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| Original SubmissionSeptember 24, 2024 |
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If applicable, please specify in the figure caption text when a figure is similar but not identical to the original image and is therefore for illustrative purposes only. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: General Comment: The manuscript, "Psychophysiological correlates of science communicators," addresses a novel and important topic by examining how science communicators' physiological responses—specifically heart rate variability (HRV)—relate to their communication skills during high-stress situations like live television interviews. The study's ecological design is a strength, and the findings provide useful insights into the intersection of stress management and effective science communication. However, several areas could benefit from deeper analysis and clarification, particularly regarding the physiological measures, gender-related differences, and methodological approaches. Specific Comments: HRV Analysis and Physiological Insights: The use of HRV as a measure of autonomic nervous system regulation is appropriate, but the interpretation of HRV metrics (LF, HF, SDNN) in the context of stress and performance requires further detail. Specifically: Low-frequency (LF) and high-frequency (HF) components are often debated in terms of their association with sympathetic and parasympathetic activity. The manuscript presents LF as a measure of sympathetic and parasympathetic activity and HF as predominantly parasympathetic, but this simplification can be misleading. More discussion is needed on the controversial nature of the LF/HF ratio as a marker of sympathovagal balance, including the challenges raised in the literature (e.g., Billman, 2013; von Rosenberg et al., 2017). The manuscript would benefit from expanding the explanation of how SDNN (Standard Deviation of NN intervals) relates to overall autonomic flexibility and stress resilience, particularly in high-performance communicators. The role of total power and its relationship to stress recovery and resilience could be elaborated to connect better with the broader literature on HRV and stress response. While the two-dimensional analysis of HRV (HF and LF components) is innovative, the rationale behind introducing the Low-High Frequency Normalized Difference (LHFND) index should be clarified. What advantages does LHFND offer over traditional metrics, and how does it better capture the nuances of autonomic balance in this context? Providing real-world examples or literature references where this approach has been beneficial could strengthen the argument. Gender Differences in HRV and Communication: The gender differences in HRV responses, particularly in RR intervals, total power, and LF/HF ratios, are notable. However, the manuscript does not sufficiently address the physiological basis for these differences, nor does it critically examine the broader implications of these findings. Suggestions for improvement include: A deeper exploration of why female communicators exhibited higher HRV and lower heart rate ranges. This could be tied to literature on gender-specific responses to stress, as well as possible hormonal influences (e.g., differences in parasympathetic tone related to estrogen). While the manuscript attributes the emotionality scores to gender, it could benefit from a discussion of social and cultural factors that might influence these responses. For instance, women in public-facing roles might experience additional pressure to perform well, which could influence their physiological stress responses. There is a mention that women received more public speaking training than men, which might explain part of their better performance in some HRV parameters. The manuscript should expand on how this training might influence stress regulation and whether this reflects a gendered coping strategy in high-stress communication contexts. Jury-Based Evaluation Methodology: The evaluation of science communicators by a jury of university students introduces potential biases, especially given the age, experience, and expertise differences between the evaluators and the communicators. To strengthen the credibility of the evaluation method: Discuss the potential limitations of using a relatively inexperienced audience to assess expert science communicators. How might the evaluators' lack of experience influence their perception of clarity, authoritativeness, and engagement? Would more seasoned professionals provide different evaluations? Consider discussing alternative or additional methods for evaluating communication skills, such as peer review by fellow science communicators or feedback from the broader public. Comparing the results from different types of audiences could provide a richer understanding of how communication effectiveness varies across contexts. The Principal Component Analysis (PCA) revealed two main dimensions—content and performance. It would be helpful to explain whether these components are consistent with findings from previous research on science communication, and how these dimensions might inform future training programs for communicators. Statistical Analysis and Presentation: While the manuscript provides thorough statistical analysis, some sections could be more accessible to readers unfamiliar with advanced statistical methods: The multivariate analyses and repeated measures ANOVA results are crucial, but the interaction effects between communication performance (authoritativeness, clarity) and HRV components would benefit from clearer visual representation. For example, a summary table or diagram illustrating the key interaction effects (e.g., between authority levels and HRV changes across phases) could make the results more digestible. The manuscript uses Box’s Test of Equality of Covariance Matrices and Mauchly's Test of Sphericity but does not explain their implications for the reader. Providing a brief explanation of why these tests are relevant (e.g., testing assumptions for ANOVA) would improve the statistical transparency of the study. Broader Implications and Applications: The findings have potential practical applications, especially for developing training programs for science communicators. However, the manuscript could elaborate on how these results could be translated into real-world practice: Training for Science Communicators: The study suggests that perceived authoritativeness and clarity help reduce stress responses. How might training programs integrate biofeedback techniques to help communicators manage their autonomic responses during high-stress events? Discuss the potential for HRV biofeedback to become part of standard training for public speakers. Future Research Directions: The study opens the door to many avenues for further investigation. How might these findings apply to other types of science communication settings (e.g., social media or scientific conferences)? Additionally, how do communicators’ HRV responses differ when engaging with more ideologically polarized or skeptical audiences, as these are common challenges in science communication? Limitations: The limitations section touches on key aspects like sample size and the institutional context, but it could be expanded to discuss other important limitations: Cultural factors: The study focused on Italian communicators. Science communication styles and stress responses may vary by culture, so the generalizability of the findings might be limited. Addressing this and suggesting cross-cultural studies could strengthen the manuscript. Ecological Validity: While the live television setting is a strength, it may not fully capture the range of stressors experienced in other science communication scenarios, such as hostile public debates or high-pressure academic presentations. Expanding on this point and proposing ways to test these findings in different environments would provide more comprehensive insight. Conclusion: This manuscript presents important and original findings on the psychophysiological correlates of science communication expertise. The data on HRV in relation to performance skills like clarity and authoritativeness are insightful and could have significant implications for the training of science communicators. However, the manuscript would benefit from deeper analysis of the HRV metrics, clearer presentation of the statistical interactions, and a more nuanced discussion of gender differences. By addressing these areas, the manuscript could offer a more comprehensive and impactful contribution to both the fields of psychophysiology and science communication. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Psychophysiological correlates of science communicators. PONE-D-24-40963R1 Dear Dr. Cerasa, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Rasool Abedanzadeh, Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Evaluation of Revised Manuscript PONE-D-24-40963R1 I appreciate the authors' thorough and thoughtful revisions, which have significantly improved the manuscript. They addressed all major concerns raised in the initial review: HRV Metrics and LF/HF Ratio: The discussion has been expanded to include the controversies surrounding the LF/HF ratio, with the introduction of the LHFND index providing a more robust and interpretable approach to analyzing autonomic balance. Role of SDNN and Total Power: The authors have effectively connected these metrics to stress resilience and recovery, citing relevant guidelines and literature. Gender Differences: The physiological and socio-cultural bases for observed gender differences in HRV were well-explored, enhancing the manuscript's depth. Jury Methodology: The limitations of using a student jury were acknowledged, and alternative approaches for future studies were suggested. Statistical Analysis: The inclusion of additional tables and clear explanations has greatly improved the accessibility and transparency of the statistical findings. Practical Implications: The discussion on potential applications of HRV biofeedback in science communication training is highly relevant and forward-looking. The manuscript now offers a more comprehensive and impactful contribution to the fields of psychophysiology and science communication. I recommend accepting the revised manuscript for publication. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Sofia Pavanello ********** |
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PONE-D-24-40963R1 PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Cerasa, I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now being handed over to our production team. At this stage, our production department will prepare your paper for publication. This includes ensuring the following: * All references, tables, and figures are properly cited * All relevant supporting information is included in the manuscript submission, * There are no issues that prevent the paper from being properly typeset If revisions are needed, the production department will contact you directly to resolve them. If no revisions are needed, you will receive an email when the publication date has been set. At this time, we do not offer pre-publication proofs to authors during production of the accepted work. Please keep in mind that we are working through a large volume of accepted articles, so please give us a few weeks to review your paper and let you know the next and final steps. Lastly, if your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at customercare@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Rasool Abedanzadeh Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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