Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 25, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-27511Comparison of ultrasound and dynamic MRI for the measurement of diaphragmatic excursion: a prospective single-center studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Delplancke, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR: ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 09 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear Authors; This is a good paper. It only lacks good comparison with RECENT literature such as the following SUGGESTIVE papers: https://publications.ersnet.org/content/erj/58/5/2100137.abstract https://link.springer.com/article/10.1186/s12890-021-01441-6 https://link.springer.com/article/10.1186/s12903-023-03558-y https://www.tandfonline.com/doi/full/10.2147/IJGM.S478136 https://link.springer.com/article/10.1186/s43168-024-00315-9 https://link.springer.com/article/10.1007/s40477-021-00570-2 https://link.springer.com/article/10.1007/s00247-022-05430-7 The above links are ONLY examples, you may consider all or part of them but the MRI vs. Ultrasound are crucial (they need to be considered), or you may add more by visiting google scholar searching recent works in the field. You need to illustrate how your results are different from recent attempts. I expect that this should be written in the text somewhere in the Discussion section of your paper. Subsequently, you need to explain how that this paper has not been addressed by other scholars (i.e. ONLY what are the differences to claim this strong statement?) Finally, It is very important to explain how the same title of this paper was found in Google Scholar, the link is below: https://www.atsjournals.org/doi/pdf/10.1164/ajrccm-conference.2021.203.1_MeetingAbstracts.A4669. Minor concern: In Figure 1, the sum of patients in the first block (Upper block) should be 45 not 44. Reviewer #2: Thank you so much to the authors for allowing me to review their research. Abstract: The methodology should be clearly summarized to indicate the research approach, setting and data collection methods. Introduction: The introduction seems to be well written, but the authors need to ensure that all information should be references accordingly if it is not general knowledge. Line 62 - 63 page 2 should include a reference. Materials and: Methods This section requires careful attention as there are several areas that are not clearly presented. There is no clear presentation of the research methodology and approach that was used. I suggest including the geographical area where the study was performed even if the actual institution is not included. There is lack of detail regarding the setting in terms of the level of health care, modalities available etc. Include a heading to cover the population and sampling clearly and in detail because the numbers (N and n) are not adding up correctly. N which should represent the total population included in the study is not correctly presented in several areas in the study. Ensure that all your supplementary files are linked and referenced correctly in text. Data collection should also be clearly outlined as the information provided is vague. Results: The information in Table 1 does not seem entirely balanced or internally consistent. There is a mismatch in sample size the table indicates n=41, fig 1 suggests a total n = 45 while a sum of subcategories (18 + 26_ totals n = 44. The gender breakdown specifies 25 males (61%) but does not provide the number of females, which is necessary to complete the demographic profile. Some subcategories fail to add up to the total sample size n=14. For example, in Diaphragmatic plication, the percentages total 78% (n = 3 + n = 2 + n = 5 + n = 4). For Smoking history, the sum of current smoker (n = 9), former smoker (n = 8), and never smoked (n = 24) equals 41, which aligns with N. However, this pattern should be consistent across all variables. There are also incomplete subcategory definitions in your table. Some variables (e.g., Prior surgery with high risk of DD) provide subcategories (e.g., thoracic, cardiac, abdominal), but the sum of these does not align with the total count. Example: Subcategories under "Prior surgery" add up to 30, which exceeds the total N = 41. there is lack of clarity in percentages and units. Percentages in the table should be double-checked: Example: For "BMI > 25", 26 patients (63%) are consistent with N = 41, but for other rows (e.g., "Obese"), percentages and counts are less clear. Also have a look at the Functional respiratory test (FTR) Subcategories: • The breakdown under "Patients with a difference between supine and standing positions" is problematic: Total = 13 (32.5%), with a split of 9 (69%) negative and 4 (31%) positive. However, these percentages should align with n = 13, not the total N. Discussion and conclusion: Align after completion of amendments. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Comparison of ultrasound and dynamic MRI for the measurement of diaphragmatic excursion: a prospective single-center study PONE-D-24-27511R1 Dear Dr. Delplancke, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Introduction Line 62 - 63 page 2 should include a reference. - Reference still not included “This dysfunction results from a neuromuscular disorder that 65 can involve the central nervous system, a peripheral neuropathy, or a myopathy.” REF Methods and materials Setting page 2, line 40-42: “Prospective single-center study conducted at a tertiary university hospital, where extensive expertise in diaphragmatic US and MRI was available. Consecutive outpatients referred for a dynamic thoracic MRI were enrolled.” - This information should be removed from the abstract and added under the sub-heading ‘setting’ page 10 and line 249-251: - Figure 1 and 2 are provided as supplementary files. I suggest labelling them as e.g. "Figure S1," "Figure S2," and so on, to distinguish them from figures that are typically placed in the main manuscript. Ensure that the caption for each supplementary figure should include a detailed caption explaining its content and relevance. This discrepancy results from the fact that some patients had more than 1 diaphragmatic disorder or more than 1 surgery at risk for DD, therefore it doesn’t strictly add up. To clarify, we have modified the caption of Table 1: “Some patients had more than one type of surgery at risk for DD or more than one diaphragmatic disorder” - This should be clearly outlined in the text. If the authors have done so - thanks. If not please add it. Again, this is because some patients underwent more than one surgery at risk for the diaphragm, i.e.: thoracic + abdominal. We hope that the new caption of Table 1 clarifies this. - This should be clearly outlined in the text. If the authors have done so - thanks. If not please add it. We apologize for the lack of clarity surrounding this point. In fact, 13 patients underwent specific “diaphragmatic FRT” measuring the difference in vital capacity between supine and standing positions. Among those, 9/13 (69%) had less than 15% of difference between the 2 positions (confirming the absence of DD), whereas 4/13 (31%) had a difference considered positive (>20%) confirming the existence of DD. We have clarified this directly in Table 1: “patients with an FRT measuring the difference in vital capacity between standing and supine positions”. - All this information should be outlined clearly in the manuscript to ensure that the results are clearly outlined to transform raw data into meaningful insights, thus helping the manuscript to communicate its scientific value effectively. This action underscores the credibility of the research and fosters a deeper understanding of its implications. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #1: Yes: Abdel-Razzak Al-Hinnawi Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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