Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 18, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-26212Accuracy of intracerebral hemorrhage drain detection, quantification and classification of coverage in computed tomography using machine learningPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Elsheikh, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 22 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript presents a promising approach to the automated detection of intracerebral hemorrhage using convolutional neural networks. It effectively addresses a significant clinical need by proposing a novel detection pipeline and demonstrating its potential efficacy. However, the study is limited by the small dataset size, which may affect the robustness and generalizability of the findings. While the results are promising, the manuscript would benefit from a more detailed discussion of the dataset limitations and their impact on the results. Additionally, enhancements to the title and abstract are needed to better reflect the study's focus and key findings. Overall, the research provides valuable insights but requires further validation and refinement. Please see below for my detailed comments. Title: • The title should clearly indicate the focus of the study, specifically emphasizing the automated nature of the pipeline and its application to ICH detection. • Aim for a concise title that effectively conveys the essence of the study without being overly complex. Abstract: • Clearly state the main aim of the study, such as developing and validating an automated pipeline for ICH detection from imaging data. Provide context on the importance of the research and what gaps it addresses. • Discuss the implications of the findings and their significance for clinical practice or future research. Highlight the contribution of the study to the field. Introduction: • Context and Background: The introduction provides a good overview of intracerebral hemorrhage and its clinical significance. However, it could benefit from a more detailed discussion of current detection methods and their limitations to set up the research gap more clearly. • Research Gap and Objectives: The manuscript should explicitly state the research gap it addresses and the specific objectives of the study. This will help in aligning the reader’s understanding with the study’s contributions. Methods: • Data Description: The manuscript lacks detail on the dataset size and composition. Given the small data size, a more thorough description of the dataset, including the number of images, sources, and any potential biases, is crucial. • Model Architecture: More detail is needed on the convolutional neural network architecture used, including the number of layers, types of layers, and any hyperparameters that were tuned. • Validation Strategy: The method of model validation should be described in greater detail. Explain if cross-validation, a holdout set, or other techniques were used, and how they contribute to the robustness of the results. • Offer a clearer explanation of the convolutional neural network architecture used. Include details on the layers, activation functions, and any hyperparameters. • Elaborate on the validation process, including any cross-validation techniques used. Specify how performance metrics were calculated and provide justification for the chosen methods. • The limited size of the dataset is a critical concern. Discuss how the small data size might impact the training and generalization of the model. Results: • Reflect on how the small dataset size might influence the performance metrics and results. Discuss any potential overfitting issues and how they were addressed. Provide insights into how the model's performance might vary with a larger dataset. Discussion: • Interpretation of Results: The discussion should offer a deeper interpretation of the results, including how the performance metrics compare with those from previous studies. • Limitations: There should be a more explicit discussion of the study’s limitations, especially concerning the small dataset size. Address how these limitations might affect the generalizability and reliability of the results. • Future Work: Suggestions for future research should be more detailed, including how to address the limitations and potential improvements in dataset size or model complexity. Conclusion: • Summary: Summarize the main findings of the study and their significance. Emphasize the contribution of the research to the field of ICH detection and any practical implications for clinical practice. • Implications: Clearly outline the potential impact of the study on current practices and future research directions. Reviewer #2: This study applies machine learning techniques to the detection of drain in CT scan images of intracranial hemorrhages after minimally invasive intervention, as well as to the quantification and classification of drainage coverage. Article well structured and written. Methodology is correct. The number of patients included in the training and validation subgroup is exceedingly small (21 and 3, respectively). A similar situation is observed with the testing group, which initially comprised only 5 patients but was subsequently expanded to 44 in a second phase. This expansion allows for a more reliable evaluation of the algorithm's validity in clinical practice. It may seem surprising that, with such a limited number of subjects in the training set, acceptable accuracy values are achieved for detection (97%), coverage (86%), and correct catheter positioning (88%). I believe this is an example where the task is relatively straightforward for an algorithm, and the errors exhibited could be minimized by increasing the number of training cases. The authors acknowledge the significant limitations of their study in the discussion section. Despite these limitations, I consider this to be a well-designed study with useful results, particularly in the context of a relatively uncommon pathology for which it may be challenging to obtain a larger patient cohort. Minor Comments - I recommend avoiding the use of abbreviations in the abstract. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Machine Learning-Based Pipeline for Automated Intracerebral Hemorrhage and Drain Detection, Quantification, and Classification in Non-Enhanced CT Images (NeuroDrAIn) PONE-D-24-26212R1 Dear Dr. Elsheikh, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Ziyu Qi Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): The manuscript can be accepted for publication in its present form. Congrats! Reviewers' comments: |
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