Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 3, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-41112Validation of the Brief Physical Activity Assessment Tool: Comparison of Telephone and In-Person AdministrationPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Jácome, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 27 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: General comments Thank you for giving me the opportunity to review this manuscript. The scope of the study is relevant to the readers of PlosOne and the research field has relevance to assessment of physical activity. The study has a robust design, and the manuscript is generally well written, although blank spaces are missing here and there. Title Adequate Abstract Adequate Introduction and aim The rationale for dividing the sample into age-groups needs to be addressed in the introduction and included in the aim. Please provide a reference for the first sentence in the introduction. Materials and methods State why the age-groups were chosen. State the diary number for the ethical approval. Results Why is BMI for the group shown? Make sure only results that is included in the aim is shown, for example the group comparison. Page 4, line 78: state that figure 1 is figure 1a-d. Discussion Well written Conclusion Adequate Tables and figures Adequate References Up-to date and relevant. Reviewer #2: First of all, I would like to congratulate the authors for this interesting study. It is well-written, clear and addresses an important topic in the research field. I have however some amendments to improve the manuscript: • Introduction, lines 38-39: “Regular… diseases.” Please add a reference that supports this quote. • Introduction, lines 48-49: “several clinical populations”. Please provide some examples of these clinical populations. The same for lines 52-53 “in patients with various health conditions”. • Methods: were the population composed by health individuals, individuals with any medical condition or both? Please clarify this. • Methods: Please clarify to the readers that the face-to-face version of BPAAT was applied via tablet. • Methods: Regarding the individuals who performed the BPAAT via phone and in-person on the same day, how did the authors manage it? How long before the face-to-face visit was the phone call made? Could you clarify it? Maybe consider adding a figure… • Methods: lines 69-71 – please include the interpretation used for the scores of rho, ICC and Cohen K. • Results: in figure 1, the authors divided the analysis by age decades. Could you explain the reason and clarify this division in the methods? • Results: figure 1 and table 1 – In the paper from Cruz et al (2021), the results varied from gender. Even though the measures from Cruz et al and this paper are different (accelerometry vs BPAAT in Cruz and only BPAAT administered by different ways in this paper), did the authors consider analyzing the data by gender? Reviewer #3: It is an interesting study and could be useful practically for researchers or professionals using this scale, and some other scales. It is also interesting to see the differences according to age. My specific comments are below: Some of the references are written with a space after the text (like in line.46: "measures (Cleland") but some without space (like in l.47: "remotely(Pleguezuelos") thus they should be standardized, conforming the journal's requirements. Line 47: "Telephone screening" could be described more openly, since it can also mean filling out a form by clicking its link/QR code etc on a smartphone... Line 56: Aim: Which general population, it could be specified like all of Portugal or some parts of it, etc. Methods: So the questionnaire was applied face-to-face, 3 days after the telephone interview. So the data were collected in this manner between May 2021-July 2023? Or were they contacted later on, like after November 2023, as the original study was on asthma? Was the ethical approval for the asthma study? Or the physical activity study? Could the ethical committee's decision numbers be provided? (I saw later detailed info in the attachment, ı wonder if just the names and number be stated somewhere but as it is on asthma, maybe the name of the study, the aim and localities with the no.s in parentheses could be mentioned) A mention of the asthma study is present but it should also be added to the full text and in more detail. The time range between the two methods of data collection is good, as 3 days (range 0-5 days) for the physical activity not to change. Were the participants visited at their homes for the face-to-face part? Could the data collection be described in more detail? Who called on the phone? Who asked the two questions face-to-face and how, where? Their professions, etc. Lines 65 and 75; a clarification is needed, does the second contain IQR (interquartile range): "approximately 3 days (range 0-5 days)," and "median, 3 [1-4] days" in the text" Line 84: Suddenly we switch to a tablet version: What is it? Face-to-face? So tablet should also be added to the data collection details. But were there, for example some visual items shown during the tablet version of data collection? Table 1, ICC, 3rd line: 0.51(0.35, etc) with no space in between while the other cells have space before the parentheses. line 90 "64years" needs a space. Spaces before parentheses should be checked and applied in a standard manner throughout the text. Was there a difference according to sex? Discussion, 1st paragraph, especially lines 104-105: The higher number of questions in the other physical activity scales could also render more accurate results with different modes of data collection. Did the discrepancy augment with the time lag between the two modes of data collection? This could easily be analysed with their data... Line 128 is a good suggestion to compare with the conventional method of data collection, and maybe the authors can apply it in the future. It is important for the readers to understand both from the abstract and the text that this study compares telephone interviewing to face-to-face tablet methods. Lines 133-136: Could it be added to the conclusion that it is more reliable in especially some age groups? And could need some corrections, with estimations used for example from this study? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-24-41112R1Validation of the Brief Physical Activity Assessment Tool: Comparison of Telephone and In-Person AdministrationPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Jácome, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please ensure that the final comments of the referees are addressed. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 01 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for your revised manuscript, which is much improved and now suitable for publication. Congratulations Reviewer #2: The authors have addressed all my questions, thank you! I have no further comments. I would like to congratulate the authors for their brilliant job. Reviewer #3: I would first like to thank the authors for the revision of the manusript and the point-by point explanations. One analysis that could enrich the manuscript would be to analyze according to sex only; so separately for both sexes, one row for females and one row for males. Their activity levels might be quite different and their expressions also might be different. Seeing the results of these would be interesting. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes: Raika Durusoy ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Validation of the Brief Physical Activity Assessment Tool: Comparison of Telephone and In-Person Administration PONE-D-24-41112R2 Dear Dr. Jácome, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Feliz Ano Novo, Filipe Prazeres, MD, MSc, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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