Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 6, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-38823Risk factor measurement in the COVID-19 pandemic in individuals with cardio-renal-metabolic diseases: A retrospective cohort study in the United KingdomPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Khunti, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== This retrospective study utilizes useful scientific data and have compared patients' clinical conditions pre- and peripandemic. Few things needs to be corrected: The main objective and its conclusion of the study is not elusive. How the findings from the study could be recommended for policy making; Justify? Data Analysis still needs to be refined: Specific factors like practitioner and participant reasons for educed risk factor assessments can be incorporated. Qualitative data like direct questions/interview can be helpful. Patient Recruitment: Data set has been taken from a specific population or has been included based on specific criteria needs to be elaborated. Statistical Analysis: Author should include multivariate regression and post hoc analysis like in case of gender and ethnic disparities. Discussion: Rephrase the first paragraph of discussion. Discuss about the potential biases in the study. How have you neutralized the confounding factors? How have you handled the missing data or loss to follow up? Include more studies from recent literature and discuss the findings with your study. Please ensure that your decision is justified on PLOS ONE’s publication criteria and not, for example, on novelty or perceived impact. For Lab, Study and Registered Report Protocols: These article types are not expected to include results but may include pilot data. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 16 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information. Additional Editor Comments: This retrospective study utilizes useful scientific data and have compared patients' clinical conditions pre- and peripandemic. Few things needs to be corrected: The main objective and its conclusion of the study is not elusive. How the findings from the study could be recommended for policy making; Justify? Data Analysis still needs to be refined: Specific factors like practitioner and participant reasons for educed risk factor assessments can be incorporated. Qualitative data like direct questions/interview can be helpful. Patient Recruitment: Data set has been taken from a specific population or has been included based on specific criteria needs to be elaborated. Statistical Analysis: Author should include multivariate regression and post hoc analysis like in case of gender and ethnic disparities. Discussion: Rephrase the first paragraph of discussion. Discuss about the potential biases in the study. How have you neutralized the confounding factors? How have you handled the missing data or loss to follow up? Include more studies from recent literature and discuss the findings with your study. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. 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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The title requires rewriting. In the Introduction section, state the risk factors of COVID 19 Disease. The sampling method should be specified. The discussion is very complicated and makes it heavier for the reader also needs to become stronger. The conclusion is very weak and requires re-examination and rewriting. Reviewer #2: This retrospective study offers valuable insights by analyzing a wealth of secondary data to compare patients' clinical conditions pre- and peripandemic. While the findings are well-presented, the study could benefit from a clearer application of results to inform future policymaking. Specifically: Practical Implications: �Emphasize how findings translate into actionable recommendations for policy and practice, especially in preparation for future scenarios involving resource constraints. Additional Data Considerations: �Incorporating specific factors or variables, such as practitioners’ and participants’ reasons for reduced risk factor assessments, could provide deeper insights. �Exploring concurrent qualitative data (e.g., interviews) would add context to the findings. Database and Population Scope: �Clarifying whether the dataset includes all or only a specific part of the population and the criteria for selecting specific practices/hospitals would greatly enhance the visualisation of the method and findings �Explain how the sample represents the broader population and assessment frequency. Analysis and Findings: �Including other such as multivariate and post-hoc analyses could provide clarity on observed differences (e.g., gender and ethnic disparities) and contextualize these within recent literature. �The study would benefit from using references less than 10 years old, ensuring relevance (e.g., updated diabetes prevalence in the UK). Cohort Design and Limitations: �Discuss limitations, such as potential biases due to the cohort design compared to other such as cross-sectional or qualitative methods. �Address drop-out rates or missing data and their implications for findings. Impactful Results Discussion: �Highlight significant and actionable results, ensuring these are fully elaborated to contextualize their importance and relevance to current issues. By addressing these areas, the study's topic to relevance and contribution for both academic and policy discussions can be significantly enhanced. ********** 6. 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COVID-19 Pandemic and Risk Factor Measurement in Individuals with Cardio-Renal-Metabolic Diseases: A Retrospective Study in the United Kingdom PONE-D-24-38823R1 Dear Dr. Khunti, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Apeksha Niraula, M.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-24-38823R1 PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Khunti, I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now being handed over to our production team. At this stage, our production department will prepare your paper for publication. This includes ensuring the following: * All references, tables, and figures are properly cited * All relevant supporting information is included in the manuscript submission, * There are no issues that prevent the paper from being properly typeset If revisions are needed, the production department will contact you directly to resolve them. If no revisions are needed, you will receive an email when the publication date has been set. At this time, we do not offer pre-publication proofs to authors during production of the accepted work. Please keep in mind that we are working through a large volume of accepted articles, so please give us a few weeks to review your paper and let you know the next and final steps. Lastly, if your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at customercare@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Apeksha Niraula Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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