Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 28, 2025 |
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PONE-D-25-03512Throwbacks That Move Us: The Dance-Inducing Power of NostalgiaPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Sidhu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please take reviewers' points constructively and respectfully address them including the critical ones. As an Academic Editor, I believe all the points that reviewers raised are valid and worth discussing. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 24 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for your manuscript reporting on an interesting piece of research. Please note the following points for review: 1. The manuscript title does not have “music” as part of it. Including “music” within the title would avoid confusion and give a clearer idea of the focus of the manuscript & research. 2. The choice of only ages under 30 for participants needs to be justified further. With regard to nostalgia, this is significantly more relevant for older people. Whilst I understand the reasons for only including under 30s in this research, the issue of age does need to be addressed in more detail. 3. In the conclusion, more needs to be added about the limitations of the research (including as per point 2 above). 4. More could also be added about potential implications of your research - how can a greater understanding of the dance-inducing qualities of nostalgic music improve how we treat those with physical movement problems, for example? Reviewer #2: This is a very interesting research article exploring the desire to dance, tap, or move for nostalgic and familiar songs. Furthermore, this investigates the role of nostalgia among young persons and their desire to move. However, the relatively short article can be expanded with some further information to bestow clarity to the reader. In the Procedure section (Lines : 122 - 133), the manner in which the stimuli were presented is not immediately clear. It is imparative that the reader understand the way the experiment was conducted. I would include a block diagram with the user interface presented to the participant explaining the flow of the experiment. Were the stimuli randomized to avoid order biases in participants ? This information is crucial and should be included. The data analysis conducted on mean ratings is outlined well. You are using a parametric analysis which is understandable with the large sample size used. Partial eta squared values are reported as effect sizes (Excellent!). However, this should be accompanied by a wording of how big the effect is (e.g. Large effect, Medium effect and so on.) Lines 184 - 195, the author mentions post-hoc test. Which post-hoc tests were conducted ? students t-test. There are multiple comparisons yet no mention of p-value corrections. This information needs to be included. If t-tests were used, were degrees of freedom adjusted if variances were different ? Overall, I believe this work will see marked improvements if the above information is provided. For this reason, I am willing to accept pending "Major" revisions. P.S* The attention check which requires the participant to rate everything as 100 should be included throughout the experiement at random rather than once halfway! This ensures sustained engagement over the full course of the experiment. Reviewer #3: The authors present an interesting topic, but the study design has major weaknesses that must be resolved. In its current state, the findings are confounded by many variables, making it difficult to draw meaningful conclusions. Many of these issues can be addressed with a robust study design and methodological improvements. Better control for the confounding factors is necessary. As they also acknowledge in the discussion, the data suggests that the groove ratings are clearly influenced by familiarity and liking. Only for the dance, nostalgia but not familiarity predicted how much people wanted to dance. In addition to familiarity, various musical features that are known to influence groove perception (e.g., syncopation, micro timing, tempo range, attack onsets), none of which are mentioned nor further explored in the manuscript. Are the early and late releases comparable or do they differ in terms of their musical features that are generally known to affect groove perception? Secondly, in several places in the manuscript, the authors draw much larger conclusions than their findings suggest. This is misleading to the reader. For example, findings specific to desire to dance are attributed to the link between nostalgia and groove as a whole. In various places, causality is inferred from correlations. Again, findings related to dance training are interpreted in a way that the authors draw wider conclusions than the data indicates. Third, several important methodological issues are not addressed. The hypotheses are vague and the analysis plan does not fully follow the hypotheses laid earlier in the manuscript. There was no mention of employing any technique to control for sequence effects. Did you take any measures to account for these? Decisions related to sampling were also not clear. Did you do any a-priori power analysis to determine the sample size? What was the stopping rule? On a separate note, I selected "Yes" to the data availability question above (Q3), but the link to the data on OSF is not provided. Hence the data were not available at the time of review. The authors should either provide the link or mention in the additional data availability information section that the URLs/accession numbers/DOIs will be available only after acceptance of the manuscript for publication. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). 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Throwbacks That Move Us: The Dance-Inducing Power of Nostalgic Songs PONE-D-25-03512R1 Dear Dr. Sidhu, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. 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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for your revisions, addressing the concerns and issues raised. Just one small grammar fix: line 117 - “demographic’s” should not have an apostophe, i.e. should be “demographics”. Reviewer #2: The author has applied all of the suggested corrections from me. Therefore, I am satisfied in terms of having this manuscript accepted for publication. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Aravindan Joseph Benjamin ********** |
| Formally Accepted |
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PONE-D-25-03512R1 PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Sidhu, I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now being handed over to our production team. At this stage, our production department will prepare your paper for publication. This includes ensuring the following: * All references, tables, and figures are properly cited * All relevant supporting information is included in the manuscript submission, * There are no issues that prevent the paper from being properly typeset You will receive further instructions from the production team, including instructions on how to review your proof when it is ready. Please keep in mind that we are working through a large volume of accepted articles, so please give us a few days to review your paper and let you know the next and final steps. Lastly, if your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at customercare@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Seung-Goo Kim Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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