Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 25, 2025 |
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PONE-D-25-03088Cognitive Costs and Gait Parameters During Single- and Dual-Task Conditions: A Comparative Study in Individuals With and Without Non-Specific Neck PainPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Moustafa, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 02 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Ravi Shankar Yerragonda Reddy, Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2. We noticed you have some minor occurrence of overlapping text with the following previous publication(s), which needs to be addressed: -https://doi.org/10.3390/jcm13164653 In your revision ensure you cite all your sources (including your own works), and quote or rephrase any duplicated text outside the methods section. Further consideration is dependent on these concerns being addressed. 3. In the online submission form, you indicated that the data underlying the results presented in this study are available from the corresponding author, Prof. Ibrahim M. Moustafa (iabuamr@sharjah.ac.ae), upon request. All PLOS journals now require all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript to be freely available to other researchers, either 1. In a public repository, 2. Within the manuscript itself, or 3. Uploaded as supplementary information. This policy applies to all data except where public deposition would breach compliance with the protocol approved by your research ethics board. If your data cannot be made publicly available for ethical or legal reasons (e.g., public availability would compromise patient privacy), please explain your reasons on resubmission and your exemption request will be escalated for approval. Additional Editor Comments: Academic editor comments The hypothesis is not explicitly stated in the introduction. Clearly define whether the study expects NSNP to negatively impact both gait and cognitive performance during dual-task conditions and specify the anticipated effects on specific gait parameters. The objective should also be more precise; rather than stating the study "evaluates the effects," explicitly mention whether the focus is on gait speed, stride length, or another parameter and whether cognitive cost is expected to increase. Participant demographics lack information on physical activity levels and ergonomic habits, both of which may influence gait performance. These factors should be controlled or at least reported, as prolonged sitting or prior physical activity could confound the results. The exclusion criteria do not mention whether participants with previous concussions, vestibular disorders, or chronic pain conditions outside of NSNP were excluded, which could impact gait and cognitive performance. The cognitive task complexity is not well described. The manuscript states that participants performed simple mathematical computations, but there is no mention of task difficulty variation or standardization across participants. It is unclear whether all participants completed identical problems or if they were adjusted for individual cognitive ability. If the cognitive task was too simple, it may not have imposed a sufficient cognitive load, potentially underestimating the impact of NSNP. The manuscript should provide specific examples of these computations and clarify whether response accuracy and time were recorded. Pain assessment is limited to a single VAS rating without accounting for variability during the experiment. Given that pain levels may fluctuate, it is critical to report whether pain intensity was reassessed before and after gait trials. Additionally, psychological factors such as stress, anxiety, or fatigue, which can influence cognitive cost, were not evaluated. Including a validated measure of these variables would strengthen the findings and rule out confounding effects. The results section lacks effect size interpretations beyond statistical significance. While Cohen’s d is reported, there is no discussion of whether the observed differences are clinically meaningful. For example, certain gait changes may be statistically significant but fall within a range of natural variability, making them negligible in practical terms. The impact of NSNP on single-task gait is understated; although most parameters did not differ significantly, the discussion should explore whether compensatory mechanisms allow individuals to maintain normal gait in low-demand conditions. Data visualization is limited. Tables present numerical differences, but scatter plots or box plots would better illustrate group variability. A correlation heatmap could provide a more intuitive understanding of the relationships between pain intensity, gait alterations, and cognitive cost. Regression analysis would help assess the predictive value of pain intensity on gait impairment and cognitive cost, which is not currently explored. The discussion repeats many results instead of critically analyzing their implications. The explanation of neurophysiological mechanisms is underdeveloped. While sensorimotor disruptions and proprioceptive deficits are mentioned, there is little discussion of how these factors interact with central cognitive processes. Prior research suggests that chronic pain alters prefrontal cortex function and increases cognitive load by disrupting attention and working memory. This literature should be incorporated to strengthen the mechanistic interpretation. The clinical implications are vague. The manuscript states that "targeted interventions" are needed but does not specify what these might entail. Would physical therapy alone suffice, or should interventions include cognitive training alongside musculoskeletal treatment? Ergonomic modifications, exercise programs, and dual-task training strategies should be discussed in relation to the findings. Limitations are not adequately addressed. The cross-sectional design prevents causal conclusions, yet the discussion does not explicitly acknowledge this limitation. The sample consists only of university students, limiting generalizability to other populations, such as older adults or individuals with chronic musculoskeletal disorders. Gender differences in pain perception and cognitive cost are not analyzed, which is a missed opportunity given that prior research suggests women may experience greater pain sensitivity and cognitive interference. The impact of fatigue is not controlled. Repeating dual-task trials may induce fatigue, which could influence cognitive cost and gait changes. It is unclear whether participants rested between trials or whether performance declined across successive attempts. Future studies should incorporate fatigue assessments or counterbalance task order to mitigate this issue. The conclusions state that NSNP significantly increases cognitive demands during walking but do not contextualize this finding within broader implications. Does this mean NSNP patients are at greater risk for falls, workplace inefficiency, or academic impairment? The broader relevance of these findings should be explicitly stated. Additionally, the need for longitudinal studies is mentioned but not justified. Would tracking patients over time clarify whether dual-task impairments worsen, or would intervention studies provide more useful insights? The conclusion should specify which research directions are most urgent. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: It is recommended that the article be revised as a whole, as many parts of the text are inconsistent. The abstract should be reviewed and improved. In the introduction section, it would be better to discuss more about the title variables. In the method section, coordination between the different sections should be established. Reviewer #2: 1) Expand the Literature Review and Include More Recent and Relevant References The current literature review is somewhat limited and should be expanded to include more recent and directly relevant studies. This will strengthen the theoretical foundation of the study and ensure it aligns with the latest research developments in the field. 2) Include More References on the Dual-Task Paradigm and Cognitive Load Theory There is a lack of sufficient references specifically addressing the dual-task paradigm and cognitive load theory. Given that these concepts are central to the study, additional citations from recent literature should be included to support the discussion. 3) Clearly Define the Study Hypotheses The study does not explicitly state its hypotheses. A clear hypothesis statement should be added in the introduction, such as: "This study tests the following hypotheses:..." Explicitly defining the hypotheses will improve clarity and structure. 4) Better Explain the Neurobiological Mechanisms in the Discussion Section The discussion section needs a more detailed explanation of the neurobiological mechanisms underlying the findings. It should connect the results to previous research on how neck pain influences cognitive and motor functions through neural pathways, proprioceptive deficits, and cortical reorganization. 5) Detailed Language and Grammar Review The manuscript contains multiple grammatical and syntactical errors. Below are some specific corrections and suggestions for improvement: Incorrect: "These finding emphasizes on the need for interventions…" Correction: "These findings emphasize the need for interventions…" Issue: "Finding" should be plural ("findings"), and "emphasizes on" is incorrect; it should be "emphasizes." Incorrect: "Understanding dual-task performance can provide essentials insights into..." Correction: "Understanding dual-task performance provides essential insights into..." Issue: "Essentials insights" is incorrect; "essential insights" is the correct phrase. Also, "can provide" is redundant; "provides" is more direct. Incorrect: "It remains to be seen how mild to moderate neck pain among students affects their gait parameters, especially under dual-task conditions." Correction: "However, the effects of mild to moderate neck pain on gait parameters under dual-task conditions remain unclear." Issue: The original sentence is unnecessarily wordy and should be made more concise. Incorrect: "This observation aligns with cognitive load theory, which argues that physical discomfort and proprioceptive errors linked to neck pain can raise cognitive load, thereby negatively affecting cognitive performance." Correction: "This observation supports cognitive load theory, suggesting that physical discomfort and proprioceptive errors associated with neck pain increase cognitive load, negatively impacting cognitive performance." Issue: "Aligns with" can be replaced with "supports" for a stronger academic tone. "Can raise" should be changed to "increase" for clarity and precision. Incorrect: "By addressing neck pain and prioritizing their well-being, students can enhance their focus, productivity, and overall health[8,9]." Correction: "By managing neck pain and prioritizing their well-being, students can improve their focus, productivity, and overall health." Issue: "Addressing" is less precise than "managing" in this context. "Enhance" is more commonly used for skills, whereas "improve" is more suitable here. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Esedullah AKARAS ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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