Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 19, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-24662Typologies of Childhood Traumatic Experiences and Associations with Internalizing Symptoms among Young Adults in Singapore: A Latent Class AnalysisPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Lee, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 31 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This study used Latent Class Analysis to identify typologies of childhood traumatic experiences and the associations of CTEs with five internalizing symptoms. The research has a certain academic value and can arouse readers’ interest, but there are still some problems that the author needs to pay attention to. 1. There are few references in recent five years, so it is recommended to check and update the literature to ensure the comprehensiveness and timeliness of the literature review. 2. In the introduction, the author mentions the use of Asian samples as one of the uniqueness and value of the study, but in the paper, there is less explanation of the comparison and possible mechanism of the similarities and differences between Eastern and Western subjects. 3. With more than twice as many women as men in the study sample and more than 10 times as many Chinese as non-Chinese, there is an imbalance in the grouping that may have had some influence on the results. 4. There are cases where writing is not rigorous, for example, page 4, latent class analysis (LCA) mixed with LCA; Page 8, The average monthly household income was 4.73 (SD=1.62; range 1-7). Lack of units of average monthly income. Reviewer #2: Summary This manuscript utilized a latent class analysis to explore childhood traumatic experiences and outcomes on several mental health domains. The authors specifically examined the four classes that emerged and their relationship to depression, anxiety, eating disorders, PTSD, and suicidality. This manuscript offers an important perspective of these experiences in an Asian population, which is necessary, given the saturation of research in Western samples. However, the manuscript can be improved by addressing the following comments. Most importantly, more nuanced in interpretation of findings is necessary, as well as specific attention to the method of analysis and interpretation of the classes conflated with different types of CTEs. Introduction - The intro discusses that CTEs are related to increased eating disorder rates, but I’m wondering if there will be an exploration of which EDs, given there is a diversity of them (e.g., anorexia to binge eating). This is also relevant for the methods section when the EDQ is discussed. I’m wondering if that has been used to assess all Eds, or those more related to body image and restriction, like anorexia or bulimia. However, EDs like Avoidant Restriction Food Intake Disorder (ARFID) and binge eating may not be as relevant. All this to say it may be important to classify or operationalize EDs more specifically throughout the manuscript. Methods - Women/men would be more appropriate if gender is being explored, whereas male/female would fit best if sex is the demographic variable of interest Results - It states “Insert Table 1, about here” on p. 12 of the manuscript. I’m unsure if this is an error or a formatting reference to Tables in the supplemental documents. Similar for tables and figures later on - The presentation of covariates relationship to the outcome variables would make sense to present prior to the linear regression results that contain the demographic variables as covariates - Is it assumed that the 4 classes provided by the LCA are mutually exclusive? It can be that participants can fall into the categories of high/multiple CTEs and also abuse/victimization, for example. How does that influence data classification and interpretation? - Is there a way to classify, or provide more information people who may fall in more than one typology as described by the LCA? Discussion - It is a bit confusing to refer to the four latent classes as different typologies of CTE, given that two refer to frequency (high vs low) and refer to type of trauma experienced (neglect or abuse). I’m wondering if there is a different way to classify those, or if more explanation is warranted as to how those are characterized into typologies of CTE. Typologies of CTE may render readers to think more about CTQ subscales (neglect, abuse, physical, sexual, etc). It might make more sense to discuss charcaterestics of CTEs. - As authors discuss, associations are not a direct path. Thus, implications about sequential relationship between the variables may not be fully appropriate given the method of analysis and what is missing to attribute causality or even directionality. For example, it could be that individuals with existing mental health challenges elicit greater neglect or abuse from caregivers due to the stress of caring for them, or it could also be the other relationship. That nuanced, bidirectional relationship should be explored given the method of analysis rather than assuming the direction can be exacted with associations alone. - The discussion of eating disorders can be made more nuanced and details given the diverse presentation of EDs (see my earlier comment in introduction) - The discussion of mediators are helpful, but again limited given the study design. - the discussion briefly mentions how these results differ from western studies. This is important, but also requires more explanation as to why that is, or how it’s believed that these may be different. - I’m unsure that physical, material deprivation is not related to negative outcomes at all. I would specify that this is related to PTSD only as negative findings, but not with depression and anxiety. I think more information regarding why authors can understand the link between neglect and depression/anxiety would be helpful. Reviewer #3: Thank you for providing me with this opportunity to review such a wonderful manuscript. Title: The authors are advised to replace childhood traumatic experiences with Childhood maltreatment or Adverse childhood events/experiences. Abstract: I miss to see the measurement/assessment tools used in the study. Review of Literature The literature review provides a broad overview of the global and regional significance of of identifying typologies of childhood traumatic experiences (CTEs) and their associations with CTEs with five internalizing symptoms in 1,042 university students in Singapore. It contextualizes the issue within the broader public health crisis and highlights the specific vulnerability of survivors of CTEs. Although the review covers many relevant studies, it could include more recent works in the field of childhood maltreatment and trauma (eg. https://doi.org/10.1186/s13034-021-00373-7, https://doi.org/10.1080/20008198.2021.2007730) Identification of the gap The manuscript correctly identifies the gap in the literature regarding childhood advance experiences. The focus on this specific population and the attempt to explore “Childhood Traumatic experiences”and their association with both externalized and internalized symptoms using latent classic analysis is commendable. The manuscript should however, clearly articulate why filling this gap is crucial for both academic knowledge and practical interventions. Methods The manuscript misses structural methodological practices (e.g., data entry and security, ethical considerations, design). The authors could consider including some of these subheadings. The study uses well-established and standardized instruments like the“Center for Epidemiological Studies Depression Scale” Beck Anxiety Inventory, which adds to the methodological rigor. In relation to each measure, the authors should discuss reliability in this specific context. It is shown that PTSD was assessed by a checklist. The authors could mention a specific name for this tool. What do the authors mean by PCL in the same paragraph? Childhood traumatic experiences could be replaced by either maltreatment or Advance Childhood experiences. Maltreatment or ACES might not necessarily be traumatic. Since the authors have opted to have a sub heading on the control variables, it would be beneficial `to have subheading on both Predictor and outcome variables as well. Results: The type of the regression model utilized in the analysis should be clearly stated in the analysis plan and table headings. I appreciate the fact that the current table 1 presents the mean scores for the main study variables. However, the manuscript misses information on the social demographic characteristics. resenting results on social demographic characteristics and intercorrelations between the continuous variables would benefit the manuscript. Discussion The discussion is well written Overall Assessment This manuscript addresses an important subject of advance childhood experiences among the university students in Singapore. The study’s use of established standardized tools and appropriate statistical analyses adds rigor to the findings. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Typologies of Childhood Maltreatment and Associations with Internalizing Symptoms among University Students in Singapore: A Latent Class Analysis PONE-D-24-24662R1 Dear Dr. Lee, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. 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PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: The authors addressed all concerns from the original submission. It has improved the manuscript and streamlined concerns. Reviewer #3: The authors have responded to all my concerns satisfactorily and I have no reservation about the publication of this manuscript in your journal ********** 7. 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