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PONE-D-25-04412Transmissible antimicrobial resistance in Escherichia coli isolated from household drinking water in Ibadan, NigeriaPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Falodun, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 12 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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To align with this guideline, please update your reference list by incorporating more recent literature from the past five years while ensuring that older references are limited to key foundational studies. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: N/A Reviewer #3: N/A ********** 3. 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PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: line 39 Author may like to add "good" so it reads "... good quality water..." line 43 Author may need to add "antimicrobial so it reads "... antimicrobial resistant genes..." lines 53&54 We have recently reported proximal wells of different households can contain genetically indistinguishable strains such that household water is a vehicle for the clonal expansion of resistant bacteria...Include reference!! Line 62 25 isolates from how many households? The number of households samples would be good to reflect. It's possible this may have been described in the previous publication but this manuscript is a stand alone so you may need to provide a synopsis of key points in the methods. Line 63 Do you mean to say "municipal areas"? Line 190 &191 How many household were sampled in total? This is especially for someone who has not and may not be going back to read your previous publication. Lines 279-286 Are there studies that have reported similar or different findings in well, borehole and/or water from other open sources? It will be helpful to discuss these findings in reference to such findings. If there are such findings then, you may not need to bother. It is good to talk about the implication of these findings but who else is talkin about them? This gives a fair idea of what other researchers are saying about this problem. Line 318-319 Just wondering if there are studies that have reported such similarities in water sources within similar distances apart. Line 339-340 Has there been reports that water obtained from these wells and wells around the study are is consumed without treatment? Have there been studies that show water treatment could reduce this risks? Since this water sources are largely private, would you suggest sensitization on water treatment, if this is an effective control measure? Reviewer #2: I commend the authors for conducting a well-designed and timely study on the transmissible antimicrobial resistance of Escherichia coli from household drinking water. It is my opinion that the integration of WGS and conjugation experiments adds significant value to the understanding of ARG dissemination in environmental reservoirs in Ibadan. The study addresses an important public health concern and contributes valuable insights into the potential risks posed by multidrug-resistant E. coli in drinking water sources especially in the study area. The methodology is well-detailed, and the findings are clearly presented. I particularly appreciate the discussion’s emphasis on public health implications and the need for water treatment before consumption in those areas. Below, I provide some comments and suggestions that may help further strengthen the manuscript. ABSTRACT Page 1 Line 16: Do you mean 25 E.coli ISOLATES? Please write this correctly INTRODUCTION Lines 53 - 54: It seems you are referring to a previous study that you conducted here. Please provide the citation and reference for this report or study. METHODS Lines 62-65: since the readers may not necesarily have access to your previous study, i suggest you provide more information concerning how this data was collected. Also, this concerning data collected in different locations can also be better presented on a map. Were the sampling sites chosen systematically or based on convenience? what is the justification for the number of samples collected? Is there a reason why different number of samples were collected at different locations? What was the reason for selecting these differnt locations? was this based on prior contamination reports, random selection or simply because of accessibility? You see why it is important to provide more context about the data? Line 80: Can you confirm if multiple replicates were performed to ensure reliability? Line 88: How were sequencing errors or assembly artifacts handled? Was this discussed in the previous study? It would be interesting to know. Lines 110 - 118: What was the rationale for using solid media for conjugation instead of liquid mating? Also, it is not clear from this description if you included appropriate controls. How did you rule out spontaneous mutations or contamination? This is not clear in your description here. Was a known conjugative strain used as a positive control? just to understand how the conjugation system was validated RESULTS Line 135: 100% is not a majority but its the total. Its better to say "All were resistant to erythromycin" Line 149-150: This explanation should be left for the discussion section DISCUSSION Lines 285 - 286: What is the public health implication of this finding? This will be a good place to include the implications here. Lines 296-298: It is important to state the public health implications of this finding. Also how does this finding compare to studies from other regions with similar water quality challenges? Lines 338 - 340: What are the strengths of your study? It is important to highlight them here in the discussion. You have quite profound results, what limitations might affect the interpretation of these results? Could other factors (e.g.Small sample size, biofilm formation, water treatment practices e.t.c) influence the findings? It is important to consider external factors affecting AMR persistence in water systems. Reviewer #3: I have thoroughly reviewed the manuscript and found no errors or areas that require revision. The study is well-designed, the data are well-documented, and the conclusions are well-supported. The manuscript is clear, coherent, and contributes valuable insights to the field. I have no additional comments or suggestions for improvement. ********** 6. 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Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The author has addressed all the comments identified during my review. The manuscript presents a good addition to the body of knowledge of water contamination and water safety. Therefore, I recommend it for publication. Reviewer #2: Authors have satisfactorily responded to all my comments and questions and can now proceed with the publication process. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #1: Yes: Igbaver Ieren Reviewer #2: Yes: ABDULHAKEEM Abayomi OLORUKOOBA ********** |
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