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PONE-D-24-34525Investigating the Influence of teachers’ constructivist self-efficacy on their practice of Constructivism in Ghanaian language instructionPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Nyamekye, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ==============================Academic Editor: Introduction: 1. Authors should clearly present the problem and define the scope of teacher efficacy in constructivist teaching. 2. They also need to strengthen the introduction with more recent data, evidence, or updated references is shared. 3. Revise or remove redundant content in the introduction (e.g., structure listing) is noted in both. Literature Review: 1. Authors should include more recent studies to keep the review current. 2. They should also detail the context of constructivist practices, particularly in specific regions like Ghana. 3. Considering focusing on studies linking teacher self-efficacy with constructivist methods is highlighted as important. Methods: 1. Authors should clearly justify choosing mixed-methods design and more detail on the research procedure is present in both reviews. 2. Try to include more detail on data analysis methods and how both qualitative and quantitative data are integrated and are consistent. Results: 1. Authors should provide additional participant data and detailed context on qualitative data collection and analysis. 2. The use of visual aids (tables or figures) to present findings is suggested. Discussions & Conclusions: 1. It would be effective if the authors split the “discussion and conclusion” section into two independent sections and include detailed limitations and implications are common. 2. The need for clearer contributions, comparisons with past research, and more updated references are noted. 3. There is an urgent need to discuss alternative explanations and justify the interpretation of results. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 19 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Ashraf Atta Mohamed Safein Salem Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=ba62/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_title_authors_affiliations.pdf Additional Editor Comments: Thank you to the authors for selecting a topic that I believe will capture the interest of many readers. However, there are several aspects of the manuscript that need to be refined and completed. Below are specific concerns that should be addressed: Introduction: 1. Authors should clearly present the problem and define the scope of teacher efficacy in constructivist teaching. 2. They also need to strengthen the introduction with more recent data, evidence, or updated references is shared. 3. Revise or remove redundant content in the introduction (e.g., structure listing) is noted in both. Literature Review: 1. Authors should include more recent studies to keep the review current. 2. They should also detail the context of constructivist practices, particularly in specific regions like Ghana. 3. Considering focusing on studies linking teacher self-efficacy with constructivist methods is highlighted as important. Methods: 1. Authors should clearly justify choosing mixed-methods design and more detail on the research procedure is present in both reviews. 2. Try to include more detail on data analysis methods and how both qualitative and quantitative data are integrated and are consistent. Results: 1. Authors should provide additional participant data and detailed context on qualitative data collection and analysis. 2. The use of visual aids (tables or figures) to present findings is suggested. Discussions & Conclusions: 1. It would be effective if the authors split the “discussion and conclusion” section into two independent sections and include detailed limitations and implications are common. 2. The need for clearer contributions, comparisons with past research, and more updated references are noted. 3. There is an urgent need to discuss alternative explanations and justify the interpretation of results. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Recommendation: Major revision Detailed Comments: 1. Introduction: 1) The manuscript presents a clear problem statement, emphasizing the resistance of teachers to educational change and the need to explore teachers’ sense of efficacy in the context of constructivist teaching. However, more specific data or updated references that quantify the extent of teacher resistance or highlight the impact of teacher-centered learning on student outcomes should be provided. 2) While the introduction hints at the study’s practical implications, it should more explicitly address how this research advances the theoretical understanding of constructivist teaching and teacher self-efficacy. What new insights does it offer? Such as theoretical advancements, methodological innovations, or new empirical evidence. 3) The last paragraph of the introduction, which outlines the structure of the paper, is somewhat redundant and less informative. Consider deleting the section that merely lists the content of the forthcoming sections. Instead, conclude the introduction with a compelling summary that emphasizes how the study’s design and methodology are specifically tailored to address the research questions. 2. Literature Review: 1) Section 2.1: While the overview is thorough, consider integrating more recent studies to ensure the review is current. Additionally, discuss how these constructs of constructivism have been specifically applied or adapted in the Ghanaian educational context or similar settings. 2) Section 2.2: Please include studies that have specifically examined the relationship between self-efficacy and the implementation of constructivist teaching methods. This will provide a more direct link to the research focus. Additionally, provide a more detailed classification and elaboration of previous studies, including the measurement methods used and the background of the participants (e.g., college teachers, middle school teachers). This detail will help to identify and articulate the gaps in the existing literature more effectively. 3) Section 2.3: Please end with a brief summary of how the literature review informs the research questions and the study’s hypotheses. 3. Methodology: 1) Section 3.1: Lack a rationale for choosing this particular mixed-methods design over other possible designs. Discuss how this approach specifically addresses the research questions or hypotheses. Besides, the research procedure mentioned (Thus, in the context of ……) is too general, please add more details here or put the “research procedure” as an independent section. 2) Consider adding a section on data analysis methods, detailing how the quantitative and qualitative data will be analyzed separately and then integrated in the overall interpretation of results. 4. Results: 1) Provide more data about the participants, for example the mean value, SD, etc. 2) Provide more context on how the qualitative data were collected and analyzed. Detail the methods used for data collection (e.g., interviews, focus groups) and the data analysis process. Besides, consider using visual aids, such as tables or figures, to summarize key themes or findings from the qualitative data. 5. Discussions & Conclusions: 1) Structurally, please separate “Discussion and Conclusion” into two independent parts, in which discussion should include both limitations (Section 6) and implications (Section 7). 2) Expand on how this study contributes to or diverges from previous research, highlighting its unique contributions. Again, the references used in this part is too old to clarify your novel contributions to this field. Reviewer #2: My thanks to the editor and authors for the opportunity to review this manuscript, which reports on the relationship between teachers self-efficacy regarding teaching using constructivism principles and the actual practice in the classroom in the Ghanaian context. This should be of interest to readers concerned with how teachers respond to national policy changes regarding pedagogy, and the qualitative component offers insight for relative success in such efforts. There are several areas that I believe could be elaborated on to make the manuscript stronger. 1. The relationship between self-efficacy and instructional strategies in general is demonstrated in the literature review, but could the authors elaborate on the relationship between SE and respective forms of constructivism? Are there empirical studies operationalizing constructivist teaching in its various forms and show a prior relationship? The literature presents how SE is tied to teachers adopting new technologies and other practices, but there could be a stronger link made to SE and constructivism. 2. The authors cite a source indicating 6-12 participants as a standard for saturation in qualitative research, yet themselves collect data from 61. There is no standard for saturation in qualitative work, as satisfying that condition depends on the nature of the question, data type, and analysis. Can the author(s) clarify the decision-making process for including 61 participants and explicate how the specific qualitative data and analysis approach led to satisfaction that major insights had been exhausted? 3. The authors adapt two existing scales for use. Can the authors elaborate on the adaptation process and include sample items from the instrument? It is unclear from the manuscript how much change was made to the original instruments and what possible impact that might have on construct validity. This is particularly important for the CLES, as the authors only use 3 of 5 original dimensions and use those as proxies for the 3 types of constructivism. Readers may benefit from understanding what types of questions relate to respective forms of constructivism. 4. Can the authors elaborate on the semi-structured interview format and types of questions that were used to operationalize the various forms of constructivist teaching explored here? The nature of the qualitative data overall requires further explication, as well as the analytical process adopted. 5. In section 4.2, citations are needed for the adopted PLS-SEM analytical method used in the study. 6. The qualitative results reporting could also be more nuanced, as it is unclear how prevalent or salient particular insights are across the sample here and their representativeness for the study context overall. 7. Could the authors discuss alternative explanations or adjust the strength of the claim that the qualitative findings explain the unexpected results in the quantiative component? There might be other explanations (e.g., sample size, sample selection) or other factors influencing results. For example, most of the respondents indicated that hey had 1-5 years of teaching experience. The authors might elaborate on the relative agency of young teachers in this school system and consider if the minimal evidence for implementation is not a partial function of limited agency. Overall, the conclusions and implications as stated here are not sufficiently supported by the data and study limitations should be addressed. 8. There are a few formatting issues with citations, as well as a Creswell out of alphabetical order at the bottom. 9. The discussion adopts a first person singular voice briefly before entering first person plural. I suggest adopting a consistent voice throughout. ********** 6. 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Investigating the Influence of teachers’ constructivist self-efficacy on their practice of Constructivism in Ghanaian language instruction PONE-D-24-34525R1 Dear Dr. Ernest Nyamekye, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #3: Manuscript Number: PONE-D-24-34525R1 Manuscript Title: Investigating the Influence of teachers’ constructivist self-efficacy on their practice of Constructivism in Ghanaian language instruction The study is beneficial and timely for educational discourse within the Ghanaian context. It seeks to improve the policy and practice in Ghana. However, certain aspects of the paper need to be tightened and reviewed to improve the quality. Reviewer 1 and 2 raised concerns that needs to be addressed. Methodology The data analysis of the qualitative data needs further elaboration. The interpreted meaning, synthesis and summary of the analysis for presentation are missing in the sub-section. The reviewer 2 in number 4 raised an issue on the elaboration on the semi-structured interview format and types of questions that were used to operationalised the various forms of constructivist teaching explored in the study. This has not been addressed by the authors in the study. Results The point 2 raised by reviewer 1 is very significant to the quality of the manuscript and the authors are supposed to address that. The reviewer 2 raised an issue of detailing the qualitative results of the study. This has not been addressed and needs to be given the necessary attention by the authors. The point 7 raised by reviewer 2 needs to be addressed by the authors. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #3: Yes: Dr Enock Swanzy-Impraim **********
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