Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 17, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-40899Characterization and prediction of non-melanoma skin cancer incidence in China: Joinpoint regression and age-period-cohort modelPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Cao, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 09 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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In addition, the following comments are made: - Age is primarily considered in the analyses, although the introduction points out that other factors are also important. This should be better explained, especially as UV radiation is of particular relevance. The latter should be better analysed in terms of exposure (e.g. field work in the countryside) and explanation of urban-rural differences. The importance of the social situation should also be included. - the discussion should be better structured, parts (e.g. lines 208-225) belong in my opinion also in the introduction - The literature from some countries shows that leisure and holiday behaviour plays an important role in UV exposure (and skin cancer). How does this apply to China? - On the one hand, the air pollution mentioned may also have a UV-reducing effect. How can this be assessed? [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. 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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The subject is of great importance given the high prevalence of NMSC worldwide, particularly in a country with a large population such as China. The study makes a valuable contribution to the field of knowledge. The use of multiple statistical models ensures the robustness of the analysis and provides a comprehensive examination of incidence patterns. The use of data from the Annual Report of the China Cancer Registry provides a robust foundation for the study, enhancing the credibility of the findings. However, the paper addresses age, gender, and regional influences on NMSC incidence but lacks a detailed examination of external factors such as UV exposure and environmental pollution, which could significantly affect the results. The presentation of results could be enhanced to improve clarity, for example through the use of tables and figures. It would be beneficial to present the key findings in a more accessible format for easier interpretation. The paper does not sufficiently address the study's limitations, particularly in relation to data representativeness and potential biases arising from the use of a national dataset rather than a random sample. Overall, the paper provides valuable insights into NMSC incidence trends in China and employs suitable statistical methods for analysis. However, there is room for improvement regarding the depth of analysis, especially concerning external risk factors and public health implications. A clearer presentation of data and acknowledgement of limitations would enhance the paper's quality. I recommend revisions to address these points (if possible) before submission for publication. Reviewer #2: This paper focuses on the incidence of NMSC and its percentage change (APC and AAPC) and trends in China. The incidences by gender and urbanity are shown. In addition, age-period-cohort models and predictions using BAPC were calculated. Differences were found between age, gender and region. The paper is clear written and discusses the findings and probably causes in detail. It should be emphasized that different methodological approaches were used to describe and assess the incidence of NMSC. Nonetheless, there are a few things to note, particularly concerning the figures and tables as well as some methodological aspects. Specifically: - Table 1 is not easy to read, I would recommend using landscape format - Fig.1: The lines and dots could be shown more clearly, for example a different choice of color, thicker lines or adjustment of the axes. The legend could also be larger. - Fig. 2/Fig. 3: The axis labels are not legible. - L.87: What does this formula refer to? A short description would be helpful. - L.121: What does "I" stands for? What does the precision parameter do and how did you select it? - L.139: 248/100,000 or 2.48/100,000? Please also check the other rates. - L.187 95%-CI are given in the methods section. How these were calculated was not described. So I was wondering how an ASIR can be negative (as in the 95%-CI). In addition, there are some minor points that I would like to mention: - L.69: Can you please check the ICD10 classification for NMSC? C91-95 is coded for leukemia and D45-47 for polycythaemia vera. - L.82: fited -> fitted - L.159: The word “Tables” -> “Tables 1 and 2” or “Table 1, Table 2” ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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PONE-D-24-40899R1Characterization and prediction of non-melanoma skin cancer incidence in China: Joinpoint regression and age-period-cohort modelPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Cao, Thank you for revising the manuscript! However, after reviewing the revision, I have noticed some minor details that I would like you to check and correct. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 25 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Jobst Augustin, Associate Professor/Senior lecturer Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: Thanks for the revision! However, I have noticed a few small things: - Line 50-53: In my opinion, this is not written correctly. In 'western countries', the increase in NMSCs is mainly due to beauty ideals and related changes in leisure time (use of sunbeds, outdoor activites) and holiday behaviour (e.g. beach holidays). I cannot assess this in detail for emerging countries, but increasing air pollution (at least with particulate matter) does indeed lead to a reduction in UV. There are (conversely) European studies that show an increase in UV due to air pollution control measures. This should be presented in a more nuanced way, with sources. - Line 83: Why did you delete "statistical analysis"? The structure made sense, didn't it? As it is now ("statistical analysis" in line 126) it is not quite right, because I understand "statistical analysis" as a generic term under which "joinpoint regression model" etc. can be summarised. - Figure 1: In the illustration, the lines/dots (and colours) are virtually indistinguishable. I would recommend changing them, e.g. by combining solid and dashed lines. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org . Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Characterization and prediction of non-melanoma skin cancer incidence in China: Joinpoint regression and age-period-cohort model PONE-D-24-40899R2 Dear Dr. Cao, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Jobst Augustin, Associate Professor/Senior lecturer Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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