Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 9, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-44384The effect of peer relationships on college students' behavioral intentions to be physically active: the chain-mediated role of social support and exercise self-efficacyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. zhang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 17 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is a well articulated and well researched study. Its use of large sample size gives more credibility to the findings, as this can help reduce the subjectiveness of self-report. Your exploration of gender differences is also very commendable. However, I think you can delve more into why men outperformed women in exercise self-efficacy and intentions to engage in physical activity. For instance, could this be due to gender roles or societal bias (or other factors) whereby some societies expect men to be more physically fit than women and regard women as weaklings. Furthermore, you may need to define the term “good peer relationship” to further contextualize your work. For instance, on number 75 and following numbers, you wrote, 75 when studying issues related to physical activity behaviors [7, 8]. Most studies have found that good 76 peer relationships (?????????????????). It might help to define this concept even if it means putting a synonym in a bracket following it. It is important because this term may be relative. And what is good for a student may be bad for another. Fair enough that you reported the age of your participants. However, you can further enhance the study by reporting the effects of age, just as you did for gender. This is important because age can be a determining factor in peer relationship and behavioural intention. For instance, some persons may feel reluctant to associate with people outside their age bracket. So does age play any role in peer relationship in your study? Also age may be an influencing factor in students behavioural intentions to engage in physical activities. For instance, priorities may change due to age (older students may begin to prioritize academic/work obligations compared to the much younger ones). Reviewer #2: The study is well-designed and its objectives are clear; however, it has certain shortcomings that can be addressed in the review process. These include improving sample representation, expanding the theoretical framework, enhancing statistical analysis, and providing more specific and actionable recommendations. 1) The sample consists of only 514 students. While this number may be sufficient for certain statistical analyses, it does not adequately capture the diversity of university students, particularly across different cultures or universities with varied educational programs. 2) The study is based on theories; however, it does not provide sufficient details on how these theories practically support the hypotheses. 3) a- The study did not clarify whether the normality of the data distribution was verified using tests such as Shapiro-Wilk or Kolmogorov-Smirnov, which is essential when employing tests like t test or analysis of variance (ANOVA). b- Regression analysis was used to determine the relationship between variables; however, it was not clarified whether multicollinearity among the independent variables was assessed. c- Interaction analysis between independent variables (e.g., social support and peer relationships) was not conducted to determine whether the effects depend on the levels of other variables. 4) Although the limitations were mentioned, no clear solutions or future research plans were proposed to address them. Reviewer #3: Abstract 1. The following sentences are lengthy and complex, making comprehension difficult. "The behavioral intentions to physical activity have a positive impact on an individual's physical and mental health, social development, social adaptation, and study and work, and are also important in an individual's overall development." 2. In line 25, what does the author mean by the term ''support''? Does it mean social support? introduction 3. The statement of the problem failed to justify why this study was conducted. The research problem needs major revisions; it has to address the novelty of this study and why this study was conducted. 4. The introduction is too long. Why should H1 be examined in the current study if it has already been discussed in previous studies? 5. However, similar studies exist exploring peer influence on physical activity. The novelty must be clearly articulated—what does this study add beyond existing work? 6. No control for confounders—e.g., socioeconomic status, prior sports experience, or personality traits, which may also influence exercise self-efficacy. Results 7. Ambiguities in Results Presentation: It is not clear from which scale or questionnaire mobile phone addiction was derived. In Table 3 (Correlation Coefficients), the sentence "mobile phone addiction was negatively correlated with physical activity behavior" seems out of context. Figure 2 refers to "Pathways of mobile phone addiction on physical activity behavior." Discussion 8. The discussion and conclusion are very poorly written. No comparisons are made between this study and other studies. 9. Discussion & Practical Implications (Weak to Moderate) 10. How can universities practically strengthen peer relationships to improve physical activity? 11. Are there specific intervention programs that could be developed based on the findings? ********** 6. 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The effect of peer relationships on college students' behavioral intentions to be physically active: the chain-mediated role of social support and exercise self-efficacy PONE-D-24-44384R1 Dear Dr. zhang, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. 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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Having compared my previous review with the edits made by the authors, I am pleased to state that all my comments regarding the manuscript have been adequately addressed. Thank you. Reviewer #2: All comments have been answered. The researchers have reviewed the required comments and responded to them appropriately in the research. Reviewer #3: Appreciation is extended to the authors for their endeavors to enhance the quality of the submitted article. My comments and concerns have been addressed. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** |
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