Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionNovember 18, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-35973Leadership Development as a Novel Strategy to Mitigate Burnout Among Female PhysiciansPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Sears, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 16 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript titled "Leadership Development as a Novel Strategy to Mitigate Burnout Among Female Physicians" examines a critical issue in healthcare, focusing on the prevalence of burnout among female physicians and proposing the Women Leaders in Medicine (WLiM) program as a novel intervention. The study is well-structured and methodologically sound, providing a detailed evaluation of how leadership development can mitigate burnout and enhance career trajectories in this population. The intervention itself is comprehensive, incorporating bi-annual leadership summits, networking opportunities, and continuous support programs, which are designed to address burnout from multiple dimensions. The study demonstrates considerable methodological rigor. It employs validated tools, such as the Maslach Burnout Index (MBI), to assess burnout dimensions and uses a combination of internal and external control groups to strengthen the robustness of the findings. The longitudinal nature of the data collection, spanning over two years with surveys conducted at three time points, adds depth to the analysis and ensures the reliability of the results. The findings reveal statistically significant improvements in emotional exhaustion, depersonalization, and personal accomplishment among participants of the WLiM program, as well as an increase in leadership aspirations compared to non-participants. These results underscore the potential of leadership development programs to not only reduce burnout but also empower female physicians in their professional growth. Despite its strengths, the study has some limitations that could impact its generalizability. The self-selection of participants into the WLiM program introduces a potential bias, as those already motivated to seek leadership roles or address burnout may be overrepresented. Additionally, the study is confined to a specific healthcare system, which may limit its applicability to other institutional or cultural contexts. The reliance on self-reported data further raises concerns about response bias, and the non-randomized design restricts causal inferences. While the manuscript acknowledges these limitations, a more detailed discussion of their implications would enhance the study's transparency and credibility. External factors, such as concurrent social movements like #MeToo and #TimesUpHealthcare, might have also influenced the outcomes, and the manuscript could benefit from further exploration of these potential confounders. Expanding the analysis to include demographic subgroups could provide additional insights into the intervention's differential impacts. Furthermore, a follow-up assessment of long-term outcomes would be valuable to determine the sustainability of the observed benefits. Overall, this manuscript makes a significant contribution to the literature on physician burnout and leadership development. The intervention is practical, evidence-based, and addresses a pressing issue in healthcare. With minor revisions to address its limitations and to broaden the scope of its discussion, the manuscript is well-suited for publication and will provide valuable insights for healthcare institutions aiming to support their workforce and promote leadership among female physicians. Have you bought the licence for Maslach Burnout Inventory? Reviewer #2: I read this study with great interest given its relevance to many themes around important issues of burnout, retention, leadership, and gender disparities within these issues. Overall it is written clearly, contributes to the literature, and contains interesting information. The following comments and suggestions are to aid the authors in making sure the content is clear to readers. Minor typos: Abstract / Results paragraph: Change “improved levels personal accomplishment…” to “improved levels (of) personal accomplishment…” Results section / Paragraph beginning “Baseline demographics…” Change “The TMA and WLiM groups had similar work hours, with 74.8 of 10 211 WiLM and 76.7% of TMA physicians working 40 hours per week” to “The TMA and WLiM groups had similar work hours, with 74.8(%) of 10 211 WiLM and 76.7% of TMA physicians working 40 hours per week” Other comments / questions: Abstract: Consider stating whether the results found were statistically significant or not within the abstract Results: Paragraph beginning “Baseline demographics of female…” “Early career physicians were more prevalent in non-attendees versus attendee cohorts (less than 5 years in practice 29% vs. 16.5%).” This statement stood out and if word count allows, there could be additional reflection or exposition on this. Early career physicians are a particularly vulnerable group, with unique stressors, and would benefit from this kind of support, though may be less likely to identify as “ready for leadership” and therefore less likely to self-select. Paragraph beginning “At baseline…” “A longitudinal comparison of the 143 women physicians who completed all questions on surveys in 2018 and 2020 demonstrated that participants in WLiM events had lower MBI-EE scores (2.9 at baseline to 2.5 at follow-up) while non-participants showed a less significant decrease from 3.2 at baseline to 3.0 at follow-up. Improvement in single-item MBI-EE scores among the WLiM group was double the improvement seen in female non-participant controls (cohort 1).” This shows that even without the WLiM program, a woman physician had a 6% decrease in EE compared to a 13.8% decrease in EE for participants - so the proportion “left over” that can be accounted for by the WMiL program is smaller - can the authors comment on whether it is still a significant change? Paragraph beginning “Participants in WLiM demonstrated an increase in leadership aspirations…” “Female non-participant controls (cohort 1) experienced the most improvement” 0.36 / 4.8% change for WLiM participants, 0.91 / 17% for cohort 1, 0.11 / 1.7% TMA group Less improvement in cohort participants for leadership aspiration - wonder why? Interesting to discuss and explore potential factors for this disparity Discussion: Paragraph beginning “At baseline, more than ⅓ of all physicians surveyed…” “The female physicians participating in WLiM events were the only group to demonstrate a statistically significant decrease in emotional exhaustion and, at follow up, WLiM participants demonstrated 13 the lowest MBI-EE scores of all groups surveyed.“ This is notable. I read it twice. “Emotional exhaustion” is such a pervasive and relatable term for women physicians at all stages of career. Again, causes me to reflect on how a program like this might benefit early career physicians (who were less likely to participate in this leadership program) Paragraph “WLiM participants showed higher leadership aspirations on baseline surveys compared to the other groups. BSWH non-participant female physicians (cohort 1) scored lowest on this domain, which may indicate a bias toward WLiM participation for female physicians who are interested in leadership.” At first read, this statement seemed to contradict the prior conclusions that cohort 1 participants had the greatest improvement in leadership aspirations. After re-reading, it is clear that the authors are now comparing the baseline numbers and showing how this could be a limitation. Perhaps this would fit better under the paragraph describing “limitations” or be included in the results section to help explain WHY cohort 1 shows more improvement? Paragraph beginning “A unique strength of this paper…” “This study evaluated a practical real-world program that can help physician retention…” This may be misleading. When reviewing the actual data, it appears that retention with organization actually increased MORE for the non-WLiM participants. And if looking at the median value (instead of the mean value), the retention rate of the WLiM group actually got WORSE. Data table 2 Related to the previous point - the text below the table starts “All parameters (Burnout, leadership aspirations and intention to stay) improved for the women who participated in WLiM events compared to those who did not…” however “intention to stay” did not improve for women who participated in WLiM events COMPARED TO those who did not. Other potential limitations to address: The intervention WLiM group had APPs in addition to physicians. By including APPs as participants, this may have an unknown effect or impact on the culture and nature of the programs and the physicians who participated in them Only binary gender is included in the study and may have limited participation and understanding of non-binary, transgender, or gender-fluid individuals TMA physicians were older, more experienced, and less likely to have young children. 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Leadership Development as a Novel Strategy to Mitigate Burnout Among Female Physicians PONE-D-24-35973R1 Dear Dr. Sears, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Francesco Marcatto, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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