Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 22, 2025 |
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The authors carried out a retrospective cross-sectional study to assess the prevalence of HIV drug resistance, its associated factors, and common mutations among individuals living with HIV in Northern Uganda. To enhance the scientific rigor of the manuscript, please find my comments and suggestions below: Abstract Background: Last sentence, please specify the place as opposed to saying “in the region” Methods: Similar comment for the methods section. In the methods section, it will be good to specify the population (everyone taking ART irrespective of age or what?). additionally, did you include everyone irrespective of ART duration? Data is a plural word and it should be followed by “were” as opposed to was. Please specify. How was HIVDR defined? It would begin this section by saying “We conducted a retrospective cross-sectional……………”. How did you characterize PLHIV? Be specific. Results: Is HIVDR testing targeted in your region? If yes, then the prevalence of 73.9% might not be surprising. What other variables did you account for in your adjusted analysis? Please include them. You can say “After accounting for ……………, long duration on ART was significantly associated with presence of HIVDR mutations (aOR=; 1.15 95%CI 1.05 -1.26 p=0.003).” Conclusion: replace “region” with a specific place being referred to. In the conclusion, there is no need of comparing with other previous findings. In this section, generally, you have to highlight your main findings and, the implication/s of those findings and end by giving recommendation/s. please revise this section accordingly. Introduction - In this section, I would first introduce the topic to the readers; in this case, HIVDR, give global and regional statistics. - Replace amongst with among Materials and Methods - Say “retrospective cross-sectional…..” - Include the age of the participants, e.g., PLHIV aged � 15 years, etc. - Define PCR - Data collection: How did you pre-test the data abstraction tool? Say data were (see my comment above) - Ethics approval and consent to participate should be the last part of your materials and methods section. Please revise. Data Analysis: state the test of normality used. Delete this part “The dependent variable was presence of at least one HIVDR mutation” and have a section in the materials and methods section where you will have “Operation definition” for your dependent/outcome/response variable. Results - “They had been on ART for a median 8 years”, who? - Define in the methods section, preferably under “Operational definition” how age was categorized and cite. - Table 1, I would name it “Baseline Participant characteristics and HIVDR”. Then, narrate the results of HIVDR also so you can guide the readers. On variable ‘HIVDR Indication”, why didn’t you aggregate 2nd and 3rd lines based on children, adolescents, and adults just the way you did for 1st line? In the footnote of the Table, please define all the abbreviations. - For Table 1, authors should conduct a chi-square test/Fisher’s exact test between HIVDR (yes or no) and other independent categorical variables and a Wilcoxon rank-sum test for two medians. Create 5 columns; column 1 Characteristics, column 2 Frequency, column 3 Presence of HIVDR, column 4 Absence of HIVDR, and column 5 p-value. We can now know whether the proportions and medians are statistically significant. - Presence of HIVDR mutations: define CI. Show these results in the Table “HIVDR mutations were observed across different drug classes in the same individuals where 55% (161) of all participants had resistance to at least two drug classes; 20% (59) had to at least three drug classes and 1% (03) of the participants had resistance across all the 4 drug classes. The commonest cross resistance was observed between NNRTI and NRTI drug classes (67%).” - HIVDR Mutations amongst participants: Replace the word “amongst with among” throughout the document. - I don’t think Figures 1 and 2 should be supplementary. They have to be in the main document. - Factors associated with HIVDR: replace the word spends with spent. In the abstract, you have to mention all the variables which were significant at adjusted analysis. For 3rd line, the CI is too wide; I hope your discussion accounted for this imprecision. Make sure all the p-values have three decimal places in Table 3. The footnote of all your Tables should define the abbreviations. Discussion - AZT including, say “included” - noted by the program- say HIV program - This does not read well “For the indication for the HIVDR test”, replace. Maybe “In case of the HIVDR test indication” - development HIVDR, here “of” is missing. - Delete respectively “prior regimen changes due to probable or confirmed HIVDR respectively” - Being a retrospective study, did you collect all the factors associated with HIV drug resistance e.g. CD4? You have only mentioned one limitation. Please include all the limitations inherent in retrospective studies. Conclusion - Don’t think 73.9% is lower. Here, tell us the meaning (low or high) of the proportions you have found without comparing with previous studies. Reviewer #2: The manuscript had described a relatively lower prevalence of HIVDR among PLHIV with non-suppressive ART than other studies. It's notable that longer duration of ART was associated with presence of HIVDR mutations. However, this study had some shortcomings and should be reversed properly, then later considered if it is suit to published in this journal Major concerns: The topic should be more clear to define the study population that the prevalence of HIVDR was not among all PLHIV but among those with non-suppressive ART. The study had included children and adolescent which might have different prevalence of virological failure, HIVDR and related factors, and deserve to be described and discussed disparately. Minor concerns: There was not any rates of virological failure among different groups, which would also be related to non-adherence. What was the prevalence of HIVDR among ART naive PLHIV in the regions. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Dear Dr. Francis, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 12 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Prevalence of HIV drug resistance, its correlates and common mutations among people living with HIV failing on ART in northern Uganda. A cross-sectional study. PONE-D-25-09503R2 Dear Dr. Francis, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Felix Bongomin, MB ChB, MSc, MMed, FECMM Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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