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PONE-D-24-21268Hyaluronic acid: function and location in the urothelial barrier for interstitial cystitis/ bladder pain syndrome, an in vitro studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. van Ginkel, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Thank you for submitting the following manuscript to PLOS ONE. Please revise the manuscript according to the reviewers' comments and upload the revised file. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 15 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript by Van Ginkel and collaborators is interesting. However, there are some points that need to be addressed by the authors. 1. The manuscript is not easily readable for not experts in the field. For example, the authors should clearly indicate what is and the mechanism of action of protamine sulfate. In the introduction should be added a brief explanation of how GAG and in particular hyaluronan is synthesized explaining the role of HASes. TEER technique should be briefly explained. 2. The authors should measure or localize TSG6 which is a HA binding protein with could have a role in the barrier function modifying HA. 3. The authors should show controls for the experiments with hyaluronidase and PS indicating a remodeling of the ECM. 4. Authors should check abbreviations throughout the text (i.e., sometimes they used HA sometimes hyaluronic acid...). 5. What is the molecular mass of commercial HA the authors added to digested samples (GAG-therapies)? What about if a different MW HA was used? 6. 4-methylumbelliferone, an aspecific inhibitor of HA synthases, could be used to show the role of HA in the barrier. Reviewer #2: This is a very interesting research and article on function and location of HA in the urothelial cell. A few comments for the authors: Introduction: the authors should emphasize more on the novelty of this research, what will this research add to the existing publications on this topic. Methods: the authors should add a justification of the use of porcine model for this research, since they used a human bladder tissue as well. What was the aim of the comparison between the human and porcine tissue? Discussion: Is there any explanation as to why enzymatic digestion of HA in cell cultures did not lead to an increased permeability, moreover resulted in a more impermeable barrier? Why is this different with the removal of CS? Another interesting phenomenon is that damage did not alter the expression of genes associated with barrier function, is there any explanation which could be added in the discussion? Reviewer #3: In this manuscript, van Ginkel at al show the localization of hyaluronic acid in tissue specimen of normal human and porcine urothelium, as well as evaluate different GAG replenishment therapies, used in clinical practice for treating interstitial cystitis, in in vitro model. Though the manuscript presents novel information and is potentially of interest, it presents with some flaws and it might lead to premature conclusions. Some additional experiments are required as well as improvements in the manuscript before it would be suitable for publication. 1. The third objective was to evaluate GAG therapies on an inflamed in vitro model, however, treating cells with PS does not lead to a substantial inflammation as seen in patients with IC/BPS. An in vitro model that employes PS together with another agent, such as LPS, TNFa or H2O2 should be used to better explain the effects of GAG therapies. I would strongly encourage the authors to add these additional experiments. 2. Methods: in all descriptions the number of biological replicates and technical replicates (number of independent experiments) is missing. Please add this information. Please also add how many human and porcine biopsies were used. 3. Why was the in vitro cell culture not prepared from human tissue since it was available? 4. Why did you decide to use different differentiation protocols for different experiments? If a very high TEER was achieved after 3 weeks of culture, why these cells were not used in subsequent experiments? 5. Why did you only evaluate gene expression of tight junctions? These should also be evaluated using ICH or IF, since gene expression does not always reflect the protein expression nor the distribution of tight junctions. 6. Statistical analysis: which post-hoc test was used to assess the differences between groups? Please add. 7. You state that HA was most abundantly present in the basal membrane of the urothelium, however, this should be labeled to justify your findings. 8. In figures with ICH, the scale bars are missing. 9. All figures should include information on how many biological/technical replicates, the labeling or other analysis was performed. 10. All figures should include an explanation of what we see: is it mean or median+/- SD, SEM? 11. Figure 3a: there is no legend explaining what individual lines represent. 12. Figure 4: please add what does the dotted line at y=1 indicate. Please also change graphs to show each individual value of a biological/technical replicate. Were there no significant results in this graph? 13. Why would GAG therapy increase inflammatory markers? I am not sure that the explanation about acute phase response is enough. If this is correct, then the expression of other markers that indicate resolution of inflammation or tissue fibrosis should also be evaluated. 14. If the integrity of urothelium recovers anyway after 24h then what is the point of treatment with GAG replenishment therapy? As written before, additional experiments with a more prominent inducement of inflammation should be employed. 15. For in vitro differentiation of NPU cells achieving high TEER values after 3 weeks, and resemblance with normal human urothelium, the protocol has already been described in literature. Please add the following citations: https://link.springer.com/article/10.1007/s00418-014-1265-3 https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0887233317302242?via%3Dihub 16. Why would be beneficial to generate a stronger urothelial barrier in healthy urothelium? But then in damaged urothelium, this therapy fails to improve the barrier? You are trying to replicate IC/BPS in which there is a leaky urothelium, do you implicate that this kind of therapy should not be used in IC/BPS? How would your findings translate into clinical settings? 17. Why would a mild inflammatory response increase impermeability of urothelium? In IC/BPS, there is an inflammatory response with increased permeability – inflammatory mediators are thought to further increase the damage of urothelial cells and further increase permeability though a positive feedback mechanism? How do you comment on this? Reviewer #4: Presented manuscript deals with the function and occurrence of hyaluronic acid in urinary bladder epithelia. The manuscript is well written and uses appropriate methods to validate its claims. However, there are some minor issues that need to be resolved 1. Materials and methods, line 135 - The term »binocular microscopy« does not indicate the type of analysis. Bright field microscopy would be more appropriate in this case. 2. Results, line 193 – It is unusual to use the term basal membrane of the urothelium because in this multilayered epithelium each cell has its own basal part of the membrane. Since the hyaluronic acid is most likely located extracellularly its location can be described as occurring at the basement membrane or basal lamina. Fig. 2A.2 shows the situation after hialuronidase treatment, so that no labelling is visible. Presumably Fig. 2A.3 is supposed to show the porcine biopsy. 3. In Material and Methods section it is not described whether GAGs and hyaluronidase were added from the apical or basal side of the inserts. Since most proteoglicans and GAGs are located at the basal side, application from the apical side may not be effective if the epithelium is undamaged. For this reason, the application procedure should be described in the Material and Methods section. 4. Results, lines 267, 268 – Since treatment with low and high molecular mass GAG can give different results on the expression of genes for GAG or IL synthesis, the molecular mass of HA used in these experiments should be reported here? 5. Discussion, line 313 From the provided immages it is not possible to determine if HA is attached to the memberanes or even if this HA is located extracellularly or inside the cells. Aditionally, authors should explain what membrane-bound HA production means? HA is secreted from the cells by exocytosis and can only be attached to the membranes afterwards. 6. Discussion, lines 334,335 – Since inflammation usually decreases barrier function, the authors should explain how it could increase the impermeability of the urothelium? 7. Discussion, line 349 – The authors should explain why the addition of GAGs would increase the synthesis of new GAGs. Normally, the oversupply of molecules in the tissue decreases the synthesis of these molecules. The explanation should be confirmed by relevant literature. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). 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Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In this updated version of the manuscript, the Authors properly replied to all my concerns raised during the first round of revision. Reviewer #3: (No Response) Reviewer #4: The authors appropriately corrected all the outlined issues thus the manuscript is in my opinion suitable for further procedure. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: No ********** |
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