Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 17, 2024 |
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Dear Dr. Ali, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Thank you for your submission to PLOS One. On the positive side, the reviewers positively evaluate the development of the proposed gesture recognition system for a smart wheelchair. They raise some points that should be addressed prior to publication, such as clearly stating testing with disabled users as a limitation and future direction, given that testing reported in the manuscript appears to have been conducted with non-disabled users. On the negative side, R1 points out notable similarities between the current manuscript and this one (https://ieeexplore.ieee.org/stamp/stamp.jsp?arnumber=10088702&casa_token=hy9pM5Prw5YAAAAA:Bqlb_FgBKzwaJt5GCTtd2pRP_p9BAOikYZrxLtIFL_aNJuwA0kZRUVFG9wnTpyoxv9FuhSU&tag=1). After having compared these two manuscripts myself, a stronger justification is warranted for how they differ. Without such a justification, the manuscript will be rejected, per PLOS One policy. Due to an undisclosed COI between R1 and one of the authors, if this manuscript is sent out for an additional round of review, R1 will not be asked to re-review the manuscript and a review from an additional reviewer will be solicited. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 06 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: This paper presents a new mathematical model for an efficient and real-time hand gesture recognition technique for an intelligent wheelchair control system, which aligns with contemporary technologies. The model is developed using the positions of the significant hand landmarks, distances among them and some critical thresholds, which are determined by a good number of samples of hands. The proposed method offers more flexibility for users through less hand movement when operating the wheelchair. The model is tested for hands of different sizes, irrespective of any background indoors or outdoors under sunlight. The experimental study demonstrates that it outperforms the existing methods regarding success rate with good performance metrics. This paper is well-written and organized, with sufficient figures and tables describing the methodology behind the architecture and supporting the experimental results. In summary, this paper innovates in real-time hand-gesture recognition techniques for wheelchair control. It also performs extensive experiments and statistical analysis to support its claims. This paper would be a valuable addition to the reputed PLoS ONE journal. However, some minor issues need to be focused on before final acceptance. • Please add your contributions in bullet points for clarity in the Introduction section. • It is better to use the same convention to present the same thing. For example, “Tejonidhi et al. [24]” and “Sadi, M.S. et al. [25]” should follow the same presentation style. • Please provide a summary table for the works mentioned in the Related Work section. This addition would give an in-brief overview of the existing state-of-the-art. • I noticed that both “Experimental Setup” and “Results” started with the numbering of 4.1. Are they correct? • The work presented in [27] obtained an accuracy of 99.17%, whereas this work achieved an accuracy of 98.14%. Also, many results are presented in this work from [27]. Please explain in detail the superiority of this work over [27]. • I did not find any differences between a few of the figures presented in [27] and this work. The figures are Fig. 1, Fig. 2, Fig. 4 and Fig. 5 [27], Fig. [5], and Fig. 6 [27]. Could you please clarify these things? • Please use the same reference style for all references. For example, [15], [16], [21]-[23], and [25]-[26] have been deviated from other reference style. It is better to check all the references again to add the missing volume, page number, issue, etc. • Please add a picture of the actual users, operating the wheelchair. Reviewer #2: This paper presents a new mathematical model for an efficient and real-time hand gesture recognition technique for an intelligent wheelchair control system. The paper reviews current techniques, highlights the advantages of the proposed method, and presents experimental results obtained by applying the method. The experimental study demonstrates that it outperforms existing methods in terms of success rate with good performance values. However, I consider that the authors need to clarify the following aspects: 1. The method presented is dedicated to individuals with major motor disabilities who cannot properly use a joystick. In the vast majority, these individuals cannot properly use their fingers either. The study appears to be conducted on a sample of able-bodied individuals. A qualitative study conducted on individuals with disabilities is lacking. 2. Additionally, the method presented eliminates the joystick as a means of control. However, the joystick also controls the speed of movement. There is a reference in the paper to further development of speed control. I believe this should be expanded upon, presenting at least a summary of the algorithm for gradual speed increase/decrease, as well as justification for choosing the optimal speed for long distances. 3. The control part of the wheelchair motors is not described in terms of method and control parameters, especially in the implementation on a real wheelchair. 4. Forward/backward/lateral movements by pointing with the index finger work for able-bodied individuals, but what is the error rate relative to the level of disability? 5. It might have been beneficial to include a medical perspective, outlining the types and degrees of motor disabilities that can access this technique, as well as the method's advantages. Additionally, it could identify possible and potentially easier types of gestures. 6. Although a known gesture recognition method is mentioned, it may be helpful to mention at least the main stages of the method. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Ionel Cristian Vladu ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org . 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| Revision 1 |
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Dear Dr. Ali, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. I thank the authors for their patience. As R1 was unable to review a revision of the manuscript, an additional reviewer (R3) was recruited. This reviewer raises a few minor concerns as well as two more major ones in which they suggest additional data collection. Although I am not convinced that additional data collection is necessary, I ask that the authors engage with the points raised by R3 and address them in a revision. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 17 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols . Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols . We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Laura Morett Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #2: The identified gaps and ambiguities have been appropriately addressed. I consider that the paper can be published in this form. Reviewer #3: The paper presents a novel method of human-wheelchair interaction that uses a camera to read user's hand gesture which later translate into wheelchair motion. It is real time efficient approach. However, it is tested on 1 participant only and the design of the experiment is not clear. 1. Participants: The manuscript is missing Ethics Statement. As it involves a human participant. 2. The Table 1 have mistakes. Here are two numbers I found to be wrong. [22] and [23]' accuracies are wrong. Need revision. 3. Table 1 has column for equipment and then list MATLAP, modified VGG-8 model and ROS as equipment. Need fix because they are not equipments. 4. Figures are not places within the pdf but shown at the end. Need to be placed in the pdf. 5. Details about the 100 images collected with different size and background are missing. "The testing involved 100 samples for each hand gestures under different lightning conditions" 6. Big weakness this paper has is the small number of participants and the experiment is not clear. I understand it is difficult to hire people with difficulties. Thus, having one user from the target audience is a acceptable. However, authors can recruit able bodied people. Second point about the experiment. The author should design better experiments. Current experiment is testing the gesture while the wheelchair not moving and is designed only to test the ability of the system to read the gesture. But they did not test whether the user able to navigate within a specific route efficiently and safely. In conclusion, I suggest the authors hire more participants (not necessarily disabled) and design an experiment that test how long would it take the user to finish a navigation task and how comfortable and safe they are while navigating. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org . Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Developing a Real-Time Hand-Gesture Recognition Technique for Wheelchair Control PONE-D-24-10717R2 Dear Dr. Ali, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Laura Morett Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): I thank the authors for addressing the reviewers' feedback. They have addressed all of the points raised satisfactorily, so I am pleased to recommend this manuscript for publication in PLOS One. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #3: The authors have addressed most of my concerns and some were put into future work section. I hope they preform the future work soon. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #3: No ********** |
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