Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 12, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-44325Maternal Complication of Instrumental Vaginal Delivery and Its Associated Factors among Mothers Who Underwent Instrumental Vaginal Delivery: Systematic Review and MetanalysisPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Abdi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 20 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to review this manuscript titled "Maternal Complication of Instrumental Vaginal Delivery and Its Associated Factors among Mothers Who Underwent Instrumental Vaginal Delivery: Systematic Review and Meta-analysis". This study is both timely and significant, as it addresses the important issue of maternal complications associated with instrumental vaginal delivery (IVD), a procedure commonly used in obstetric care, especially in developing countries such as Ethiopia. The sample used for this meta-analysis included 12 studies with a total of 3,745 participants, providing a substantial foundation to estimate the pooled prevalence of maternal complications related to IVD. Research like this, focusing on developing countries, is essential because it brings to light context-specific challenges in maternal and child health. In these settings, health systems are often under-resourced, and understanding the factors contributing to maternal morbidity is key to improving outcomes. This study’s meta-analytical approach, which pools data from various studies, provides a more comprehensive and accurate picture of the national burden of IVD complications, as opposed to isolated studies. It also allows for the identification of common risk factors, thus guiding targeted interventions to reduce maternal complications. 1. Significance and Novelty: The paper provides a comprehensive overview of the prevalence and predictors of maternal complications associated with instrumental vaginal delivery (IVD) in Ethiopia. The authors' effort to systematically review and meta-analyze studies conducted in this context is commendable, as it addresses a critical gap in the obstetric care literature in Ethiopia and potentially guides future clinical practices and policies. The novelty of the paper lies in its focus on a specific geographical location (Ethiopia) and its attempt to collate and analyze data from various studies to provide a national-level perspective on IVD complications, which has not been extensively covered in previous literature. 2. Strengths: The methodology is robust, employing a comprehensive search strategy across multiple databases and including unpublished literature to minimize publication bias. This approach enhances the reliability of the findings. The inclusion of a wide range of predictors for maternal complications (type of instrument, episiotomy status, birthweight, and parity) provides valuable insights into the factors that could be addressed to mitigate risks associated with IVD. The statistical analysis, including subgroup analysis and meta-regression, is thorough, allowing for a nuanced understanding of the data. The paper is of high relevance to obstetric care in Ethiopia and other similar contexts, offering evidence that can inform practice, policy, and future research. 3. Weaknesses: The heterogeneity among included studies is very high (I² = 97%), which suggests that the findings might be influenced by underlying variability among the study designs, populations, and contexts. This issue is acknowledged but not sufficiently addressed in the analysis and discussion sections. The paper lacks a clear discussion of the limitations of the included studies and how they might impact the overall findings and conclusions. Some important predictors of maternal complications in IVD, such as the operator's experience or the healthcare facility's level (beyond tertiary and general hospitals), are not explored in depth. The paper does not sufficiently engage with existing literature on the subject, missing an opportunity to contextualize its findings within the broader global research landscape on instrumental vaginal delivery. Although the study presents the prevalence of complications, it would benefit from a more detailed discussion of the local health system context and cultural factors that might influence the practice of IVD and its outcomes in Ethiopia. 4. Suggestions for Improvement: The authors could further explore and discuss the implications of the high heterogeneity among studies. Considering meta-regression or sensitivity analysis to identify potential sources of this heterogeneity could strengthen the paper. Expanding the discussion section to more critically engage with the limitations of the included studies and their potential impact on the review's conclusions would provide a more balanced view of the findings. Including additional predictors or conducting a more detailed analysis of the available predictors (e.g., operator experience, healthcare facility level) could enrich the analysis. If data availability is a limitation, this should be explicitly stated as an area for future research. Enhancing the literature review to include a broader range of studies from different geographical and socio-economic contexts could help position the findings within the global discourse on maternal health and IVD. This would also allow the authors to more explicitly highlight the unique contributions of their study. Further elaboration on strategies for minimizing IVD-related complications in low-resource settings, based on the study’s findings, would strengthen the conclusion and offer actionable recommendations for healthcare providers and policymakers. Summary Statement: This paper makes a valuable contribution to understanding the prevalence and predictors of maternal complications in instrumental vaginal delivery in Ethiopia. Its strengths lie in the comprehensive methodology and the relevance of its findings to obstetric care practices and policies. However, addressing the highlighted concerns regarding heterogeneity, discussion of limitations, exploration of additional predictors, and engagement with existing literature could significantly enhance the paper's impact and relevance. With these improvements, the paper has the potential to be an important resource for clinicians, policymakers, and researchers interested in maternal health in Ethiopia and similar contexts. Reviewer #2: Maternal Complication of Instrumental Vaginal Delivery and Its Associated Factors among Mothers Who Underwent Instrumental Vaginal Delivery: Systematic Review and Metanalysis Summary of the Research This study aimed to assess pooled prevalence of maternal complication of instrumental vaginal delivery and its associated factors among mothers who underwent instrumental vaginal delivery. Data based: PubMed, Scopus, HINARI, Cochrane library, and Google Scholar databases for studies published until August 2024. Keywords such as instrumental delivery, forceps, vacuum, complication, factors and Ethiopia were used to access literatures from the databases. For quality assessment and data extraction, the Joanna Briggs Critical Appraisal Tools and the Preferred Reporting Items for Systematic Review and Meta-Analyses were utilized. Random-effect model was used to calculate the pooled prevalence of maternal complication of instrumental vaginal delivery. Subgroup analyses were also conducted to explore potential heterogeneity. The publication bias was assessed using Funnel plot and Egger’s. A total of 12 studies with 3745 study participants were participated in the present meta-analysis. The pooled prevalence of maternal complication of instrumental vaginal delivery was 21% (95% CI, 15.0%-28.0%). The prevalence of maternal complication was significantly different among studies conducted between [2015 - 2020), and those conducted between [2020 and 2024]. Lowest (14%) in studies conducted before 2020 and highest (26%) among studies conducted 2020 and after (P-value<0.001). Type of instrument (AOR: 1.99, 95% CI: 1.37–2.90), episiotomy status (AOR: 3.49, 95% CI: 2.12– 5.76), birthweight (AOR: 3.06, 95% CI: 1.88 – 4.97) and parity (AOR=2.96,95%CI:1.80 – 4.85) were the factors associated with maternal complication of instrumental vaginal delivery. This study shows that approximately one in five mothers who underwent instrumental vaginal delivery develop serious maternal complication. Type of the instrument, episiotomy status, birthweight and parity were important predictors of the maternal complication of instrumental vaginal delivery. Effective evaluation of indication, contra indication and precondition for each instrument helps to prevent the maternal complication of instrumental vaginal delivery. Areas for improvement Title: The authors wrote the title in a good way and reflecting the aim and objectives of the Systematic review and meta-analysis. However, the authors should make the title shorter. Abstract: Abstract is well written. Please, don’t use abbreviation in short title. The authors should mention clearly the main objective of the systematic review and meta-analysis. Correct all metanalysis with meta-analysis Remove please the word “Systematic review and meta-analysis” from the key word and remove “pooled” prevalence is enough. Add “factors” to the key word Make sure to add key word in page no 3 after abstract. Introduction Section: In the first paragraph, Please don’t repeat the full form of IVD. First time is enough then you can use only abbreviation “IVD”. The authors should make sure to identify the importance of this SR and MA as it is not only to pooled the complication but also the prevalence. Be consistence please. The authors should revise introduction section for grammar issues and language to improve readability. The authors should indicate what they wanted the readers to understand. Overall The authors need to arrange introduction section. Rewrite some paraphrase so, the readers will understand what you wanted to convey from messages. They also need to make sure to clearly mention the significant of the systematic review and meta-analysis and the aim of it. Material and Methods: Method, Clear. Study protocol and registration, The authors should make sure that the PRISMA flow diagram is appeared in this section. The authors should write in brackets synonyms, terms and keywords used for this systematic review. The authors should write examples of how they enriched search using Boolean operators and phrase search. The authors should write the reason for selecting grey literature. The authors should mention how many articles excluded for this systematic review, then provide the reasons. Quality Assessment, The authors should explain the reason for selecting JBI and its importance in more detail. The authors should explained the numbers of designs in this systematic review, how many quantitative studies with its design and how many qualitative with its design. Statistical analysis, Clear. Results: Well explained results section however, the authors should revise the language and grammar to improve readability. Studies characteristics, clear. The authors should include figures and tables within the results section. Discussion: The authors should discuss more about this results from different angles. The authors should discuss in more detail about the studies in related to prevalence and factors. The authors should make clear for the readers about the themes that they were discussing. The authors should discuss each themes from different angle and in detail. The authors should revise the language and grammar to improve readability. References: The authors should revise all references according to the guidelines provided. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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