Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 27, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-20166Allopurinol attenuates development of Porphyromonas gingivalis LPS-induced cardiomyopathy in micePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Okumura, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Your manuscript was reviewed by two experts and both of them provided positive feed with minor comments. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 24 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In the manuscript, the authors utilize a PG-LPS-induced cardiac dysfunction model to investigate the role of oxidative stress in the pathogenesis of cardiovascular disease in periodontitis patients. The results indicate that treatment with the xanthine oxidase inhibitor allopurinol improves cardiac phenotype in PG-LPS-treated mouse. Detailed comments are listed below: Major comments: 1. The results suggest that ROS is the key factor mediating the progression of heart disease in the PG-LPS model. To enhance reliability, the authors should provide additional evidence beyond 8-OHdG staining to support that allopurinol decreases ROS content in the heart. Suggested methods include qPCR for oxidative stress markers (e.g., gp22phox, gp40phox, gp47phox, gp91phox), dihydroethidium (DHE) staining, myocardial 3-nitrotyrosine (3-NT) content measurement, or immunohistochemistry of 3-NT. 2. Figure 6 indicates that calcium leakage is the trigger for heart dysfunction in PG-LPS-treated mice. Besides CaMKII and RyR2 phosphorylation, further evidence supporting calcium handling impairment in cardiomyocytes would be beneficial, such as Recan1.4 mRNA levels, which indicate increased cytosolic calcium. 3. Allopurinol acts as a competitive inhibitor of xanthine oxidase at low concentrations and as a noncompetitive inhibitor at high concentrations. According to the literature, allopurinol is expected to inhibit the activity of xanthine oxidase without affecting its expression level. However, the manuscript indicates that allopurinol treatment decreases XO expression, which requires explanation. 4. Although allopurinol is an XO inhibitor, Figures 5A and 6 suggest it also inhibits NOX4. The authors need to explain this observation. 5. Several antibody details provided in the manuscript are incorrect: catalogue number #AB765P is for Collagen type 1, not CaMKII; #NB600-549 is for PTTG1, not collagen 3; #AB767-P has no related antibody; #ab1092 is for RFXANK, not XO; and #2775 is for LC3B, not BAX. Minor comments: 1. Please verify the scale bar size in Figure 2A; it appears inconsistent with the images and does not seem to be 100 μm. 2. Please verify the image sizes in Figure 3A; the LPS group appears to have a different magnification compared to other groups. 3. The protein mass of RyR2 is 565 kDa, but the western blot shows a band at 350 kDa. The pan RyR2 antibody should show a band at 565 kDa according to the instructions. 4. In Figure 6, "Ca2+ leakagel" should be corrected to "Ca2+ leakage." Reviewer #2: The authors used a model of periodontitis cardiomyopathy with a low dose of a specific LPS from P. gengivalis to investigate the participation of xanthine oxidase (XO) in this process through allopurinol treatment. They showed, through functional and molecular methods that XO inhibition could prevent the development of cardiomyopathy, remodeling, and oxidative stress. This paper is straightforward, clear, and elegantly conducted. Nevertheless, I have some points I would like to be addressed. Overall, the text is clear, yet some constructions are a bit odd or unusual. There are some typos and repeated sentences that need to be checked (second paragraph of Material and Methods, you bring up ‘was directly in drinking water’ twice). You should also respect the order of the parenthesis. From the most external to the most internal, the order should be {[()]}. Nevertheless, I liked the transparency of displaying the results in the text as well. Did you use any kind of normality test? I would recommend using a normality test. Although your data seems to be all in the Gaussian distribution, it is always good to submit it to a statistical test. Also, this is important for determining which test you should be using. You mention in the western blot segment of the material and methods that you excluded outliers. Did you use any kind of statistical test (e.g. Grubbs) to determine which would be the outlier samples that could be excluded? If so, please, describe it in your statistical analysis segment. Nevertheless, the manuscript is good and shall be considered for publication after those corrections. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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<div>PONE-D-24-20166R1Allopurinol attenuates development of Porphyromonas gingivalis LPS-induced cardiomyopathy in micePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Okumura, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Your manuscript was reviewed by same reviewers and one of them suggested few minor modifications. Please address those comments and a quick editorial decision without further review will taken after addressing those comments. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 31 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Partha Mukhopadhyay, Ph.D. Section Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have already revised the manuscript which meets my previous requirements. But there are still some minor problems as outlined below. 1.The figure title of Fig5 and Fig6 are the same. 2. In Fig7, there’s an arrow from allopurinol to ROS, and it appears that allopurinol increases ROS production which contradicts the findings. The authors need to modify the schematic diagram to make it more intuitive for the readers. 3. In the legend of Fig7, the author focused on describing their previous discovery without mentioning their finding that allopurinol can protect heart from PG-LPS induced cardiac dysfunction. Reviewer #2: The authors properly acknowledged the concerns raised in my review. They improved considerably the quality of the text with the figures. I am glad to recommend the acceptance of this manuscript for publication. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Bruno Paes Leme Ferreira ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org . Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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