Peer Review History
Original SubmissionNovember 14, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-52074Widespread dissemination of Salmonella, Escherichia coli and Campylobacter resistant to medically important antimicrobials in the poultry production continuum in CanadaPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Agunos, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 17 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Avoid citing figures or tables in the Discussion section; these should be addressed in detail within the Results section. For example, in lines 509-514, 522-524, 570, 601, 626-630, please delete the specific results, just provide an interpretation of the results and implications. Remove figure citation in line 622, please. 2. Please address the disparity in referencing style in line 629. 3. Please highlight some key limitations of this study in the last paragraph of the discussion section. 4. Ensure that the conclusions are presented as a separate section, distinct from the Discussion. In the Conclusion section, succinctly summarize the key findings of your study and their broader implications. In the final paragraph, provide actionable recommendations or outline potential future research directions based on your study findings to guide further exploration in the field. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is a credible work in establishing the AMR and AMU in poultry production in Canada. However, see the minor revisions included. However, I have a few minor suggestions for improvement. Please see the revisions I’ve noted below. General The in-text citation is not consistent: PLOS one policy states, “In the text, cite the reference number in square brackets (e.g., “We used the techniques developed by our colleagues [19] to analyze the data”). PLOS uses the numbered citation (citation-sequence) method and first six authors, et al.” See PLOS One policy regarding nomenclature “Write in italics (e.g., Homo sapiens). Write out in full the genus and species, both in the title of the manuscript and at the first mention of an organism in a paper. After first mention, the first letter of the genus name followed by the full species name may be used (e.g., H. sapiens). Line 390, Line 409-417 and other sections. Methods Sample Collection: The methods describe the sampling process from various bird groups, but the exact number of farms involved in the study is not specified. Could you clarify how many farms were included in the sampling for each group of birds (broiler breeders, farm broiler chickens, and slaughtered broiler chickens)? Additionally, it would be helpful to know if the number of farms varied by sampling group or over the study timeframe." Regarding confidentiality for participating establishments, designating Farm 1, 2…. That is enough. Results/Discussion You stated that a χ2 test was performed to identify significant mean group differences in % of resistance among study samples in the methods section, but nothing was mentioned about this in the result. Even if the results were not significant, they should be included in the results. Line 360: The manuscript states in the Results section, "Molecular analysis (not shown) indicated that these isolates are mobilized colistin resistant-1 (mcr-1) gene negative." PLOS ONE requires all data supporting the study's findings to be accessible. I recommend including the molecular analysis results in the text or supplementary material to ensure transparency and reproducibility or this statement should be omitted. For heat maps, on the y-axis, kindly include the species or names of the bacteria at each node or a color key to show which organisms/species are at each node. Fig 5. Number of Salmonella serovars recovered from chickens,, but there is no mention of the serovars 'I:8,20:-:26' and 'i:8,20:i:-' in the result and discussion section. Could you clarify whether these serovars have yet to be identified or if they are new serovars that have not been previously reported in the study? Further details on their classification or status would help to better interpret the results." Reviewer #2: Comments The Canadian Integrated Program for Antimicrobial Resistance Surveillance (CIPARS) monitors Escherichia coli, Salmonella and Campylobacter and their resistance to antimicrobials in broiler chickens at the farm and slaughter plant levels. The study assessed the levels of the aforementioned bacteria and their antimicrobial resistance in view of the fact that resistance genes can be transmitted vertically from parents to their offspring. It was found that broiler breeders carry foodborne bacteria and exhibit resistance to antimicrobials. Recommendation The manuscript is well written. The theme of the research, drug resistance, is critical to health delivery, be they human beings or lower animals 9vetrinary). The paper is therefore recommended for publication. Reviewer #3: The study provides a good overview of microbial presence and their resistance to antimicrobial agents. The authors did a commendable job in defining the problem and drawing clear conclusions. Additionally, I appreciate the suggestion for further investigation to understand whether there are any genetic explanations behind the increase in resistance. Given their work, I would recommend the paper for publication, but a few adjustments should be made before making it publicly available. Although the results are understandable, the sentence in lines 38-40 can be confusing as it may imply that the susceptibility was for all microbes, which could affect the understanding of the next sentence (lines 40-42). Therefore, the authors need to specify that the highest susceptibility is from E. coli in the sentence: “Broiler breeders had the highest susceptibility (54%) to all antimicrobials compared to farm (36%) and slaughtered (35%) broiler chickens.” In line 144, “a small proportion of flocks in two provinces were sampled in early 2022,” it would be appreciated if the authors specify that proportion and which provinces they are referring to. Unless I missed it in the paragraphs, is there any reason why the sample size (N) of slaughtered broiler chickens is different across the microbial agents (Table 1)? Line 291: Add CI after 95%. “Of the broiler breeder isolates, 7.5% (95% 6.3-8.9%) were resistant to three or more antimicrobial classes.” Another minor change should be made to the tables to ensure consistency with the colors. Also, ensure consistency when referring to figures (e.g., Fig vs. Figure). Finally, although it may not be technically required, reporting the p-values or using FDR, and conducting a multiple comparison analysis would be appreciated to check differences among all groups (breeders, farm, and slaughtered chickens) rather than limiting the comparisons to breeders only. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #1: Yes: Damilola Odumade Reviewer #2: Yes: Taiwo Akindahunsi Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for your contribution to the science of antimicrobial resistance. This is a well-written work. Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #1: Yes: Damilola Odumade Reviewer #3: No ********** |
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