Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 2, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-37728A double-edged hashtag: Evaluation of #ADHD-related TikTok content and its associations with perceptions of ADHDPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Karasavva, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== In light of the reviewer’s suggestions, I invited you to make a revision. Particularly, provide additional information about the accounts used to collect TikTok videos. Whose accounts did you use? Also, please explain why the gender gap is so significant in your analysis. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 15 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This paper offers timely and relevant insight into the relationship between ADHD content shared on TikTok and user’s perceptions of that information. While there has been a growing body of literature in recent years which theorizes about identity, algorithms, and mental health, I am unaware of a study like this one. The value this brings to the understanding of mental health TikTok is systematic, statistics-driven evidence that non-expert TikTok users view psychoeducational content on the app differently than experts. In my opinion, the most interesting findings are the differences between self-diagnosed and formally diagnosed participants in their views of the disorder and the quality of information about ADHD on TikTok. As far as I can judge, the paper is technically sound and the conclusions seem reasonable given the evidence. It appears that careful thought has been given to both the collection and analysis of data. I have a few minor questions/comments for the authors before the publication of this article which can broadly be categorized as questions about reporting of methodology and about referencing/engaging with relevant literature in the introduction and conclusion. These can be thought of mostly as points of clarity and polish. Methodology Section 2.1; Page 9: I wonder if the authors could provide additional information about the account(s) used to collect TikTok videos. I have reason to believe that search results can vary based on the user (i.e., even if two users input the same hashtag into the search bar and filter by most-viewed, the algorithm will show them different videos). It’s unclear if this is merely anecdotal, but it may be worth noting whose account was used or if a more objective form of data scraping was used. Section 3.1; Page 13: The authors write, “50% of the content creators promoted products”. Did the researchers take into account subtle advertisements or does this figure only represent explicit ads? E.g., sometimes a creator will share their “ADHD routine”, and one item is subtly listed for sale on their account. They never mention that they’re selling it, but it is still an ad of some kind. Section 4.1, Page 15: Why is the gender gap so significant between men and women? Given that ADHD is still considered to be more prevalent in men vs. women, do the authors feel their participant pool is unrepresentative of the general population in any meaningful way? Section 4.3.3, Page 19(6): “Always” is a curious item for viewing online content since it is unlikely that anyone always views one thing online compared to others. Did participants select this option? Section 5.1, Page 21(1): Beyond the obvious reason that it would make the comparison more complicated, is there a reason to exclude non-binary participants from the analysis? Referencing The authors note a couple of times that there is very little research on TikTok, and that may be true within the clinical psychology boundary, but I’d like to recommend that the authors explore literature in media theory, information sciences, disability studies, and philosophy of psychiatry that may enrich some of the claims made in the introduction and discussion sections of this paper. Some examples: Page 3(7-8): “Social media centres the perspectives of those with lived experience…” may be beneficial to review research on neurodiversity/neurodivergence in online spaces for citation here (e.g., Arnaud & Gangé-Julien, 2023, https://doi.org/10.1080/09515089.2023.2174425). Page 3(23): The citation here is from 2021. Given the speed with which TikTok has dominated the landscape, I’d be interested to know if it is still true that it is the “least studied among major social media platforms”. Page 4(5-9): Again, may be valuable to cite some scholarship about the value of digital tools in disability communities. Page 4(13): Would recommend citing something about how the TikTok algorithm works here. Page 6(12): “Mental health…content…could influence users’…” There have recently been some pieces in social media journals on the relationship between users’ perceptions of identity and use of social media (e.g., Leveille, 2024, https://doi.org/10.1177/20563051241269260). Also, e.g., scholarship on movements in participatory psychiatry. Page 34: The authors make claims about what motivates creators to post the kind of content that they do, which could benefit from some engagement in literature on social media incentives etc. Page 39(1): The claim that users trust creators that they follow more than viral videos could benefit from a citation. If there isn’t one, then this would be an interesting area of study. In the case of TikTok, I’m not sure if people do prioritize who they follow, since the FYP is a prominent source of content. Misc. Finally, on Page 7, the authors reference the prevalence of anti-vax content online as motivation for reviewing the factuality of ADHD videos. I’m a little concerned about the comparison this draws between anti-vax communities and mental health communities. While anti-vax creators often promote a dangerous, potentially lethal ideology that has no basis in medical science, it’s not clear that ADHD creators who similarly share misinformation are: 1. Capable of causing that kind of harm, or 2. Wrong to share content that fails to align with DSM criteria. I.e., there are valid criticisms about the DSM and mental health communities could be spaces for positive change. I’m not sure the same can be said for Anti-vaxxers. This is sort of what distinguishes misinformation (which could be harmless or accidental) and disinformation (which is harmful and concerted). The kinds of epistemic harm found online are diverse, and I think it's important to note that nuance. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . 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