Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 3, 2025 |
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PONE-D-24-60523-->-->How transcultural perceptions of migrants shape the bilingual language development of their children? Insights from a multicultural cross-sectional study-->-->PLOS ONE?> Dear Dr. Moro, Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 19 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Additional Editor Comments: 1) It is a good study, and I suggest improving the manuscript before sending it to other reviewers. 1) to delve into the theories behind the concepts used. Concepts such as inherited language, extended family relationships and transculturality. 2) I suggest to the authors that in their methods they should make explicit the justification of: why is it sufficient to study population with three languages -Arabic, Tamil and Soninke-, is it sufficient to consider them representative of transculturality? In the letter to the editor there is a glimpse of what the explanation might be but it is not in the manuscript. 3) Authors are required to justify the use of measurement instruments and how they were planned to be used with the information collected from the interviews; as well as extending the explanation of the procedure for interpreting numerical data in the light of qualitative data obtained, and vice versa. 4) Authors are required to clarify statements such as: 374-376: “Several hypotheses may shed light on the negative relationship between perceptions of extended-family relationships and HL skills. We cannot exclude possible flaws in measuring perceptions of extended-family relationships or failure to adjust for confounding variables”. The above, how it affects the achievement of the study objective reported by the authors. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Though timely and relevant, the manuscript suffers from major conceptual and methodological problems that severely restrict its contribution. That is, this study lacks a strong theoretical basis. The key constructs--migration-related changes, extended-family relationships, and transgenerational transmissions--are not defined or theoretically grounded in existing transcultural or socio-linguistic literature. Thus, the framing feels vague and inconsistent throughout. A quantitative analysis of open-ended interview data raises serious concerns about its validity and reliability. Evidence of psychometric testing or inter-rater agreement is not available. Moreover, the reduction of moods and impressions to binary categories distorts complex cultural experiences. The authors draw strong conclusions from weak associations. Some of the findings are marginally significant or inconsistent, yet interpretable. For instance, the unexpected negative link between positive extended-family perceptions and heritage language ability is scantily explained, appearing rather speculative. The study used a small, non-random sample from one urban area in France, of which only participants from three language groups could be counted against the accolade for being "multicultural". Cross-sectional design does not allow for any sort of causal inference, even if the authors' wording hints at that. Thus, the authors need to clarify how language proficiency was assessed and ensure that a balance is made in the heritage/majority language mix. The statistical approach would need to be revised, probably better through latent constructs or stronger methodologies overall. Inter-rater reliability should also be reported. Finally, practical implications for clinicians and educators should be further spelled out. The authors should also clarify how language proficiency was assessed and ensure the balance between heritage and majority languages. The statistical approach should be reconsidered, possibly using latent constructs or more robust techniques. Inter-rater reliability should be reported. Finally, practical implications for clinicians and educators should be made more concrete. Reviewer #2: Reviewer Comments Overall Evaluation: This manuscript presents original research exploring the relationship between parental transcultural perceptions and bilingual language development among children of migrant families in France. The topic is timely, relevant, and grounded in a strong conceptual and methodological framework. The study is well-designed, the analyses are technically sound, and the conclusions are data-driven. However, some areas would benefit from minor clarification and improvement, especially in reporting and framing. Evaluation by Criteria 1. Originality and Novelty -Meets standard. The study addresses a novel question by linking transcultural parental perceptions with heritage and majority language development. Its innovative and well-executed approach to " quantifying " qualitative data for regression analysis is also noteworthy. 2. Prior Publication- Meets standard. The results have not been published elsewhere, as declared in the manuscript. 3.Technical Rigor and Detail- Meets standard. The methodology—including sample selection, instruments (ELAL and N-EEL), and statistical modeling—is clearly described and appropriate. The use of multiple adjusted regression models strengthens the findings. Recommendation: Consider elaborating on the construct validity and inter-rater reliability of the scoring system used to "quantitize" parental perceptions, as this is critical to the integrity of the analysis. 4. Conclusions and Data Support- Meets standard. Conclusions are well-grounded in the data, clearly acknowledging limitations such as the cross-sectional design and lack of causal inference. 5.Clarity and Use of English- Meets standard. The article is written in clear and intelligible English. Minor copyediting could further improve flow, but no major issues are present. 6.Ethical Standards- Meets standard. Ethics approval was obtained from an appropriate IRB (North University Hospitals of Paris). Informed consent procedures are properly described. 7.Research Integrity- Meets standard. The study adheres to good research practices, and there are no signs of data manipulation or undue bias. 8.Reporting Guidelines and Data Availability- Partially meets standard. The authors note that data cannot be shared due to French privacy laws. While this may be valid, PLOS ONE requires full transparency. Recommendation: The authors should clarify what aspects of the data are restricted and whether anonymized or partial datasets (e.g., coded scores) could be made available under controlled access or through a trusted repository. Final Recommendation: Minor Revision The manuscript strongly contributes to the literature on bilingualism and migration studies. I recommend acceptance pending minor revision, specifically to clarify the data availability constraints and add more detail regarding the quantification of transcultural factors. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Manal Hani Ahmad ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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How migrants’ transcultural perceptions shape their children’s bilingual language development: Insights from a cross-sectional multicultural study PONE-D-24-60523R1 Dear Dr. Marie Rose Moro, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Doris Verónica Ortega-Altamirano, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): The manuscript was modified according to the suggestions of the reviewers and the editor. The data collection period runs from 2011 to 2014. What is the rationale for releasing data that is 10 years old? It seems to me that the manuscript contains a spelling error: it says interrate agreement and should have hyphens: inter-rate-agreement. The data collection period runs from 2011 to 2014. Reviewers' comments: |
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