Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 5, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-38457Gender disparities in the medical residency program in Peru: an analysis of applications and admissions from 2016 to 2023.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Fernández Guzmán, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 25 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Barry Kweh Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: 1. When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and Additional Editor Comments: A well written article but a broader discussion of the limitations and potential biases inherent to specialty selection is required. A broader discussion of the comparative literature regarding gender disparities in other countries would also be valuable. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Partly Reviewer #4: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Comments by Headings 1. General comment The authors could have used line numbers and page numbers to ease the review process. In its current form, it is difficult to point authors to specific locations for suggested corrections. 2. Abstract The abstract provides a clear overview of the study, highlighting the main findings effectively. The authors have succeeded in presenting the relevance of their research to gender disparities in medical residency applications in Peru, which is a commendable approach to addressing an underexplored topic. Suggestions for Improvement: To enhance readability, authors may consider rearranging the results to present proportions first, followed by the trend analysis, and then the measures of association. This sequence will provide a clearer flow from descriptive to inferential statistics, making it easier for readers to follow the findings. 3. Introduction The introduction does an excellent job of setting the stage by providing a thorough background on gender disparities in medical specialties. The objectives are clearly defined, and the importance of the study is well articulated. The inclusion of data from various countries to support the need for gender equity in medical specialties is particularly strong. Suggestions for Improvement: a. Clarity in Terminology: The opening sentence, "differences between individuals," could be more specific in its reference to gender-related disparities. I suggest explicitly stating that these differences pertain to unequal treatment or outcomes based on gender, to avoid ambiguity. b. References: The following statements should be supported with references: "The percentage of female physicians registered with the medical college of Peru rose from 11.5% in 1971 to 48.9% by 2011." "In the Ministry of Health and regional governments, the percentage of female doctors rose from 34.6% in 2013 to 38.6% in 2018." c. Precision in Time Statements: The expression “To date” in the last paragraph needs to specify the year, as it currently lacks clarity. For example, “As of [year],” will enhance temporal specificity. 4. Methods The authors’ choice of using a multilevel model to assess gender disparities across medical specialties is a robust approach. It accounts for variations between specialties and time periods, which adds rigor to the analysis. Suggestions for Improvement: a. Gender Classification: The binary classification of gender (male and female) does not account for non-cisgender individuals, which could potentially skew the results. I suggest the authors acknowledge this limitation and discuss how the inclusion of non-binary or transgender categories could affect the study’s findings. b. Outcome and Independent Variables: The structure of the methods section could benefit from a clearer organization. I recommend introducing the outcome and independent variables explicitly under a separate subsection before diving into detailed explanations. 5. Results The results section presents a comprehensive analysis of trends in female participation in medical residency programs. The use of percentages and graphs enhances understanding of gender disparities, and the breakdown by specialty provides valuable insights. Suggestions for Improvement: a. Time Period Wording: The phrase "Between 2016 and 2023" should be revised to "From 2016 to 2023" for clarity and accuracy, as it better reflects the inclusion of both years in the data. b. Relocation of Explanations: The explanation for the observed application rate drop in 2020 and 2021 could be better placed in the discussion section, where the impact of external factors like the COVID-19 pandemic can be explored in depth. c. Table 1 Descriptions: To improve clarity, I recommend either providing a descriptive summary of each specialty in Table 1. If the authors intend to use groupings (medical, laboratory-diagnostic, medical-surgical) as they have, they should provide a key below the table to explain what the groupings represent. d. Subheadings: The inclusion of subheadings in the results section would greatly enhance the clarity and organization of the section, especially considering the detailed nature of the findings. e. Graph Titles: For the graphs, I recommend that the authors review the PLOS ONE submission guidelines on presenting graph titles and improve the graph titles. This will help readers quickly grasp the key points/legends when looking at the figures. f. Consistency in Statistical Models: Consistency in Statistical Models: The model described in the methods section for measuring the association is multilevel Poisson regression, while the model in the results section is a generalized linear mixed-effects model. I recommend that the authors use consistent terminology to avoid confusion for the reader. 6. Discussion The discussion does well to contextualize the findings within the broader literature and highlight gender disparities in medical specialties, particularly in surgical fields. The comparison with international studies strengthens the relevance of the findings. Suggestions for Improvement: a. When discussing the proportion of women admitted to specialties, it would be beneficial to expand beyond the year 2016. Since data from 2016–2023 is available, a broader temporal analysis will provide a more comprehensive understanding of trends and fluctuations over time. b. Addressing Gender Imbalance: The authors could provide a more detailed exploration of potential solutions to gender imbalances, particularly in surgical specialties. This would elevate the discussion by not only identifying disparities but also suggesting actionable interventions, such as mentorship programs, policies, or structural changes in medical training environments. c. Limitation on Gender Categorization: While the discussion acknowledges limitations, the binary gender classification should be discussed more critically. Addressing how this might exclude or marginalize non-binary individuals would show a broader inclusivity in the analysis. Conclusion The paper addresses an important gap in the literature on gender disparities in medical residency programs in Peru and offers valuable insights that will contribute to the field. With some refinement in the clarity of methods, results, and expansion in the discussion, this manuscript will make a strong contribution to the conversation on gender equity in medicine. Reviewer #2: Results - Page 13: Perhaps elaborate on what specifically during the pandemic in 2020 to 2021 prevented the increase in applicants (financial costs, pause in schooling, illness?). Discussion - Page 18: Perhaps add a sentence elaborating on the "institutional and governmental policies promoting equal opportunities" in Peru, as those from outside the country may not be aware of the policies. Figures - May be nice to include a bar graph comparing male and female admission of all specialties for a quick visual representation of the results. References - May be good to double check reference style as some journal names are abbreviated (36, 40, 41) while others aren't (33, 43) etc. Reviewer #3: This study addresses a significant issue (Gender disparities in the medical residency program in Peru), providing a detailed analysis of trends over time and across medical specialties. The study has an explanatory introduction, a review of relevant literature, and a thorough explanation of the methodology. In the discussion part, the authors acknowledge that inferring the applicants gender based on their first names, using a binary gender classification, and excluding 2.4% of applicants limit the generalizability of their findings. However, there are areas where the manuscript could be improved: 1- The study states that the application process is based on a numerical scoring system, in order to conclude more precisely that there is a gender disparity in the admissions, there should be a reference to the average score of each gender group ( or referring to its impact in the limitation part), and an explanation on the possible impact of gender on this scoring system. 2- The study mentions that women tend to apply more to certain specialties, where admission rates may be more competitive. A disparity in specialty selection could skew the overall admission rates for women if certain specialties are more difficult to enter. It is essential to address the total application and admission rate by specialty to provide a more accurate picture. 3- The study mentions that some data were excluded. However, it’s unclear if the authors conducted a sensitivity analysis to check whether the exclusion of this data affects the overall results. Reviewer #4: While the manuscript is sound, the data can only partially support the conclusions. as stated in the research limitations, the sex of participants was made based on inferences from the name which by default lowers the accuracy. As such it will affect the significance of the study's findings. In addition, the title of the research does not elaborate well on what has been done and I recommend including the type of study applied in the title. on the abstract the first sentence of methods seems like a repetition of the objective written in different words. Instead, I recommend describing the type of study design used as an introduction to the method just like what is written in the methods part on the full article. on the introduction, you have used outdated references that were dated more than 15 years back such as reference no. 9, I recommend removing them and finding new references. In addition, little information given on global perspective distribution of gender across various medical specialties. it will be better to add more research papers. when it comes to methods part, I believe the source of the data used for the study is inadequate. I would recommend getting the names of the applicants and correlating it with the universities record for more detailed information such as sex of participants. The other thing is I do not believe the study has exhausted in researching independent variables which may affect the result of study. The only independent variable included in the study is the year of study while variables such as financial status or Admission Requirement status of the participants have not been touched. such confounding variables must first be addressed before concluding that there is gender disparity in the admission for medical residency program. on the result section on the sociodemographic data instead of putting a single year's data on the table I recommend using range or overall average to include other years emphasizing on years with highest female. the range or overall average result should also be used in abstract so that the abstract information will not be misleading. In addition, model assumption or model adequacy tests done for regression have not been mentioned, this should be included as part of the result. Overall the research has a good start but as stated in the limitations needs more work on it to reach into an accurate conclusion ********** 6. 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PONE-D-24-38457R1Gender disparities in application and admission to the medical residency program in Peru: a cross sectional study from 2016 to 2023PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Fernández Guzmán, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 13 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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