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| Original SubmissionApril 25, 2024 |
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If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Based on the article, I would say that it is generally able to be published in Journal PLOS ONE, but with some minor revisions to enhance its clarity and readability The article presents a qualitative study that explores the social and cultural factors influencing the transmission of brucellosis in a rural community in Uganda. The study's methodology is sound, and the authors collected rich data through focus group discussions, key informant interviews, and field observations. Also, the findings suggest that cultural beliefs and practices play a significant role in the transmission of brucellosis, particularly in relation to the handling of cattle and the consumption of raw milk. The study highlights the importance of gender roles in disease transmission, as women are more likely to be involved in tasks that increase their exposure to brucellosis. Furthermore, the article also identifies gaps in communication and education regarding brucellosis prevention and control, which may contribute to the neglect of human involvement in disease transmission. On the other hand, the study's findings are consistent with existing literature on zoonotic diseases and the importance of addressing cultural and social factors in disease transmission. The article is a qualitative research study, and the authors seem to have conducted a thorough analysis of the data. However, the writing style is quite dense and could be improved for clarity and readability. The use of technical terms, such as "zoonotic diseases" and "omusujja gw'ente," may not be familiar to non-experts in the field. It would be helpful to provide definitions or explanations for these terms. The study's findings are presented in a descriptive manner, but it would be beneficial to provide more specific statistics or numbers to support the claims. The authors mention methodological limitations, but they do not provide enough details about their approach. It would be helpful to include more information about the research design, data collection methods, and sampling procedures. However, the study has some limitations, including its small sample size (only three sub-counties were selected) and its reliance on self-reported data. the study provides valuable insights into the social and cultural factors influencing the transmission of brucellosis in a rural community in Uganda. The findings highlight the importance of addressing cultural beliefs and practices that contribute to disease transmission, as well as improving communication and education regarding brucellosis prevention and control. Reviewer #2: The manuscript entitled as “Gender and Cultural Aspects of Brucellosis Transmission and Management in Nakasongola Cattle Corridor in Uganda” has been submitted to PLOS ONE for the publication. The manuscript present good review information on Gender and Cultural Aspects of Brucellosis Transmission in Uganda. This manuscript is nicely written with good scientific data, proper literature and explanations. Authors have tried to cover all necessary information related to the topic of manuscript. I would like to recommend this manuscript with one comment. The authors can use the following articles to compare with their findings and discuss more about brucellosis in other countries and can include new treatment methods in the discussion. https://doi.org/10.3389/fchem.2022.890252 https://doi.org/10.1007/s12011-019-01798-0 This will give complete better insight of selected topic. Reviewer #3: Gender and Cultural Aspects of Brucellosis Transmission and Management in Nakasongola Cattle Corridor in Uganda Abstract: Results. It is common knowledge that practices such as consumption of raw milk, assisting in births rooted in social norms aid in transmission of brucellosis. What the study found on these in the study area is not clear in the abstract. Conclusion: The issues raised are quite critical in brucellosis transmission and control. However, how these apply in the study were not elucidated. Affiliations 1 & 2 should be well separated. Introduction: The authors were unable to elucidate clearly the importance of ‘gender’ in the ‘Social Ecological Model of Human Behaviour (SEMHB)’ theoretical framework in creating a … that resulted in undertaking the study. While ‘vulnerability and social construction’ may be clear to me, the gender dynamics is not. The authors may wish to add a few lines improve the understanding of everyone. Lines 66 and 67: ‘Brucella melitensis’ should be correctly spelt. ‘Brucella’ in the three different species mentioned should start with upper cases. Line 77: ‘…existing literature have…’ There were more than one literature named. Lines 127 – 129: Please, recast the sentence. Line 146: ‘40-45 minutes’ should be written with spaces ’40 - 45 minutes’ Line 269: Should read ‘Milk keeps us warm, healthy and not…’ Although quoting a source, the whole excerpt was rephrased and therefore should be consistent. Same as line 282 : ‘until its’ should be ‘until it is’ 334: ‘.. a lot effort ..’ should read ‘.. a lot of effort ..’ 361: ‘..a mulalo women..’ ‘..a mulalo woman..’ Discussion 429 ; ‘This conquers’ should be written ‘This concurs’ 443: Kansime et al, 2014 (32) should be written in conformity with other citations in the manuscript: Kansime et al. (32) 497: ‘,,understand the intended question’ to read ‘...understood the intended question’ Conclusion: The conclusion should reflect the findings of the work. The statements in the conclusions sound general and did not reflect their connection to the work. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Dear Dr. Kulabako, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please ensure that you have clarified your methods as requested. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 07 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: N/A ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** Reviewer #2: Dear authors According to the amendments made, this manuscript is suitable for publication. Best wishes Reviewer #3: The authors have effected the corrections pointed out. The manuscript has improved and can be published in the present state. Reviewer #4: To editor, This manuscript explores a critical public health issue that affecting human health negatively. The study highlighted on the brucellosis transmission vulnerability with gender dynamics, and sociocultural construction that can inform targeted interventions for the development to control measures and management strategies that will contribute to improve health outcomes for affected population especially the pastoralist communities in Africa. That said, I would like to offer the following comments and suggestions: 1. Abstract In line 35 and 36, the author write about the use of deductive and inductive approaches is overlapping. 2. Introduction Okay. 3. Methods Methods section is well written. - However, the author need to revise about the sample size part. The authors did not explain about the justification of 4 FGDs and 15 KIIs scientifically. In addition, 1 FGD conducted with combined group but why it was not equal or shy it was combined is not explained. As the study focused on the gender dynamics, vulnerability and social construction in the management of brucellosis, the justification of sampling size and sampling strategy would be more evident. - Additionally, the author can revise it as the study population and sampling strategies. Because, how the study participants recruited, participants rights, interview guidelines were developed did not describe. Better to revise it into separate part like sample size and sampling strategies and then data collection technique and procedures. Additionally, it would be more evident if the authors follow the COREQ. - In line191, the author present ‘the context and interpretation……..enhanced by observation ….and field notes made during the interview…. is not mentioned in the data collection as a technique. In line 171-172, the author present that key points were brought up….and triangulated with observation which should move into data analysis. - The triangulation issues are not only confined with the comparing data with key points (line 171-172), it would be participants, methods like discussion data with interview and/or observation. Suggesting to follow a citation. - Line 175-179 suggesting move to the end of discussion as this writing are seemed as limitations of study. - Data analysis part is not articulated well. How the audio data transcribed, familiar with the data, code list developed and updated are not explained? The authors started directly with the thematic analysis and then talk about the Nvivo transformation and so on. - Additionally, how the code list entail following both deductive and inductive way? Need to explain. 4. Results Okay but I would ask to include the interview number in the quotes. 5. Discussion - In line 435, the authors just mentioned about SEMHB model but did not elaborated any in the discussion section. Although the findings are mostly interlinked with the model but did not discussed. - In line 505, the author write: To address this limitation, ‘I’ developed… This is might be typo. Because in the methods section, the author addresses the term ‘We’. Need to revise one addressing style. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #2: Yes: Dr Seyed Mostafa Hosseini Reviewer #3: Yes: Akwoba Joseph Ogugua Reviewer #4: Yes: Dr. Md. 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