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-->PONE-D-24-39540-->-->A Novel ABC Fractional-Order Mathematical Model for Malaria Transmission Dynamics Incorporating Treatment-Seeking Behavior--> PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Jaleta, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 07 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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It is not a requirement to cite these works. We appreciate your attention to this request. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions -->Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Partly ********** -->2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: N/A ********** -->3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** -->4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: Review reports PONE-D-24-39540 The use of a fractional-order model is innovative, especially in the context of malaria transmission. Fractional-order models capture memory and hereditary properties, offering a deeper understanding of disease dynamics compared to traditional models. The inclusion of both professional health facilities and indigenous traditional medicine into the model is a significant strength. This dual approach adds realism, as these forms of treatment coexist in many malaria-endemic regions. The authors provide a thorough mathematical exploration, including the existence and uniqueness of solutions, identification of equilibrium points (malaria-free and malaria-present), and detailed numerical simulations. This offers a solid theoretical foundation for the model. The study addresses a crucial public health issue, emphasizing the need for collaboration between traditional and professional healthcare practices, which is a relevant recommendation for policy-making in malaria-endemic regions. The analysis reveals that fractional-order effects play a crucial role in the progression of the disease. This finding is significant and opens up new avenues for understanding how the disease evolves under different treatment and intervention strategies. Comments (minor/major) for improvement 1.While the study is mathematically rigorous, the narrative flow could benefit from better structure and clarity, particularly for readers unfamiliar with fractional calculus. A more accessible introduction to fractional-order models and their relevance in epidemiological studies might help. 2.What informs your choice of using the ABC operator in modeling the transmission of malaria? Highlight some of the useful applications of the ABC derivatives to modeling of real-life scenarios. 3.Reference materials on the ABC and other fractional operatorsis inadequate, addition of the following materials will boost the readership of your work: https://doi.org/10.1140/epjp/s13360-024-04910-z; https://doi.org/10.32604/cmc.2020.011623 https://doi.org/10.1016/j.dajour.2022.100156; https://doi.org/10.1016/j.chaos.2020.109826; https://doi.org/10.1016/j.aej.2020.01.005; https://doi.org/10.1016/j.physa.2019.123816; https://doi.org/10.1016/j.chaos.2018.08.022; https://doi.org/10.1016/j.chaos.2018.07.034; https://doi.org/10.1016/j.chaos.2018.08.025 4.The numerical simulations section could be expanded with more detailed explanations of the algorithms or methods used. For example, specifying which numerical schemes were employed for solving the fractional-order system would enhance reproducibility. 5.While the model includes various parameters, a formal sensitivity analysis would be beneficial. Understanding which parameters (such as the rate of treatment or transmission rates) most significantly affect disease dynamics would provide valuable insights into which interventions are most effective. 6.The role of indigenous traditional medicine is mentioned, but the discussion on how it affects long-term disease management could be expanded. Are there any specific case studies or data that support the claims about temporary recovery and relapse? This would add depth to the discussion on traditional medicine's role in malaria treatment. 7.The study would be stronger if it included a comparison of the model’s predictions with actual data from malaria-endemic regions. Incorporating data-driven validation would further substantiate the conclusions drawn from the model. 8.The paper provides a valuable discussion on public health initiatives, but more concrete policy recommendations based on the model’s findings could be included. This would help in translating the mathematical results into actionable health strategies. Minor concerns •It would be useful to include a clearer or visualizations of the model's numerical simulations. There are some cases where tiny lines were used. •It is obvious that solution below =0.8 appears invisible, explain what makes solution in the range [0.1, 0.8] impracticable. This would help to better illustrate how the fractional-order dynamics impact disease progression over time. •Ensure that all variables and parameters are consistently defined, and consider simplifying the notation where possible to avoid overwhelming the reader. Finally, this paper presents a novel and important contribution to the study of malaria transmission dynamics using the concept of fractional calculus. The model’s incorporation of treatment-seeking behavior and traditional medicine interventions reflects real-world complexities and offers valuable insights for public health strategies. With clearer exposition, sensitivity analysis, and validation with empirical data, the manuscript has the potential to make a significant impact in the field of epidemiological modeling. I would recommend a revision for this work. Reviewer #2: The manuscript titled "A Novel ABC Fractional-Order Mathematical Model for Malaria Transmission Dynamics Incorporating Treatment-Seeking Behavior" presents an interesting and valuable contribution to the study of malaria dynamics using fractional-order calculus, particularly by integrating the important aspect of treatment-seeking behavior. The inclusion of both professional healthcare and indigenous traditional medicine is particularly noteworthy, as it adds a real-world complexity to the model, making it more applicable to developing regions where such dual treatment paradigms are prevalent. The mathematical analysis, focusing on equilibrium points and the effects of fractional orders, appears sound, and the authors' numerical simulations provide compelling insights into how fractional-order models can offer a more detailed understanding of disease progression compared to traditional integer-order models. However, there are several areas that require clarification and further development. Firstly, the authors should provide more detailed explanations of the biological significance of the fractional-order terms, as this would enhance the paper’s accessibility to a broader audience. Additionally, the paper would benefit from a more thorough sensitivity analysis, exploring how changes in key parameters impact the model’s outcomes. From a structural perspective, the manuscript could also be improved by refining the presentation of numerical results, ensuring a more cohesive discussion of the model's implications in the real world by comparing the numerical results with real data. The authors are also advised to consider citing relevant recent developments in fractional calculus, particularly the following works: A new fractional model and optimal control of a tumor-immune surveillance with non-singular derivative operator, Chaos: An Interdisciplinary Journal of Nonlinear Science, 29(8), 083127, 2019; Stability analysis and system properties of Nipah virus transmission: A fractional calculus case study, Chaos, Solitons & Fractals, 166, 112990, 2023; Fractional treatment: an accelerated mass-spring system, Romanian Reports in Physics, 74(4), 122, 2022; Dynamical behaviours and stability analysis of a generalized fractional model with a real case study, Journal of Advanced Research, 48, 157-173, 2023. These studies could provide additional context and support for the use of fractional calculus in modeling complex systems. Overall, while the paper has significant potential, I recommend major revisions to address these issues and strengthen the manuscript’s contribution to the field. Reviewer #3: The article is well organized. The viewpoint in this article and the results have merit and are of interest, thus it will be reasonable to consider the publication of this paper. I recommend acceptance of the paper for publication subject to the above minor changes aimed at improving the quality of the article. ********** -->6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy .--> Reviewer #1: Yes: Kolade M. 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A Novel ABC Fractional-Order Mathematical Model for Malaria Transmission Dynamics Incorporating Treatment-Seeking Behavior PONE-D-24-39540R1 Dear Dr. Jaleta, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. 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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** -->5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** -->6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: Review Report The study presents a novel approach to modeling malaria transmission dynamics using an ABC fractional-order model that incorporates treatment-seeking behavior, including professional health interventions and traditional medicine practices. This work is timely and significant given the global burden of malaria, particularly in developing regions. By introducing fractional-order dynamics, the authors provide a more refined understanding of disease progression and treatment efficacy. The manuscript is well-written, and the theoretical framework is sound, supported by appropriate mathematical analysis and numerical simulations. However, certain aspects can be clarified or expanded to enhance the overall quality and impact of the work. In terms of contribution: The integration of fractional-order dynamics with treatment-seeking behavior is innovative and offers new insights into malaria transmission modeling. In terms of mathematical challenge: The study thoroughly investigates the existence and uniqueness of solutions, and equilibrium points (malaria-free and malaria-present) are well-characterized. Relevance to public health: By addressing the dichotomy between professional healthcare and traditional medicine, the study underscores a crucial issue in malaria management. Policy and implications: The recommendations for fostering collaboration between traditional medicine practitioners and professional healthcare providers are actionable and relevant. This manuscript offers a significant contribution to the field of mathematical epidemiology by introducing a fractional-order model to better understand malaria transmission dynamics and the role of treatment-seeking behavior. The theoretical results and policy recommendations are highly relevant. I recommend the paper for publication in PONE Reviewer #3: This paper is fascinating and challenging. Moreover, this paper is well-organized and well-written. In my opinion, the paper deserves publication in the journal. ********** -->7. 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