Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 30, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-49309Validation and adaptation of The Arabic version of Health-Related Quality of Life with Six Domains (HRQ-6D): A Factor and Rasch analyses studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Al-Qerem, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 05 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Additionally, how did you confirm that participants did not complete the survey multiple times? Further clarification here would be helpful. Results Section: It would be beneficial to include a figure related to the Confirmatory Factor Analysis (CFA) to support your findings visually. Table Clarification and abbreviation: In the tables, the column "Dinar" seems to be equivalent to the dollar??. Please clarify this for a broader audience, as it will improve the accessibility of the paper for international readers. Discussion Section: More detailed discussion is needed regarding comparisons with other similar scales in the literature. This would provide a stronger context for your findings and further validate the robustness of your instrument. Overall, the paper is excellent, and with these minor revisions, it will be even stronger. Best regards, Dr. Othman Alfuqaha [Note: HTML markup is below. 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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Abstract Add the abbreviation of Ar-HRQ-6D Add definition for all abbreviation Rewrite the conclusion better to include the objective of the study IntroductionC Consider describing the limitations of other HRQO instruments, and the advantage of this tool over the EQ-5D-5L which has been validated in Arabic, as a rational for investigating the EQ-5D in this study. Material and method Move the sample size calculation section to be after the study design and participants Include more specific information about the pilot study. For example, what were the demographics of the 20 participants who took part in the pilot study? How were they selected, and did they differ from the target study population? Discussion Elaborate on the implications of the study findings on clinical practice. Minor Please check the language, typos and capitalization at the beginning of the sentence, Reviewer #2: The authors validated a tool to assess HrQoL in Arabic. The study is well written, and the validation process was comprehensive and applied advance statistical methods. Nevertheless, I have few minor comments Abstract Explicitly state the actionable implications derived from the findings in the conclusion Method state how this questionnaire was circulated. Inclusion/exclusion criteria Introduction What are the challenges faced by the public to have a good HRQOL in Jordan? Elaborate more on the current medical practice in Jordan, two brief sentences with relevant references. Please make sure all abbreviations are defined the first time they are used, i.e EQ-5D Methods: Write “multinomial” instead of multinominal Did you conduct test-retest reliability? How long did it take to complete each questionnaire? Please only use a single term either survey or questionnaire not both together. Please revise the punctuation of the manuscript; a lot of periods in wrong places. Results Mention the reason 44 participants were excluded. Discussion Consider including a one more statement that highlights the strengths of the study to balance the discussion of limitations. The author acknowledges the study's limitations, including the cross-sectional design, which limits causal inference, and the lack of diversity in the sociodemographic characteristics of the participants., which may affect sample representation. This demonstrates an awareness of the study's limitations and a commitment to transparency in reporting. Mention the general application for this tool English and grammar: Although the manuscript is well written in standard English, there are several errors and typos in different sections. 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Validation and adaptation of The Arabic version of Health-Related Quality of Life with Six Domains (HRQ-6D): A Factor and Rasch analyses study PONE-D-24-49309R1 Dear Dr. <table border="0" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="datatable3" style="border-collapse: collapse; width: 678px; line-height: 14px; color: rgb(0, 0, 51); font-family: verdana, geneva, arial, helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 11.2px;"> <tbody> <tr style="background-color: rgb(244, 244, 244);"> <td style="padding: 3px; border: 1px solid rgb(255, 255, 255);">Walid Al-Qerem</td> </tr> <tr style="background-color: rgb(244, 244, 244);"> <td style="padding: 3px; border: 1px solid rgb(255, 255, 255); width: 196.094px;"> </td> </tr> </tbody></table> We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Othman A. Alfuqaha, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Dear authors, I would like to take this moment to thank you for your achievement. All of reviewers and my comments have been addressed properly. Keep up the great work! Reviewers' comments: |
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