Peer Review History
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PONE-D-23-24085Optimization Measures for Mitigating Water Surface Fluctuations in Large-Scale Water Conveyance AqueductsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Shi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 21 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please remove your figures from within your manuscript file, leaving only the individual TIFF/EPS image files, uploaded separately. These will be automatically included in the reviewers’ PDF. Additional Editor Comments: The two reviewers have provided detailed comments that require no further amplification from me. While Reviewer 1 recommends minor revision, the comments ranging from presentation style to the need for more comprehensive literature review and detailed discussions may require a major revision. Reviewer 2, however, recommends a rejection and points to deficiencies in the core of the content. Based on the two reviews, I would like to provide the authors one more opportunity through a major revision. I would urge the authors to respond to each and every reviewer comment, either through constructive rebuttals or by performing additional work or both. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In this article, the authors reported a typical three-dimensional hydrodynamic model with optimization of the tail pier structure. The simulation results demonstrate that a conical tail pier can effectively eliminate water surface fluctuations, reduce turbulent energy dissipation rates at the exit transition section, and maintain a relatively stable Froude number and flow pattern. In addition, a 15 m long tapered tail pier incurred less head loss with a small tapered tail pier. The research reported in this article is technically relevant and has certain practical application value. However, the paper is not well drafted. The authors are required to incorporate the following corrections/clarifications before the manuscript can be considered for publication. 1.Abstract: The abstract needs to do a better job of clarifying and justifying the significance of this study. What is the importance of doing this, and what is the novelty of this work? 2.Introduction: The authors do not provide a good bibliographical review of the current state of the art in this type of problem. We suggest that the authors conduct a good review and place the article in an international context. Please add some recent references in this context (the reference list only contain 20 articles). You need to better signify the importance of the problem and highlight the issues and their significance. The statement of aims is clear, but before this you need to add a gap analysis paragraph that justifies the need for your research. 3.Analysis of simulation results: Results and discussion suggestions are presented separately, and subheadings can be set for discussions under different working conditions. 4.Figures: The quality of all the figures needs improvement, and the target structure should be highlighted. 5.References: Please ensure that all references are relevant to the contents of the manuscript and that suitable recent references are added. 6.Language: Please review the English level and decide whether revisions are necessary. Reviewer #2: This work presents results from a study examining how tail pier structure could affect water level, energy loss, and water surface fluctuations in aqueducts. The authors test 4 different pier structures and compare the results to an assumed baseline pier shape to determine if there is a reduction in fluctuations. I recommend that the paper be rejected due to the limited scope, overstating of results, and lack of clarity in assumptions and methods. I have included some comments below that may help the authors in refining the content if they choose to modify and resubmit this paper. Major comments 1. The authors do not clearly define several very important terms that appear repeatedly in the paper, e.g., Karman vortex street (KVS), tail pier, twisted surface. I recommend explaining these terms in the Introduction. It would also be beneficial to briefly describe the cross-section structure of the aqueduct shown in Figs. 2 and 5. 2. The authors should present more instances of KVS occurring in aqueducts. 3. Lines 34-36: the design maximum flow is provided out of context. Has KVS occurred in this system? Has this system observed flows greater than 420 m3/s? 4. Lines 75-77: Why is it important to look at a transition section with a twisted surface? Please provide more clear terminology. It would be useful to include an outline here of what will follow in the paper, i.e., the contents of each section and a brief description of your methodology, results, and metrics of comparison. As it stands, the flow of the paper is hard to follow. 5. In the Introduction, establish a clear gap in the literature that you are trying to address with this work. The authors begin to do this only in Section 3.2 (lines 205-207) but do not clearly explain what a "twisted surface" is or why it is important to model that. 6. Figs. 2 and 5 are very unclear. Please improve the resolution of the image and choose a more clear font. 7. In Section 2 you describe a model of an aqueduct while in Section 3 you mention that you validate the model with measurements taken from a "typical aqueduct". Is the model from Section 2 (as well as its parameters and boundary conditions) based on this aqueduct described in Model 3? If that is the case, please specify in Section 2 that you are building the aqueduct model to represent a very specific existing aqueduct. If the model is not based on a specific aqueduct, how did you obtain the boundary conditions? 8. This study only runs simulations for a very specific case (for which initial and boundary conditions are specified). Therefore, any conclusions from these results cannot be generalized or applied to other aqueduct models or flow regimes. Broad statements in the Conclusion describing "excellent performance" are without justification. Much more robust analyses for a wide range of initial conditions, flow conditions, and aqueduct structures should be tested. Additionally, please add text describing future extensions of this work/avenues of research in the Conclusion section. 9. What is the "strong water blocking effect?" (from line 311 and Fig. 14) and what causes it? 10. The PLOS data policy requires that authors must make their data fully available without restriction. Please consider hosting the model, real aqueduct topology and parameters, and code on a public repository such as Github or in the Supplemental Materials. Minor comments: 1. Please standardize the spelling of Karman vortex street throughout the paper. 2. Fig. 11 is never described in the text. 3. Figs. 8 and 9 are incorrectly numbered. 4. Line 96: Was the 3D model really constructed at a scale of 1:1? 5. Fig 5: Fig 5 only shows the locations of Sections A and B, it does not show a clear layout of the measuring points of the model as suggested by the caption. 6. Line 37: What does "slapping and pulling beams" mean? 7. Define CFD, RNG when they first appear in the text. 8. There are too many terms to describe the different tail pier structures - "model condition" (line 215), "working condition (Figs 6-9), "condition", "mode" (Section 4). Please standardize the terminology. ********** 6. 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PONE-D-23-24085R1Study on optimization measures for water level fluctuation of large water conveyance aqueductsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Shi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 27 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Auroop R Ganguly Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments : Reviewer 1 had relatively minor comments, but the comments from Reviewer 2 are clear and many underlying issues remain unresolved in the revised version. The authors may want to focus on the new comments from Reviewer 2. The comments are clear and require no further amplification from me, but I would recommend the authors take them very seriously and address (and/or if applicable, rebut) them. A strong response to the comments from Reviewer 2 is a prerequisite for acceptance. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: No ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: In the revised manuscript, I acknowledge the authors' effort to add more information to the Introduction as per the reviewers' past comments. However, it appears to me that the authors have not made many other significant efforts to address the suggestions and guidance provided in the previous round of comments. As an example, even though the authors have responded to comments from both reviewers stating that modifications have been made (regarding adding more references to the paper and standardizing the spelling of the core term "Karman Vortex Street"), it seems that these changes were not actually made. No additional references were added and spelling inconsistencies are still present throughout the paper. Additionally, I was unable to view any tracked changes in the revised manuscript. I strongly encourage the authors to very carefully go through the paper and make revisions to make this paper worthy of publication. 1. In the previous round of revisions, the authors were asked to standardize the spelling and capitalization of the critical "Karman Vortex Street" term throughout the paper, and while the authors claim to have addressed this issue in their responses, the same errors persist (line 15 in the abstract, line 40, line 95, line 98 ...). Please take care to standardize these spellings. 2. Abstract line 22: "a conical tail pier performs better in eliminating water surface fluctuations": performs better than what other tail pier shapes? 3. Abstract line 26: "a shorter, 15-meter conical tail pier incurs less head loss": less head loss compared to what? 4. The word "Conditional" has been spelled "Conditionl" throughout the paper 6. I suggest reformatting each reference very carefully. Perhaps consider using a reference management software to standardize the format. The formatting is very inconsistent and the references themselves are hard to track and sometimes wrong - for example, the first paper should be from "Chinese Journal of Nature" and not "Nature Journal." 7. I think the introduction needs to be made much stronger and the authors should be very careful and clear with the details. For example, the "Tacoma Canyon Bridge" in reality is named the "Tacoma Narrows Bridge." Also, the current format of the introduction is difficult to follow - lines 56-62 are not connected to the KVS specifically. And in lines 71 and 79 - what is the "numerical simulation conditional" and the "physical conditional test"? You use the term "conditional" throughout the paper but I do not see a clear explanation of what that means. Finally, I think adding more studies, as the other reviewer suggested, is critical to improve the trustworthiness and quality of this paper. 8. Line 56: "South to North Water Transfer Project" located where? Please remember that PLOS One has an international readership. 9. Line 139: N-S is Navier Stokes equation? 10. In Table 1 and 2 - please add the unit of measure for measured and simulated water depth ([m] I presume) 12. Line 119: add a citation for Rhino software 13. The paper contains two many modeling specifics (e.g., lines 107 - 115, line 175- 178, lines 220 - 225, etc.) that should be instead placed in a table or in the Supplmental Materials. They do not need to be in the body of the manuscript. 14. Section 3 Conditional Validation: where is the description and figure of condition 1? 15. I suggest combining Figs 6 - 9 into into one figure and replacing the text describing each condition (lines 255 - 269) with a table containing a summary of this information. 16. Would it be possible to use a different color scheme for Fig 10 to clearly show the KVS effects? It is a little unclear now since the yellow, blue, and green are not easy to differentiate. 17. The authors have not addressed my previous comment: The PLOS data policy requires that authors must make their data fully available without restriction. Please consider hosting the model, real aqueduct topology and parameters, and code on a public repository such as Github or in the Supplemental Materials. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-23-24085R2Study on optimization measures for water level fluctuation of large water conveyance aqueductsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Shi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 28 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Auroop R Ganguly Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments : The authors are requested to make a strong attempt to address the comments from Reviewer 2. The comments are clear and many have persisted across revision cycles, and need no further amplification from me. The acceptance of this manuscript is contingent on addressing the comments from this reviewer. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: No ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: I thank the authors for the quick turn around time and responses to my comments. Please find more comments below. 1. In response to my previous comment: "Abstract line 22: "a conical tail pier performs better in eliminating water surface fluctuations": performs better than what other tail pier shapes?" the authors have changed the line in the abstract to "conical tail pier performs better than prismy tail pier in eliminating water surface fluctuations." Are you sure "prismy" is the right word? It does not seem like standard English and you do not mention the word "prismy" anywhere else in the manuscript. 2. Line 27: why did you choose 15 and 35-meter conical tail pier specifically? Are these common tail pier lengths? Please either generalize the text (e.g., just say short or long) or explain why you chose these numbers. 3. Thank you for adding more references. I think the Introduction is now more comprehensive and explanatory. However, I still recommend finding and adding credible references to strengthen at least the following sentences because they introduce important definitions and examples: - both the first and second sentences in the Introduction (line 36-38, line 38-40). - Line 51-56 4. While the Introduction is more comprehensive now, it is still very disjointed. E.g., in lines 52-56, the authors claim that one can apply a number of practical engineering measures to suppress the generation of the Karman Vortex Street. This sentence is immediately followed by what I believe is a description of the authors' testing scenario. Examples of practical engineering measures only appear starting line 102. In the middle of these two sections is the seemingly random placement of a section on studies on open channel turbulence. I stress, just like in my previous round of comments, that the authors should carefully revisit the format of the Introduction. The content is now stronger than it was previously, but this ordering is confusing and hard to follow. 5. Line 151: add a reference for Rhino. 6. Thank you for creating Table 3. I suggest following PLOS One table formatting requirements to make the table a little easier to read and minimize the number of revisions going forward. https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/tables Adding cell borders will help. You could also make it simpler to read by removing the long sentences in "Condition Description" and instead creating separate columns for length, upstream higher bottom width, upstream lower bottom width, etc. I will leave that up to you. 7. Lines 395-398: I'm afraid I don't understand this wording. Do you mean that the Karman Vortex Street only causes flow fluctuations in the aqueduct body section and exit transition section and has no effect on the other sections? 8. Lines 406-409: I suggest rewording this. "The effect is good" is not suitable language for an academic journal. 9. Line 410-411: please connect these lines back to the Karman Vortex Street. 10. Regarding references: Thank you for improving the references. Again, to minimize further revisions, I suggest that you closely follow the PLOS One reference requirements for every single reference: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-references You will notice that the required ICMJE reference style requires abbreviated journal names, e.g., Measurement Science and Technology should probably be written as Meas Sci Technol (please double check that). The PLOS One guidelines also specify how to write references for articles not written in English. 11. Since the journal does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, the language should be significantly improved before it can be published. I suggest submitting the paper to an English-speaking third party to improve the grammar and choice of words used throughout the paper. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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