Peer Review History
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PONE-D-24-40378Quantitative risk assessment and interventional recommendations for preventing canine distemper virus in captive tigers at selected wildlife stations in ThailandPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Suwanpakdee, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 23 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear authors, I have carefully read the article entitled “Quantitative risk assessment and interventional recommendations for preventing canine distemper virus in captive tigers at selected wildlife stations in Thailand”. I find both the topic chosen and the comprehensive way of analysing each factor, together and separately, to be excellent. Furthermore, I believe that the results of this article should be instituted as a comprehensive guide to prevent infections (not only CDV, but all pathogens using similar routes of transmission, and showing similar extra-animal resistance in enclosures where animals are kept). In general: 1. The study presents the results of original research. 2. The reported results have not been published elsewhere. 3. Experiments, statistics and other analyses are carried out to a high technical standard and are described in sufficient detail, although there are minor issues that need to be clarified. 4. Conclusions are adequately presented and supported by data. 5. The article is presented in an intelligible form and is written in standard English. 6. The research complies with all applicable standards of experimental ethics and research integrity. 7. The article complies with appropriate reporting guidelines and EU standards on data availability, although some additional data should be presented as supplementary material. Comments and suggestions: Line 25: add the scientific name of the tiger. Line 31: the phrase ‘ranging from 0.716 to 0.950 (5th to 95th percentile).’ seems unnecessary in the summary, as it does not provide much information as it does not contrast with other standard errors detected. Line 34: in relation to ‘interventions’, perhaps it could be specified that they are interventions in an epidemiological context in zoos/captive breeding stations. Line 39: in relation to ‘wildlife stations’, I would add zoos and private collections. Line 41: the phrase ‘ ..... and it can be applied to protect even non-captive tiger populations.’ should be removed from this summary. It is not specified what these interventions in the natural habitat should be, nor is it referred to throughout the article. Line 50: how is this probability found? is this an average probability? Explain or rephrase the sentence, as it gives the impression that all routes have the same probability of being entry routes. Line 59: ‘can also be contracted’ would be better replaced by ‘could be transmitted through’. Line 61: with regard to the phrase ‘the virus can even infect other carnivores like foxes, raccoons, bears, and large felids’, add the scientific names of the species that appear for the first time throughout the manuscript. Note that this virus can be detected in more than 60 species of species belonging to the Order Carnivora, and others outside this order. Line 68: a reference to support this sentence is missing. Line 69: a reference is missing to support this sentence. Line 72: it would be appropriate to update the information in Table S1, excluding stations without tigers. Line 72: scientific name of ‘white tigers’. Line 73: Revise the sentence ‘For conservation value’. Line 74: missing reference to support this sentence. Line 76: missing reference to support this sentence. Line 77: Put that it is in Siberia Amur Tigers (Pantera tigris sibirica). There is a missing reference to support this sentence. Lines 77-79: I think these sentences should be reworded to explain more briefly the outbreak in Siberian tigers. Lines 79-82: These sentences lack the proper context here. I would place them above where captive breeding centres are discussed, Line 98: On ‘eighty eight’, I would choose between presenting the numerical information in word or in number. Line 91: ‘suspected of CDV infection’ .... what is the prevalence?. There is a missing quotation for this sentence. Line 98: add ‘captives’ before ‘large felids’. Line 97-98: This sentence ‘The risk assessment results are helpful for the management of the quarantined animals, sick animal management, and viral particles spread into the environment.’ would be relocated to line 95, before ‘We used’. Line 105: put 7 instead of seven. Line 106: insert 2 instead of two. Line 112: define ‘semi-structured’. Lines 113-115: ‘We used various sources of information, including health and husbandry records of wildlife stations, laboratory databases, published literature, public databases, relevant websites, and standard guidelines.’ has this information been used to compile the survey? or what for? The survey used should be provided as supplementary material. Line 129: ‘housing’ and ‘Cages’ (Fig 2) are used indiscriminately for the same thing. Define each word in order to be able to identify the spaces. Or use one of them. Line 133: ‘CDV can enter to the wildlife stations through’. Line 135: add ‘because not all transmission routes can infect tiger cages’ after ‘feed.’ Line 136: add ‘Following this guide,’ before ‘Tigers....’ Line 139: This information is confusing: ‘The presence of domestic dogs and cats around wildlife stations and their access to tigers or other wild animals’ cages were also considered in the entry pathway.’, as in Fig 2 this pathway does not appear to be able to enter cages. Line 144: in relation to ‘tiger food’ is not considered as a netted pathway in Fig. 2. Line 146: in relation to ‘food tongs’ is not considered as a netted pathway in Fig. 2. Line 148: No comment on operators authorised to enter cages. Line 149: Replace ‘cubs’ with ‘cages’. Add ‘external’ before ‘human’. Line 156: In relation to what is stated in this paragraph, operators and outsiders are not allowed to contaminate the tigers' food? Line 161: add after ‘equations’ ‘for transmission through tigers, other wild or domestic animals, fences and human hands are presented in’ Line 166: replace ‘six pathways through CDV infection or contamination from the outer to the destined wildlife’ by ‘six pathways through which CDV can infect or contaminate from the outer to the destined wildlife station’. Line 171: perhaps it would be better to use ‘use the entry route to’ rather than ‘entered’. Line 173: add ‘pathways’ after ‘entry’. Line 184: perhaps in material and methods it would be interesting to homogenise the term ‘entry route’ by using either ‘entry pathway’ or ‘entry route’. Line 187: add ‘CDV infection’ before ‘risk’. Line 192: add ‘CDV infection’ before ‘risk’. Line 203: define the terms ‘efficacy’ and ‘coverage’ in relation to vaccination. Line 208: why have single-use gloves not been considered as a risk mitigation measure? Line 211: why have protocols for proper disinfection of equipment not been considered as a risk mitigation measure? Line 222: add ‘on entry routes I and II’. Lines 277-280: add all scientific names of the detailed species. Line 288: why only contaminated equipment has been considered and not infected wild animals? The results show that there are minimal differences between these two routes of entry, and furthermore, the rest of the routes are well below the first three considered. Line 309: How do you explain the negative impact on the risk of transmission of animal transports? Line 322: Figure 5 is poorly defined and it is very difficult to read the legends accompanying each graph. Line 328-331: in relation to vaccination, the discussion should highlight that vaccination with attenuated strains of CDV has a high risk of post-vaccination CDV in some species, and that risk mitigation is much more effective with test-based surveillance for infection in animals. Line 338: Missing definition in Figure 6, as in Figure 5. Line 342: Can you explain better how it is possible to test an animal for CDV at the beginning of the journey without waiting for the result of the test? if it is positive it cannot travel....... Rephrase the sentence to better explain this. Line 350: add (Fig 6A,B) at the end of the sentence. Line 401: bibliographical references 14, 15, 16, 17, 20, 21 and 22 do not appear in the text of the Discussion. Reference 23 is incorrectly numbered, as it appears after reference 25. References 18, 19, 23 and 24 are incorrectly numbered in the text as they appear after others with higher numbering. Line 407: In addition, disposable gloves should be worn when handling tigers. Line 408: I would suggest as above that CDV infected animals should be in second place of importance, as there is little difference with contaminated equipment, and furthermore, in the sensitive analysis it is more likely (almost twice as likely) to be a route of entry than contaminated equipment. Line 414: Reference 31 is on rhesus monkeys, and 33 on civets in China, so it must be a mistake that they are referencing a case in African wild dogs. Check. Line 416: I think it would be the second most important net route. If it is not, I would like a coherent justification. Lines 428-434: this paragraph is out of context here. It would be an introductory paragraph to the discussion. Also, references 18 and 19 are misnumbered in this position. Line 458: reference 39 is incorrectly numbered. Line 483: reference 24 is incorrectly numbered. Lines 497-498: add the scientific names of species that have not appeared in the text. Line 575: this reference is easy to find? if not, it should be replaced by another accessible one. Line 656: I could not find reference 39 in the text. ------- Reviewer #2: The manuscript addresses a critical and practical topic by examining the risk of canine distemper virus (CDV) infection in tiger populations, which is a key concern for the conservation of both captive and non-captive large felids. CDV poses a significant threat to these populations due to its high morbidity and mortality rates, making the study highly relevant to wildlife management and veterinary epidemiology. The authors’ focus on assessing CDV risk pathways and evaluating the effectiveness of combined preventive measures provides valuable insights for the development of targeted interventions to mitigate disease spread. The practical applications of the findings, particularly in adapting standard operating procedures for wildlife stations, have the potential to significantly contribute to tiger conservation efforts globally. However, while the topic is well-chosen and the manuscript offers noteworthy findings, I have some questions regarding the methodology and the clarity of certain sections of the study. Specifically, the definition and explanation of the entry pathways require further elaboration to ensure the model's outputs are fully comprehensible and reproducible. Additionally, I recommend that the manuscript undergoes a thorough review by a native English speaker or professional editor to address some language inconsistencies and enhance overall readability. Given these points, I recommend the manuscript for major revision. Below, I outline my detailed comments, highlighting areas that require further elaboration and improvement. Major comments: 1. It would be beneficial to include the questionnaire used in the interviews as supplementary material. Providing access to the full questionnaire would enhance transparency and offer a clearer understanding of the data collection process and its structure. 2. The rationale behind the selection of specific categories in the analysis requires further clarification. Why were these particular categories chosen, and how do they align with the risk assessment model's assumptions? - Line 158-160: i) CDV-infected tigers, ii) CDV-infected other wild animals, iii) dog or cat reservoirs, iv) CDV-contaminated human hands, v) animal-transported vehicles’ wheels or mudguards, and vi) equipment contaminated with CDV 2.1. Were all wild animals CDV-infected in the study (or “susceptible to CDV” Line 276)? Were there any non-infected wild animals that came into or could have come into contact with the tigers? 2.2. Regarding pathway ii), which wild animals are specifically included in this category? I recommend listing these animals along with their scientific names for clarity. 2.3. What is the practical and biological difference between categories i) and ii)? Why were wild animals and the domestic dog/cat categories separated into distinct biological pathways? 2.4. I have a similar question regarding pathways v) and vi). What is the practical and biological distinction between “v) animal-transported vehicles’ wheels or mudguards” and “vi) equipment contaminated with CDV”? Minor comments: Introduction Line 98: I suggest expanding the sentence as follows: “and preventing the spread of viral particles into the environment.” Materials and methods Line 105: I suggest expanding the sentence as follows: “seven station” Line 112-117: I understand that the data will be presented in detail later; however, to improve transparency, the "Data Collection" section could be expanded. For instance, it would be helpful to include details such as the total number of interviews conducted and the distribution of completed interviews across different stations. This additional information would provide a clearer understanding of the methodology. Line 135, 144, 146, 155: tiger food or feed? Results Line 276-279: I recommend providing the precise identification of species, including their scientific names, to ensure clarity and accuracy. Line 298: Were the dogs and cats also infected with CDV? Discussion Line 399-401: I suggest replacing the bacterial examples with studies focused on viruses. If the bacterial references remain in the text, I recommend revising the phrase '80% of germs can get on your hands and then go on to other things' to something like: 'can be transferred to hands during contact and potentially contaminate objects or surfaces’ Line 496-498: I suggest including the scientific names of the species that have not been mentioned previously in the text. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . 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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear authors, Thank you for your comments and answers. The manuscript is really much more comprehensible. I just think that Figures 4 to 6 are still not properly resolved. I guess this is more editing than revision. For my part, I think it is ready to be published (improving the quality of these figures), and that it will be very valuable information for any wildlife reserve, whether it is more or less naturalised. Thanks for the effort. Sincerely, Mónica Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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