Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 12, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-27672Digital inclusive finance penetration and household debt maturity structure: Empirical estimation based on China Family Panel Studies DataPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Hou, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Especially, reviewer 1 and 3 provide you with good suggestions to position the paper better. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 06 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript explores the impacts of digital inclusive finance on the maturity structure of household debt. The topic is interesting. However, there are substantial shortcomings as follows: 1. In the first section, the authors should address the importance and why they investigated the research topic. Except for the current status of the research ground, some literature should also be addressed to outline the cutting-edge of this study. In the literature review section, more updated literature is encouraged to be added. As for the sections of introduction and literature review, the authors are encouraged to cite the following references to address the importance of this study and improve the discussions of the literature gap. [1] Digital finance development and bank liquidity creation DOI: 10.1016/j.irfa.2023.102839 [2] Explainable artificial intelligence for digital finance and consumption upgrading DOI: 10.1016/j.frl.2023.104489 [3] Digital finance era: Will individual investors become better players? DOI: 10.1016/j.intfin.2024.101935 [4] The rise of digital finance: Financial inclusion or debt trap? DOI: 10.1016/j.frl.2021.102604 [5] Financial and household financial resilience DOI: 10.1016/j.frl.2024.105378 [6] Does the marginal child increase household debt? - Evidence from the new fertility policy in China DOI: 10.1016/j.irfa.2021.101870 2. Regarding the research data, the authors should address the rationale for matching individual data with macro-level data. 3. The selection of variables should offer theoretical or literature support. 4. Regarding the empirical results, the authors are suggested to verify them along with prior studies. 5. In addition to robustness and heterogeneity checks, the endogeneity also should be addressed. 6. The limitations of the study should be carefully addressed in the last section. 7. The authors are suggested to carefully proofread the manuscript before submission since there are substantial writing mistakes, typos, and similar mistakes. Reviewer #2: Dear authors, I think that your paper on household debt in China and digital finance using the Chinese is very well written. My suggestion is to include more references for household finance surveys from other emerging countries, such as: https://doi.org/10.1016/j.jimonfin.2021.102455 https://doi.org/10.1186/s40854-023-00458-6 https://ideas.repec.org/p/bis/biswps/1196.html Kind regards, Reviewer #3: The paper is interesting and extends our knowledge in financial inclusion and mechanisms at household-level. There are significant issues that need to be addressed by the authors to better position the paper. 1. In the first paragraph of the paper, the authors summarize the debt profile of households. This seems to point to strong long-term debt even to households with low-income levels and in the absence of digital financial inclusion. It is unclear, therefore, the important role played by digital financial inclusion. 2. The main evidence is reported in Table 3 - to suggest that digital financial inclusion is positively associated with long-term debt. The definition of long-term debt underscores the fact that this debt is provided by traditional banks rather than digital credit providers. A few questions can be answered by the authors to better position the paper: a. Does digital financial inclusion make households more bankable to traditional banks? The authors can provide evidence on whether digital financial inclusion reduces the credit risk of households, thereby, making them potentially credible candidates to traditional banks. b. Why is there no meaningful impact of digital financial inclusion on the primary credit (short-term) provided by fintech companies? 3. The authors use level of long-term debt. I suggest they include the results of changes in long-term debt. The changes can be informative in explaining how changes in the digital financial inclusion index may be reflected in debt choices of households. 4. I suggest that the authors define debt maturity as the proportion of either long-term debt or short-term debt on total debt. This proxy can be directly explained as representing the shifts in debt by households. As things stand now, a positive coefficient on the digital financial inclusion, does not necessarily imply a shift in the debt maturity to the long side. 5. Are there counties with CFPS data but no digital financial inclusion? It seems odd to me that, this may be the case. However, if it is the case, the authors can perform a test to tease out how digital financial inclusion more closely impact household debt decisions. Even in the absence of such sample, the authors should be able to split the existing sample to test high-level inclusion versus low-level inclusion on long-term maturity. 6. The authors should proofread the text to correct typos. I recommend that the authors use the free version of Grammarly. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . 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Digital inclusive finance penetration and household debt maturity structure: Empirical estimation based on China Family Panel Studies Data PONE-D-24-27672R1 Dear Dr. Hou, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Jim Been Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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