Peer Review History
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PONE-D-25-03233Trends in gestational age at birth in the city of São Paulo, Brazil between 2012 and 2019PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Niy, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 28 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Type of study and data source It would be interesting to put the website address from which the data was downloaded (line 81). I think the study is an observational follow-up study and not an ecological one. Study population In lines 86 and 87 the authors say: “Births without information on type of delivery, GA, and type of pregnancy were excluded (Table 1)”. Did all live births in SP between 2012 and 2019 have their gestacional age and birth weight recorded? In the version of the article I had access to,I coudn´t find Figure 1 that the authors mention in line 98. On line 100 there is only the title of the figure: “Figure 1. Live births by type of pregnancy. City of São Paulo, Brazil, 2012-2019. ” Please check. Statistical analysis In lines 110, 111 and 112 the text is in Portuguese. Please check. Results In Table 2, the decimal separator for the percentages has a comma, but the manuscript is in English. Please check. The sum of the percentages of maternal age and education (Table 2) does not add up to 100%. Please check. Why don´t the percentages of Labor induction and CS before labor add up to 100%? Again, I don´t have any of the figures mentioned in the article, so I couldn´t follow the comments the authors make between lines 139 and 167. In Table 3, the decimal separator for the percentages has a comma, but the manuscript is in English. Please check. In Table 3 I suggest that instead of rate the authors use APC (average annual change) in percent. The title of the table reads “Average anual percent change in proportion”. Percent in proportion, what does that mean? In Tables 4 and 5 keepthe format of the presentation of the columns as in Table 3, ie, first the columns 2012 to 2015, then 2016 to 2019 and the last columns for 2012 to 2019. Was the t-test that the authors show obtained from the regression model or were there seral t-tests comparing the APC’s? In the methodology, the authors make no mention of this test and don´t even say anything about the level os sigificance adopted in the work. In Table 6, the authors didn´t analyze the two periods as they did in the other tables, why? In Tables 4 to 6 the APC for GA 42 and over are very high when compared to the other GA’s, but the authors make no comment on this. Why? References Reference 19 is missing the year of publication. Rêgo M, Leão DC, Luiza M, Riesco G, Schneck CA, Angelo M. Reflexões sobre o excesso de cesarianas no Brasil e a autonomia das mulheres Reflections on the excessive rates of cesareans in Brazil and the empowerment of women. : 2395–2400. In reference 24, the final part of the article´s title is missing Queiroz MR, Junqueira MER, Lay AAR, Bonilha EDA, Borba MF, Aly CMC, et al. Neonatal mortality by gestational age in days in infants born at term : A cohort study in Sao. PLoS ONE. 2022;17: 1–11. doi:10.1371/journal.pone.0277833 Reviewer #2: The aim of this study was to analyze trends in GA at birth and the contribution of associated factors in the city of São Paulo during the period 2012-2019, through an ecological time-series study, using data from Brazil’s national live births information system (SINASC). The topic is relevant to Public Health. However, the manuscript needs a set of adjustments. Introduction - I suggest inserting the paragraph about SINASC (lines 59 to 63) in the Materials and Methods section. Materials and Methods section - the objective of the study is to analyze the trends in Gestational Age at birth in the city of São Paulo. However, when considering births that occurred in the city of São Paulo, the total number of live births in the city of São Paulo is obtained, regardless of the mother’s place of residence. How can this fact affect the results and conclusions of the study? Therefore, I suggest two possibilities: to present the answer to this question in the limitations of the Discussion section, or to redo the analyses considering only live births of mothers residing in the city of São Paulo who gave birth in the city itself. - In Table 1, correct the excluded values of the variables “Gestational Age”, “birth weight” and “out of hospital births”, adding the values without information. - I suggest adding a topic to describe the variables used in the study. - Why was the variable “race/skin color of the mother”, available in SINASC, not included in the Prais-Winsten regression analysis? I suggest justifying or adding this variable. - I suggest standardizing the use of the term “Annual Percent Change (APC)” instead of “Percent change rate” in the Statistical analysis section. - In lines 110-112, translate the sentence into English. - Correct the formula in line 113, replacing “e” with “10”. - Cite the version of the SPSS software. - Cite and justify the application of the “t-test” in tables 3 and 4. Why was this statistical test not presented in table 6? - Since ensuring quality information is an essential condition for the analysis of epidemiological indicators (proportions), I suggest calculating the completeness of the variables used in the study, in the period 2012-2019. Results - In tables 3, 4, 5, 6, I suggest "APC" instead of "rate" and adding the respective p values. - In lines 172-173, the authors report that “These reductions were more pronounced in the first four-year period (2012-2015)”. I suggest applying a statistical test to identify differences between the periods 2012-2015” and “2016-2019”. - In line 183, correct the APC value “for vaginal births”. - In lines 208-209, the authors report that “Rates were higher among mothers aged 35 years and over and who had completed more than 12 years of education”. I suggest applying a statistical test to identify differences between age groups and educational levels. - Why in Table 6 were the same analyses not performed for the periods “2012-2015” and “2016-2019”? I suggest standardization according to the results presented in Tables 3, 4 and 5. - For Figures 2, 3, 4 and 5, I suggest applying a statistical test to identify differences in the proportions of the variables during the study period. Discussion - The discussion section could be more in-depth, citing other studies with similar designs (ecological time-series study) that evaluated the same outcome (trends in GA at birth) in Brazil and other countries. - Included the limitations of ecological studies and other limitations of the analysis of Health Information Systems. I suggest including a paragraph in the discussion addressing how social inequalities in the city of São Paulo and the COVID-19 pandemic can affect the conclusions of the study. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . 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