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| Original SubmissionFebruary 20, 2025 |
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Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: 1.Limited sample size (24 clones) and single-timepoint sampling may reduce the robustness of environmental response conclusions. 2.Potential batch effects (e.g., sampling in different years) are not addressed, which may confound expression patterns. 3.Lack of functional validation (e.g., CRISPR or qPCR) for hub genes weakens mechanistic claims. 4.Insufficient discussion on the evolutionary implications of cryptic northern refugia hypothesis mentioned in cited works. Reviewer #2: The manuscript states that sequence data will be available through DDBJ, but no project identifier or accession numbers are provided, so at the time of review, the data are not yet available to the public. The authors acknowledge that because their experiment included only 24 individuals from 12 populations, they cannot regard the associations they identify as proven, but instead these associations represent hypotheses to be tested in future experiments. Much more could be done to generate more specific and easily-tested hypotheses using the RNA-seq data described by the authors. The reported correlations (positive and negative) of module eigengene expression levels with principal components of the full set of SNPs are an interesting way of demonstrating a relationship between gene co-expression networks and SNP variation, but that analysis does not address obvious questions relevant to the overall effort to identify genes involved in local adaptation of sugi to different regions in Japan. For example, one question that could be addressed is whether any of the SNPs identified by the authors in the predicted RNA transcripts show association with any of the climate variables analyzed. 24 samples is not a lot, so these tests of association will not be powerful, but the analysis can be done, and the transcripts in which any putatively-associated SNPs are found examined for evidence of climate-related differential expression. Putative transcripts that show evidence of climate-related differential expression, and which also harbor climate-associated SNP variation, are doubly-implicated in a potential role in climate adaptation. Identifying up to a few hundred such candidates would be excellent preparation for a follow-up experiment to use targeted sequencing to measure gene expression levels and SNP genotypes in those candidate genes across a much larger population. These authors are well-prepared for such an experiment, given their past history of publications. Not all genes that show differential expression related to climate variable will harbor SNPs that are associated with climate variables, of course. Regulatory variation in how genes are expressed can be independent of structural variation in the products of the expressed genes. Gene Ontology enrichment analysis can be used to find shared metabolic, biological and cellular functions between the differentially-expressed transcripts and the transcripts bearing climate-associated SNPs, to address the question of whether the two different lines of evidence are both supporting the involvement of a common set of GO categories. Again, these results will not be solid proof of involvement, due to the small sample size, but they will represent discrete testable hypotheses to be explored in future work. Reviewer #3: This work on transcriptome differentiation in Cryptomeria japonica offers important new insights on local adaptation of this conifer species to various environmental circumstances in Japan. One strength of the work is the method of employing ordinary gardens and assessing gene expression as well as genetic diversity. I have certain comments arranged by parts below: Introduction: *The introduction gives appropriate background on the significance of local adaptation in trees and intraspecific genetic diversity. *In line 77, it would be strengthened by mentioning, in passing which genes or roles were found in earlier studies on environmental adaptability in C. japonica. Materials and methods: *Line 126's basis for gathering samples on hot summer days is scant. It would be helpful to clarify why for this work particular attention to capturing gene expression under high-temperature circumstances is especially crucial. *Information on the parameters used in bioinformatic programs (hisat2, psiclass, stringtie) is lacking in the part on "Constructing a reference transcript set" lines 138–151. Reproducibility depends on this material. *"Reads are under registration process" states line 143. Before publication, this should be revised including the accession numbers. Results: *The results' presentation is neat and unambiguous. *For readers not familiar with WGCNA nomenclature, a footnote outlining the meaning of MEgrey60, MEdarkred, etc., would be helpful in Table 2. *It would be helpful to provide more information on the particular genes involved, maybe in a supplementary table, especially lines 304–313 where modules linked with heat and light stress responses are discussed. Discussion: *The discussion is thorough and properly links the findings with the body of current knowledge. *The section "Ura-sugi had higher expression of terpenoid biosynthesis genes" (lines 391–415) addresses two potential ideas to help to explain the noted trends. They do not, however, arrive at a definitive answer regarding which is more likely. A closer examination or recommendations for next research projects capable of answering this issue would be rather helpful. *In line 467, "disrupting the existing adaptive relationships [53]" - more discussion on just how climate change might impact these particular adaptive relationships found in this study would be helpful. tables and figures: *For one to grasp the geographical distribution of the populace, figure 1 is simple and practical. *Though the tiny indicators could be challenging to identify, Figure 2 clearly displays the variations in gene expression patterns among genetic groupings. *As said before, Table 2 requires an explanatory comment for the module nomenclature. Particular suggestions for strengthening the manuscript: *Lines 126–131 in the Materials and Methods section should provide more specifics regarding the environmental conditions under sampling. While air temperature is stated, it would be helpful to include relative humidity data since this can greatly influence gene expression connected to water stress. *Lines 277–288 in the Results section indicate that although no GO word enrichment was seen when characterising genes enriched in the grey60 module, 24 genes linked to disease resistance are subsequently discussed. In absence of GO enrichment, how were these genes shown to be disease-related? Better explanation of this seeming paradox would help. *Lines 353–370 in the Discussion section, when addressing differential expression of disease resistance genes in omote-sugi, could be strengthened by tying these results to particular climatic or ecological data that might help to explain why this adaptation would be beneficial in areas where this genetic group predominates. *Without further information, line 404 states, "mapping of RNA-Seq reads predicts the existence of multiple transcripts of this locus". Perhaps in a supplementary table further details regarding these few transcripts and their putative functional relevance would be beneficial. This is a well-designed and carried out study with overall great value on the genetic basis of local adaptation in C. japonica. With the minor revisions suggested, it will be a significant contribution to the literature on forest genomics and plant adaptation. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Ross W. 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