Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 15, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-46448Message framing materials applied to healthy eating decision-making for pregnant women with gestational diabetes mellitus: An Exploratory StudyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. gu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR: The manuscript offers valuable insights and is well-structured overall. However, I have a few concerns that need to be addressed to strengthen the paper further: Be sure to:
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You should list all authors and all affiliations as per our author instructions and clearly indicate the corresponding author. 6. Please include captions for your Supporting Information files at the end of your manuscript, and update any in-text citations to match accordingly. Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information . [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Strengths: The study addresses a significant public health issue by exploring message framing effects in dietary decision-making among pregnant women with gestational diabetes mellitus (GDM), an understudied population. The Delphi method used to develop the framing materials adds robustness and ensures expert consensus. The two-phase pre-survey methodology offers a systematic approach to test and refine the materials. The manuscript contributes novel findings, particularly regarding the preference for loss-framed information in the target population. Concerns and Recommendations: Clarity of Study Context: The manuscript does not clearly specify the study setting or location. It is important to include details about where the study was conducted (e.g., the city, region, or country) to contextualize the findings and enhance their applicability to other settings. This information could be added to the Methods section. Clarity of Presentation: Some sections, particularly the methodology and statistical analysis, are densely written. Simplify these parts to ensure they are accessible to a broader audience. Ensure consistent terminology throughout, especially when discussing framing effects (e.g., gain-framed and loss-framed messages). Statistical Reporting: Provide more details about the statistical methods used, such as the rationale for selecting the Wilcoxon signed-rank sum test and its appropriateness for the data. Clarify the interpretation of P-values in Table 7, as some differences (e.g., between framings for oils and meats) are not statistically significant. Generalizability: Discuss the limitations of the study population's homogeneity (e.g., predominantly Han nationality, urban residents) and its implications for generalizing the findings to more diverse populations. Ethical Considerations: Ensure that ethical approval and the informed consent process are explicitly detailed in the manuscript body, rather than only in supplementary materials. Practical Implications and Future Directions: Elaborate on how the findings could be applied in practice, such as integrating the materials into GDM education programs or testing their effectiveness in a randomized controlled trial. Consider investigating additional factors (e.g., socio-economic status, psychological variables) that may moderate the observed framing effects. Visuals and Examples: Include visuals, such as a flow diagram of the study design or representative examples of the message framing materials, to aid in understanding and engaging the reader. Abstract and Language: Revise the abstract to make it more concise and focused, avoiding redundancy. Proofread the manuscript for typographical and grammatical errors (e.g., "message identity" instead of "message identity scores"). Conclusion: The study provides valuable insights into dietary decision-making for women with GDM. Addressing the concerns above, particularly clarifying the study setting and improving the presentation, will significantly enhance the manuscript's clarity, impact, and generalizability. I recommend revisions before the manuscript is considered for publication. Reviewer #2: The study has a well-defined aim of developing scientifically effective message framing materials for GDM populations. By engaging 17 experts to reach a consensus, the credibility and rigor of the materials are strengthened. Additionally, the use of two pre-surveys to test manipulation validity and framing effects enhances the reliability of the findings. However, I have the following comments: Minor revision 1. Expert Involvement: The involvement of 17 experts is mentioned, but Table 2 refers to "19 questionnaires delivered and received." Please clarify this discrepancy. 2. Sample Size: The study utilized a relatively small sample size. Did the authors use any formula to calculate the required sample size for the study? The method section should also explain how the 17 experts were identified and recruited. It is important to acknowledge the need for larger sample sizes in future studies to enhance the generalizability of findings. 3. Presentation Refinement: o Revise phrases such as “complete in the material detail questions” to “complete detailed questions about the materials.” o Consider restructuring the "Methods" section for improved clarity and readability. Ensure that each step of the study is outlined distinctly. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #1: Yes: Olivier Mukuku Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org . Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Message framing materials applied to healthy eating decision-making for pregnant women with gestational diabetes mellitus: An Exploratory Study PONE-D-24-46448R1 Dear Dr. gu, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Anh Nguyen Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Thank you for your thoughtful revisions. You have effectively addressed my concerns as well as all reviewers' comments. The manuscript is now thoroughly refined and reads smoothly. This research holds significant value for maternal health, offering valuable insights that can contribute to improving outcomes. Therefore, we are pleased to offer publication. |
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PONE-D-24-46448R1 PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Gu, I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now being handed over to our production team. At this stage, our production department will prepare your paper for publication. This includes ensuring the following: * All references, tables, and figures are properly cited * All relevant supporting information is included in the manuscript submission, * There are no issues that prevent the paper from being properly typeset If revisions are needed, the production department will contact you directly to resolve them. If no revisions are needed, you will receive an email when the publication date has been set. At this time, we do not offer pre-publication proofs to authors during production of the accepted work. Please keep in mind that we are working through a large volume of accepted articles, so please give us a few weeks to review your paper and let you know the next and final steps. Lastly, if your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at customercare@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Anh Nguyen Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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