Peer Review History
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PONE-D-24-16070Factors Associated with Contrast-Induced Acute Kidney Injury in a Tertiary Care Center Emergency Department: an Observational Cohort Study.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. El Zahran, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The term contrast-associated AKI (CA-AKI) is more appropriate and should be used throughout the report. The logistic regression tables should be presented in one table. Clearly state in your statistical plan 1) how predictor variables were selected for the logistic regression analysis 2) How were the confounding variables identified?. Although it is important to include medications and clinical parameters as predictor variables, the authors should check for multicollinearity and address them as appropriate. For any two variables with r > 0.8, only one should be included in the table. In addition, address all concerns raised by both reviewers. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 01 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Overview: The authors present the results from a single center, retrospective study of 1,832 emergency department patients who underwent CT with contrast between November 2018 and December 2019. They report a prevalence of contrast-induced acute kidney injury (CI-AKI) of 10.9%, and found that BP≥140mmHg, RR≥22, existing history of CKD, and use of several medications (loop diuretics, beta-lactams, allopurinol) were associated with CI-AKI in a logistic regression analysis. Major Comments Overall: - One major issue that must be addressed is that the authors do not differentiate between contrast-associated AKI (CA-AKI) and CI-AKI. CA-AKI, implies a correlative diagnosis of AKI, whereas CI-AKI implies a causative diagnosis. In 2020, the American College of Radiology and the National Kidney Foundation released joint guidelines, published simultaneously in Radiology and Kidney Med (Davenport et al., 2020) that distinguishes between the two. This study must be cited in this paper. The authors methodologic approach does not provide a control group for analysis, therefore no causative link can be drawn between the AKI these patients developed and the contrast they received. Thus, it is crucial that “CI-AKI” be replaced by “CA-AKI” throughout the manuscript. Additionally, this difference should be briefly discussed in the introduction and the discussion, as it helps interpret the authors’ findings. Abstract: - Replace “CI-AKI” with “CA-AKI” throughout abstract - In the conclusions section, you mention “age” as a factor to consider, but this was not significantly associated with CA-AKI in your model. Please remove. Introduction: - Please provide citations throughout for each sentence that cites data or concepts from other studies Methods: - The study aim should be moved to the last sentence of the introduction - It is unclear what variables you adjusted for in your logistic regression model: please clarify which variables either in the methods, or in table 2 where you report regression outputs Results: - For Table 2, is this a multiple logistic regression model or are these bivariate p values? If it was a multiple logistic regression model, it would be helpful to show the bivariate analysis to see how ORs changed after being included in the multivariate model - For table 2, it would be helpful to know the row percentages: For example: how many patients with qSOFA 0, 1 or 2 had AKI? How many patients on loop diuretics had AKI compared to those not on loop diuretics? These are the proportions that matter so we can understand how prevalence of AKI differs by each characteristic Discussion: - It is interesting that BP and RR are associated with CA-AKI; but how do you suggest interpreting this? It is very likely that elevated BP is simply a marker of undiagnosed hypertension, which itself is predictive of AKI during any admission (Jiang 2021, BMC Nephrology). Similarly, elevated RR may be a marker of acuity of illness; this elevated acuity of illness likely predisposes an increased propensity to AKI regardless of contrast administration. For example, conditions such as volume overload and sepsis would increase the RR and both are known to contribute to AKI. Indeed, it was unsurprising that AKI was more common in the qSOFA 1 group. These diagnoses also increase the likelihood that someone might get a contrast study to evaluate for infection or pulmonary embolism, for example. This must be discussed. - Must add lack of control group to the limitations part of discussion Reviewer #2: We would like to thanks to the authors for giving me the opportunity to review the manuscript entitled "Factors Associated with Contrast-Induced Acute Kidney Injury in a Tertiary Care Center Emergency Department: an Observational Cohort Study". The manuscript is very interesting, but needs a few changes to improve it. Introduction Why have the authors placed the objective of the study in the method section? We believe that the objective of the study should be placed at the end of the context. Method This study was approved by the IRB, Authors should explain the abbreviation at the first appearance in the text. Study approval may be presented in a different section as an Ethics Statement. The authors must correctly state the inclusion criteria: did the authors include all patients? What is the age criterion for inclusion? The authors report that patients receive a mean contrast dose of 2ml/kg. As this is an average, could the authors add the standard deviation? The author should specify the type of iodinated contrast medium used: iso or low-osmolarity? In the methods section Outcome measures: this title would normally correspond to data collection. home medication, vitals, ED management (medications and IV administration), home medications, In this sentence, home medication is repeated laboratory workup The authors should specify which laboratory data were collected and reported in Table 1, where the general characteristics of the study are presented according to AKI status. Could the authors provide information on the stage of AKI and incidence of hemodialysis in these AKI-IC cases? Definition of AKI as an increase in creatinine of 0.3 mg/dl (26 mmol/l) within 48 hours: please correct the unit to 26 µmol/L The title definition of AKI should be replaced by an operational definition in which the authors could report the definition of Aki and add the definition of CKD. Statistical analysis Continuous variables were presented using mean and standard deviation (mean ± SD). The authors can confirm that all data were normally distributed, as they did not present the results as median (IQR). Results In Table 1, what is the difference between antiviral and antiretroviral drugs? In Table 1, the authors should compare baseline creatinine values between the AKI and non-AKI groups. Patients who received lithium (30.5% vs. 22%, p=0.008): these results do not correspond to those reported in Table 1. Patients with high blood pressure (≥140 mmHg): this result is not consistent with that reported in Table 3. Why were many factors significant in the univariate logistic regression not presented in Table 3 in the multivariate logistic regression? Please write ˂ 0.001 for the p-value of 0.000. Limitation Please correct the KDIGO definition of acute renal failure. For KDIGO Translated with www.DeepL.com/Translator (free version) ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: yannick nlandu ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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PONE-D-24-16070R1Factors Associated with Contrast-Associated Acute Kidney Injury in a Tertiary Care Center Emergency Department: an Observational Cohort Study.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. El Zahran, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised by reviewer 2. Please submit your revised manuscript within Jan 05 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Ogochukwu Chinedum Okoye Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: We thank the editor for the opportunity to review the revised manuscript. We feel that the manuscript is improved, but requires some minor change Introduction This study aims to assess the factors associated with the development of CA-AKI in patients who received computed tomography (CT) scans with contrast during their presentation to an academic Emergency Department in a tertiary care center. It is essential to differentiate between CA-AKI and CI-AKI. CA-AKI is a correlative diagnosis indicating that AKI occurred after contrast administration, while CI-AKI implies a causative diagnosis. This distinction is crucial as our study design does not allow for a causal inference. Therefore, we will use the term CAAKI in this manuscript [2]. We believe that the second sentence of this paragraph is repetitive and should be deleted. The authors have already correctly distinguished between CA-AKI and CI-AKI in the second paragraph of their introduction. Methods Study participants received an average of 2ml1ml/Kg for routine CT and 1.5ml/Kg for angio-CT of low-osmolar contrast medium (Omnipaque 350) contrast solution In front of 1ml/kg please delete '2ml Patients’ details were prepared as reports by the EPIC team Please define the term “EPIC” Results Discussion We also think it would be interesting for the authors of this interesting article to comment on the incidence of CA-AKI reported in their study. In the context where the authors report an association between high respiratory rate and CA-AKI, the higher incidence of CA-AKI in COVID-19 patients (26.1%) (mainly respiratory pathology) could be a further argument in favour of the association between high respiratory rate and CA-AKI. Nlandu Y, Makulo JR, Essig M, Sumaili E, Lumaka A, Engole Y, Mboliasa MF, Mokoli V, Tshiswaka T, Nkodila A, Bukabau J, Longo A, Kajingulu F, Zinga C, Nseka N. Factors associated with acute kidney injury (AKI) and mortality in COVID-19 patients in a Sub-Saharan African intensive care unit: a single-center prospective study. Ren Fail. 2023;45(2):2263583. doi: 10.1080/0886022X.2023.2263583. Epub 2023 Oct 23. PMID: 37870858; PMCID: PMC11001370. Limitations On the other hand, the selection bias in our study was reduced by the fact that around 17% of the study participants exhibited an abnormal (above and lower the normal range) baseline creatinine level. Among these 306 participants, only 42 fulfilled the KODIGO definition of AKI. Please correct KODIGO to KDIGO Reviewer #3: The Abstract and introduction were well written and captivating with minor errors as highlighted in the attachment . The aim was clear and succinct Overall methodology was thorough and aligned well with the study aim. However, it may be clearer to structure the paragraph with bullet points or distinct sections for "Study Design", "Setting", Ethical Approval", for better organization. The results with tables and illustrations was well captured and discussion was sound as well. By and large, very fine manuscript. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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