Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 13, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-45550 Efficacy of home-based and inpatient treatment for children and adolescents in psychiatric crisis: A systematic review protocol PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Foremnik, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Comments from the editorial office : Upon internal evaluation of the reviews provided, we kindly request you to disregard the reviewer report provided by Reviewer 1. No amendments are required in response to Reviewer 1’s comments. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 03 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Is the protocol technically sound and planned in a manner that will lead to a meaningful outcome and allow testing the stated hypotheses? The manuscript should describe the methods in sufficient detail to prevent undisclosed flexibility in the experimental procedure or analysis pipeline, including sufficient outcome-neutral conditions (e.g. necessary controls, absence of floor or ceiling effects) to test the proposed hypotheses and a statistical power analysis where applicable. As there may be aspects of the methodology and analysis which can only be refined once the work is undertaken, authors should outline potential assumptions and explicitly describe what aspects of the proposed analyses, if any, are exploratory. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Is the methodology feasible and described in sufficient detail to allow the work to be replicable? Descriptions of methods and materials in the protocol should be reported in sufficient detail for another researcher to reproduce all experiments and analyses. The protocol should describe the appropriate controls, sample size calculations, and replication needed to ensure that the data are robust and reproducible. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: No ********** 4. Have the authors described where all data underlying the findings will be made available when the study is complete? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception, at the time of publication. The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics. You may also provide optional suggestions and comments to authors that they might find helpful in planning their study. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to review this protocol. It’s clear that you’ve put a lot of thought into tackling a critical area of child and adolescent mental health, especially given the rise in psychiatric crises among youth. Your approach to systematically comparing home-based and inpatient care is ambitious and has the potential to provide valuable insights for both practitioners and policymakers. That said, there are some areas that, with additional refinement, could strengthen the overall impact and clarity of the manuscript. Merits 1. Timely and Meaningful Topic: This study addresses a highly relevant topic, particularly post-COVID-19, as many healthcare systems are evaluating alternatives to traditional inpatient psychiatric care. The comparative analysis of home-based and inpatient treatments can provide critical insights for improving youth mental health services, especially in reducing stigma and enhancing family involvement. 2. Structured and Rigorous Methodology: Your adherence to PRISMA guidelines and the planned use of established assessment tools like RoB2, ROBINS-I, and GRADE demonstrates a thorough and organized approach. This rigor is essential in producing findings that stakeholders can trust and act upon. 3. Holistic Focus on Key Outcomes: The range of primary outcomes (like family functioning and psychopathology) and secondary outcomes (such as hospitalization rates) is impressive. This thoughtful outcome selection ensures a comprehensive look at both the direct and broader effects of these treatment models on young people and their families. Suggestions for Major Revision 1. Clarify Study Selection Criteria: The inclusion and exclusion criteria are a bit broad. Narrowing down these criteria, or offering more specifics, would help the reader understand exactly which studies you aim to include. This will also make it easier for future readers and researchers to interpret the findings within a well-defined scope. 2. Strengthen the Approach to Handling Heterogeneity: Given the diversity in intervention types and study designs, there’s likely to be substantial heterogeneity. It would be helpful to elaborate on how you plan to handle this in your synthesis. Specifically, describing when you might use meta-analysis versus narrative synthesis would clarify your approach and strengthen your methods section. 3. Acknowledge Potential Challenges: Considering the complexities involved in reviewing psychiatric interventions, addressing potential limitations upfront—such as the limited number of RCTs in this field or inconsistencies in intervention definitions—would provide a more balanced picture. This could help readers understand the potential scope and constraints of your review more clearly. 4. Expand on Subgroup Analysis Plans: You mentioned possible subgroup analyses by factors like age and intervention type. Specifying exactly how you intend to conduct these analyses would provide additional clarity, particularly for clinicians and researchers interested in how different demographics or intervention models impact outcomes. 5. Highlight Practical Implications for Healthcare: Since this review could inform clinical and policy decisions, adding a few thoughts on the practical implications could enhance its relevance. Outlining how the findings might translate to on-the-ground changes for clinicians or system planners could make this protocol even more compelling. Recommendation: Major Revision In sum, this protocol addresses an important topic with real-world relevance, and I believe it has significant potential. With some refinements to the scope and methodology, it will be even more robust and ready for publication. I look forward to seeing the revised version, as I think your findings will make a meaningful contribution to the field. Thank you again for sharing your work—it’s exciting to see research that could shape future directions in youth mental health care. Reviewer #2: This paper presents a systematic review protocol aimed at comparing the efficacy of home-based versus inpatient treatment for children and adolescents experiencing psychiatric crises. The protocol outlines a comprehensive methodology to evaluate treatment outcomes across multiple domains, including psychopathology, family functioning, and social functioning. It proposes to analyze both primary clinical outcomes and secondary parameters such as readmission rates and cost-effectiveness. The methodology includes a systematic search of major databases, rigorous quality assessment using standardized tools (RoB2 and ROBINS-I), and meta-analysis where appropriate. 1. The protocol's criteria for "psychiatric crisis" The protocol lacks precise clinical parameters for defining "psychiatric crisis," which could lead to inconsistencies in study selection and comparability. It is encourage that have a brief of explain about psychiatric crisis in the introduction part. 2. Figure Clarity: The figures in the paper are unclear, making it difficult to discern specific details. It is recommended to upload high-resolution images. 3. Line 22 - Author Attribution: Only one author is marked, which may lead to misunderstandings regarding contributions. Addressing these limitations will enhance the scientific rigor and practical applicability of the study's findings. Reviewer #3: This systematic review protocol aims to evaluate and compare the effectiveness and cost-effectiveness of home-based and inpatient treatments for children and adolescents in psychiatric crises. The authors propose a rigorous methodological approach, adhering to the PRISMA guidelines and incorporating a structured risk assessment using the Cochrane RoB2 and ROBINS-I tools. The study is valuable as it addresses a significant gap in understanding alternative psychiatric care for young individuals, offering potential insights into less restrictive, more family-centered treatment options. Below are specific points to consider for enhancing the manuscript: 1. While the manuscript specifies the inclusion of children and adolescents under 18 from OECD countries, further clarity on the demographic and clinical characteristics (e.g., psychiatric diagnoses) that will be included would enhance reproducibility and relevance. 2. Clarifying the operational definitions for “home-based” interventions could strengthen the manuscript, as these can vary significantly across settings and countries. 3. Including a brief justification for the chosen follow-up intervals (e.g., 1, 3-6, and 6-12 months) and their relevance to long-term outcomes would enhance readers' understanding of these selections. Reviewer #4: The manuscript presents a systematic review protocol to evaluate the effectiveness and cost-effectiveness of home-based treatment models for managing psychiatric crises in children and adolescents. This study addresses a significant gap and could provide valuable insights for healthcare providers and policymakers. Major Comments: 1. Language could be streamlined for better readability. Consider rephrasing to avoid complex, multi-clause sentences that may hinder reader comprehension. 2. The scope of inclusion and exclusion criteria regarding mixed models and family-based intervention specifics could benefit from further clarification. For example, specifying clear distinctions between what constitutes "mixed interventions" versus standalone models would help ensure replicability of the protocol. 3. The decision to limit the population to OECD countries to reduce heterogeneity is commendable, but further justification would be more beneficial as some OECD countries may have different baseline healthcare structures and outcomes which could impact results. 4. Given the diversity of interventions included, the review might also benefit from incorporating additional bias assessments relevant to intervention studies. For example, the potential for performance bias, particularly in non-randomized studies where blinding may be challenging. 5. A brief overview of the decision-analytic framework and how cost data (particularly for various health systems within OECD countries) will be standardized or adjusted would be beneficial for clarity. Minor Comments: 1. The manuscript occasionally uses varying terminology (e.g., “rehospitalization” vs. “readmission”). Consistent use of terminology throughout the text will improve clarity. 2. Lines 425–427: the choice of 10 studies as a minimum threshold could be briefly justified or referenced to support this decision. In summary, this systematic review protocol addresses an important research gap by comparing home-based and inpatient psychiatric care models for children and adolescents in crisis. With revisions, this study protocol could make a significant contribution to pediatric mental health research. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). 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Efficacy of home-based and inpatient treatment for children and adolescents in psychiatric crisis: A systematic review protocol PONE-D-24-45550R1 Dear Dr. Karolina Foremnik, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Cho-Hao Howard Lee, M.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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