Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionNovember 29, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-54902Assessing Concentration in the Monoclonal Antibody Innovation Market: A Patent-Based StudyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Motta-Santos, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 19 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. 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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear Author, Assessing Concentration in the Monoclonal Antibody Innovation Market: A Patent Based Study is interesting article on the large molecules which made significance advancement in the clinics. However i have few suggestion to improve quality of this articles. 1.Abstract should be formatted objective/method/results/conclusion. 2.Introduction should touch 360 angle of topic. 3.Conclusion need to rewrite for effective delivery of research analysis. Reviewer #2: Assessing Concentration in the Monoclonal Antibody Innovation Market: A Patent- Based Study Motta-Santos and colleagues studied the thorough analysis of mAb Market and its implications for healthcare innovation. They highlighted the concentration levels and dissemination patterns of mAb patents Authors can improve the quality of the manuscript by considering following modifications: • In the Introduction, authors can highlight the research's novelty and its effectiveness for stakeholders. • Authors can also discuss the impact of biosimilars on the mAb market. • Authors can also add some of the case studies or specific examples of successful R&D projects that led to significant changes in mAbs developments or markets. • Lane 135: Authors can include specific examples of how geographic boundaries influence market dynamics, such as regional variations in drug availability and pricing. • Authors can discuss about retrieving data for chemical drug patents parallels the process for mAbs with the explanation of major differences. • Please explain the use of the Herfindahl-Hirschman Index (HHI) and Concentration Ratio (CR). Please add a brief discussion on the significance of these indices in other industries so that readers who are unfamiliar with these concepts understand their relevance. • The authors provided plenty of data in the table format and text explanation. Authors can consider making bar graphs for the results shown in the table to represent the distribution of patents among holder types for an easy and thorough understanding of the readers. For market concentration, add graphical representations of HHI and CR values. • Line 358-365: Please explain why is the decrease in participation significant for market dynamics. • Lines 406–439: Please explain why single-holder contributions dominate and the effect on innovation dynamics. Please explain the barriers to cross-holder partnerships if there are any. • In Figures 2&3: Please explain why the slope difference matters for market concentration or innovation strategies. What do slopes mean for policy or market behavior? Reviewer #3: The paper provides a valuable initial analysis of patent concentration in the mAb market. However, it lacks crucial connections between patent data and market realities, a deeper analysis of the implications of concentration, and a broader consideration of key factors shaping the future of the mAb market. Addressing these shortcomings would significantly strengthen the paper's contribution to the field. As a reviewer, I believe the paper is lacking in several key areas: 1. Lack of correlation between patent concentration and market share: The paper focuses on patent concentration (HHI based on patents) but fails to connect this to actual market share of the corresponding mAb products. A crucial aspect is understanding whether the companies with the highest patent concentration also hold the largest market share of approved and marketed mAb drugs. This would provide a more direct link between patent dominance and potential market power. 2. Limited discussion on the impact of concentration: The paper mentions "moderate" and "unconcentrated" markets, but lacks a deeper analysis of the potential implications of these concentration levels: Potential for anti-competitive behavior: Does the level of concentration raise concerns about potential anti-competitive practices like price-fixing or exclusionary behavior? Impact on innovation: Does the concentration level stifle innovation by hindering entry of new players and limiting access to technology? Impact on patient access: Does the concentrated market structure potentially lead to higher drug prices and limited patient access to these life-saving therapies? 3. Lack of consideration for therapeutic areas: The analysis appears to be conducted across the entire mAb market without considering the significant variations within different therapeutic areas (e.g., oncology, autoimmune diseases, infectious diseases). Concentration levels and their implications can vary significantly across these areas. Analyzing concentration within specific therapeutic areas would provide a more nuanced understanding of the competitive landscape. Limited discussion on future trends: The paper primarily focuses on past trends and current market conditions. A discussion on potential future trends in the mAb market, such as: The rise of biosimilars and their impact on market concentration. The increasing importance of emerging technologies like antibody-drug conjugates (ADCs) and bispecific antibodies. The potential impact of artificial intelligence (AI) and machine learning on mAb development. Would enhance the paper's value and provide insights into the evolving competitive landscape. Reviewer #4: There are no major comments for the article. 1. Authors should also explore factors such as research and development (R&D) investments, collaborations, and licensing agreements that shape the competitive landscape for the mAb market. 2. Add graphical abstract. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: PALLAPATI ANUSHA RANI Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Assessing concentration in the monoclonal antibody innovation market: A patent-based study PONE-D-24-54902R1 Dear Dr. Santos, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Satish Rojekar, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: Authors addressed all the comments mentioned in the revision. There are no further comments for this manuscript. Reviewer #4: Authors have addressed all the comments. There are no further comments for the revised manuscript. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #2: Yes: Pallapati Anusha Rani Reviewer #4: Yes: Kinjal Parikh ********** |
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