regulation for working hours, i.e. 8 hours/day including rest? How about working hours for doctors? those things that I thought important to describe further the situation of the GPs. Reviewer #2: This article tries to describe the daily activity of Family Doctor and Medical assistant, in the Primary Healthcare setting. As commonly known, work in PHC setting is rigorous, and a lot of time and energy should be allocated by those working in the field. Thus in this context, the article confirms the presupposition, and no really new information is given. However in my opinion, the work of family doctor is always fascinating to look at, since they serve the general population with a wide variety of complaints and illness, and often their work is complicated since besides clinical aspects, they are also responsible for administrative aspects. So in this context it is interesting to see how they manage time, and how much time is allocated for several activities. From the article we could see how the PHC system in Moldova works, and compare with our own to see which has a better impact on the society. I would suggest several points for the author as to make the explanation clearer for readers from different health systems: 1. It would be more interesting if in the introduction the author describes from community perspectives and from family doctor perspectives, what is the impact of the condition found in Moldova, e.g. patient satisfaction, doctor satisfaction, doctor turnover, patient complaints etc. 2. Limit number of tables. Please follow author instruction, and select tables that provide important information. 3. Since not all readers know the educational background of Medical Assistance and their job description, it would be good to briefly describe it. 4. The format should be modified so that line number does not appear. It really disturbs and needs more efforts to read. Overall, this article is interesting and should be published. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Time-motion study in Primary Health Care in Moldova: How do family doctors and medical assistants spend their work time? PONE-D-24-21504R1 Dear Dr. Muho, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Retno Asti Werdhani, M.Epid, Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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