Peer Review History
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PONE-D-24-35992Impact of patients' age and comorbidities on prostate cancer overdiagnosis in clinical practicePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Lumbreras, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 21 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Additional Editor Comments: General comments: The study focuses on assessing the probability of overdiagnosis in the early detection of prostate cancer (PCa) using the PSA test. The study primarily investigates how the age of the patient and concomitant diseases affect overdiagnosis. The authors argue that most previous studies on PSA-based PCa screening have focussed on healthier populations, mainly from clinical trials, and want to provide a more relevant context by examining real-world clinical data. The aim of the study was to assess the likelihood of overdiagnosis based on PSA levels, Gleason scores and patients' comorbidities. The study is based on a retrospective cohort analysis of 1,070 asymptomatic men over 40 who were diagnosed with PCa between 2004 and 2022. The primary outcome is the probability of overdiagnosis assessed by life expectancy adjusted for comorbidities using the Charlson Comorbidity Index. Lead times of 5, 10 and 15 years are considered in the study. Statistical comparisons are made between the groups stratified by PSA values and Gleason scores. The paper contains several important results: Higher PSA levels (>10 ng/dL) and Gleason scores (≥8) are associated with an increased likelihood of overdiagnosis, particularly in older patients with significant comorbidities. Patients with lower PSA levels (4-10 ng/dL) and Gleason scores (≤7) were less likely to be overdiagnosed. Radiation exposure was higher in patients with higher PSA levels, and pharmacological treatment was more common in patients with elevated PSA levels. Most patients (71.7%) did not receive pharmacological treatment, highlighting the likelihood of overdiagnosis without active treatment. In total, this is a retrospective observational study measure methods in a double center setting. Idea fine. Specific comments: 1. Real-world data: The study’s use of real-world clinical data provides valuable insights, especially considering older and more comorbid patients who are often underrepresented in clinical trials. Very good. 2. Incorporation of comorbidities: The use of the Charlson Comorbidity Index to adjust life expectancy is a strong methodological approach, as it emphasizes the importance of considering a patient’s overall health, not just age. Well, done. 3. Comprehensive analysis: The inclusion of different lead times (5, 10, and 15 years) provides a thorough examination of overdiagnosis probabilities. Well, done 4. Follow-up duration: The median follow-up of 5.7 years, though reasonable, may not be sufficient to capture long-term outcomes or fully assess the impact of overdiagnosis on patient health. � Extension of the follow-up if necessary 5. Unknown Gleason scores: A considerable portion of patients did not have their Gleason scores recorded, which could have affected the robustness of the statistical comparisons. � severely limits the significance of the study 6. Overdiagnosis estimation: The estimation of overdiagnosis relies on external lead-time data from the literature rather than patient-specific lead-time information, which introduces potential biases.The study's findings may be less applicable to younger or healthier populations, limiting the external validity. The study emphasises the importance of considering both age and comorbidities when assessing the risk of overdiagnosis in prostate cancer screening. The study shows that older patients with significant comorbidities are more likely to be overdiagnosed, often without receiving active treatment. The results underline the need for personalised screening strategies and caution in the general use of PSA testing without consideration of patients' individual health profiles. The study addresses an important issue in PCa screening and provides useful clinical insights. The limitations regarding the data on Gleason scores and follow-up duration should be re-examined as they significantly limit the statistical power. The paper could also benefit from further clarification of the impact of overdiagnosis on patient management and treatment decisions. Overall, the research findings are solid and relevant, especially for clinicians looking to adjust PSA testing strategies based on individual patient risk factors. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: General comments: The study focuses on assessing the probability of overdiagnosis in the early detection of prostate cancer (PCa) using the PSA test. The study primarily investigates how the age of the patient and concomitant diseases affect overdiagnosis. The authors argue that most previous studies on PSA-based PCa screening have focussed on healthier populations, mainly from clinical trials, and want to provide a more relevant context by examining real-world clinical data. The aim of the study was to assess the likelihood of overdiagnosis based on PSA levels, Gleason scores and patients' comorbidities. The study is based on a retrospective cohort analysis of 1,070 asymptomatic men over 40 who were diagnosed with PCa between 2004 and 2022. The primary outcome is the probability of overdiagnosis assessed by life expectancy adjusted for comorbidities using the Charlson Comorbidity Index. Lead times of 5, 10 and 15 years are considered in the study. Statistical comparisons are made between the groups stratified by PSA values and Gleason scores. The paper contains several important results: Higher PSA levels (>10 ng/dL) and Gleason scores (≥8) are associated with an increased likelihood of overdiagnosis, particularly in older patients with significant comorbidities. Patients with lower PSA levels (4-10 ng/dL) and Gleason scores (≤7) were less likely to be overdiagnosed. Radiation exposure was higher in patients with higher PSA levels, and pharmacological treatment was more common in patients with elevated PSA levels. Most patients (71.7%) did not receive pharmacological treatment, highlighting the likelihood of overdiagnosis without active treatment. In total, this is a retrospective observational study measure methods in a double center setting. Idea fine. Specific comments: 1. Real-world data: The study’s use of real-world clinical data provides valuable insights, especially considering older and more comorbid patients who are often underrepresented in clinical trials. Very good. 2. Incorporation of comorbidities: The use of the Charlson Comorbidity Index to adjust life expectancy is a strong methodological approach, as it emphasizes the importance of considering a patient’s overall health, not just age. Well, done. 3. Comprehensive analysis: The inclusion of different lead times (5, 10, and 15 years) provides a thorough examination of overdiagnosis probabilities. Well, done 4. Follow-up duration: The median follow-up of 5.7 years, though reasonable, may not be sufficient to capture long-term outcomes or fully assess the impact of overdiagnosis on patient health. � Extension of the follow-up if necessary 5. Unknown Gleason scores: A considerable portion of patients did not have their Gleason scores recorded, which could have affected the robustness of the statistical comparisons. � severely limits the significance of the study 6. Overdiagnosis estimation: The estimation of overdiagnosis relies on external lead-time data from the literature rather than patient-specific lead-time information, which introduces potential biases.The study's findings may be less applicable to younger or healthier populations, limiting the external validity. The study emphasises the importance of considering both age and comorbidities when assessing the risk of overdiagnosis in prostate cancer screening. The study shows that older patients with significant comorbidities are more likely to be overdiagnosed, often without receiving active treatment. The results underline the need for personalised screening strategies and caution in the general use of PSA testing without consideration of patients' individual health profiles. The study addresses an important issue in PCa screening and provides useful clinical insights. The limitations regarding the data on Gleason scores and follow-up duration should be re-examined as they significantly limit the statistical power. The paper could also benefit from further clarification of the impact of overdiagnosis on patient management and treatment decisions. Overall, the research findings are solid and relevant, especially for clinicians looking to adjust PSA testing strategies based on individual patient risk factors. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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