Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 29, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-11025Cross-analysing the opinions and experiences of nurses, physiotherapists, dentists, midwives and pharmacists with respect to addictive disorder screening in primary care: a qualitative studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. pautra, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 22 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Increase the number of specific ideas for an appropriate approach to training or policy change that may improve allied health worker involvement in addiction screening. 3. Use tabular form or an organizational chart to recapitulate the potential findings as well as the enablers and challenges related to the HCPC in various workers. This will help the readers understand the complexity of the students’ relationships that was detected in the study, at first glance. 4. The results can be compared with the international literature on the addiction screening so the study is more generalizable and can be applied for the other countries besides French healthcare context. 5. Consider several aspects of sample heterogeneity – geographic and professional – particularly in terms of the contrast between urban and rural practices for the improvement of your samples’ representativeness. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to review this article. I found it to be an interesting read and believe that there is not a lot of research done in this important area. However, I would suggest the following minor and major edits to improve the piece: Data availability - It is recommended that authors include selected verbatim interview quotations and focus group data underlying the findings. Abstract - This is well written and gives a nice overview of the paper! Consider the following minor points for improvement: 1. Consider adding another 1-2 keywords. 2. The spelling of the word ´analysing´ is spelt differently in the full and short title. Authors should ensure this is spelt similarly throughout the paper. 3. Consider combining the background and objective section of the abstract. Consider adding the main aim(s) of the research. 4. Correct the spelling error of the word between in the methods section of the abstract: “Methods: This qualitative study inspired by the grounded theory was carried out betwenn August 2018 and July 2019.” Introduction - Consider the following major and minor points for improvement: The introduction is well written. However, I found it very short and lacking relevant information. There are also several grammatical, spelling, and punctuation errors throughout which I would advise authors to correct as well as the rest of the paper. 5. Punctuation is missing throughout the introduction. In the first sentence of the first paragraph of the introduction, add a comma after the word mortality, and in the second sentence, add a comma after the word opioids. Second paragraph of the introduction, add a comma after the word inefficiency and after the word midwives in both sentence 3 and sentence 7. Correct the spelling of the word `midwifes´. The authors should check for further missing punctuation, spelling and grammar errors throughout the manuscript. “The global burden of addiction disorders is based on their morbidity, mortality and social costs1,2. Alcohol, opioids and cannabis are the most prevalent, with a risk factor for premature death and disability3–5.” “But many already known obstacles to addictive disorder screening in primary care remain, such as lack of time, a feeling of inefficiency and patient reluctance14–19.” “Since 2016, dental surgeons, nurses, midwifes and physiotherapists have been called upon to carry out this screening21(p201).” “Since 2016, dental surgeons, nurses, midwifes and physiotherapists have been called upon to carry out this screening21(p201).” 6. Authors could give examples or add to the sentence in the first paragraph of the introduction to make readers more familiar with the DSM-V criteria: “The fifth edition of the DSM-V described the criteria for diagnosing dependence for both drug related disorders and non-drug-related behaviours7.” 7. Authors should extend/give a brief explanation to readers as to what the Screening Brief Intervention and Referral Treatment is upon first mentioning in the introduction. 8. The authors should consider adding to their main research questions after mentioning the aim of the study at the end of the introduction. 9. Authors should also consider adding why the study was developed, why it is important, and what benefits will it have/add to research. Methods - Consider the following major and minor points for improvement: 10. Punctuation missing in the participant’s section. 11. Authors should include how the participants were recruited and via what means? 12. Authors should make the inclusion criteria clearer in the participant's section as well as add how many participants were included in the study. 13. What is the icebreaker question mentioned in the data collection section? Authors should add this and/or include examples. 14. Consider adding additional sections here to further explain the methods (it may be useful to add a semi-structured interview section, as well as a focus group section and explain what they are, how they were used in the study, etc.). 15. Authors should add a sentence or two to explain to readers what the grounded theorization approach mentioned is in the analysis section. 16. Authors should check for any grammatical errors, spelling, and punctuation throughout the methods section. Results - Consider the following major and minor points for improvement: 17. Authors switch between fully written out numbers and numerals. Check consistency throughout the paper. 18. The authors should consider including a table of the themes and subthemes to the results section to make these clearer for the reader. 19. Consider renaming some of the theme and subtheme headings to be more technically sound/scientific and less vague 20. Authors could make it clearer as to what information in the results section is from the semi-structured interviews and what is from the focus groups. 21. The authors should connect each theme back to the research questions and in the discussion. 22. Subtheme titled `The “bonus” of each profession`- authors should distinguish between using double and single quotation marks when directly quoting participant interviews and headings. Consider using single quotations in this title and in text (i.e., The ´bonus´ of each profession). Check for consistency throughout paper. 23. Consider adding to the Debriefing theme. This appears very short compared to the others. 24. Authors should check for any grammatical errors, spelling, and punctuation throughout the results section. Discussion - Consider the following major and minor points for improvement: 25. It is recommended that authors provide more information when linking their findings back to past research. Authors should consider doing this throughout the discussion section. 26. Authors should distinguish between using double and single quotation marks when directly quoting participant interviews and headings. 27. Authors should avoid directly quoting participants in their discussion section – this is for the results section. It is recommended that the discussion should be used merely to discuss the findings and link back to past studies. 28. Authors should check for any grammatical errors, spelling, and punctuation throughout the discussion section. 29. Authors should consider re-writing and keeping the strengths and weaknesses section short with a specific focus on the strengths, limitations, and future directions of the study (1-2 paragraphs). Authors include a lot of information that should be in the methods section of the paper. The authors should consider moving relevant method information earlier (i.e., how focus groups were arranged, took place, etc.), and remove repetition and other irrelevant information. 30. Figure 1 is blurry. Conclusion - Conclusion is to the point and easy to read! Consider the following minor point for improvement: 31. The first sentence of the conclusion is identical to the first sentence of the discussion. Authors should consider re-writing to avoid repetition. Reviewer #2: The complexity of primary care paramedics' viewpoints on addiction screening is aptly captured by the qualitative approach. Additional comments: Give a more thorough explanation of how the recruiting process might affect the results and make recommendations for how to deal with this in subsequent studies. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Cross-analyzing the opinions and experiences of nurses, physiotherapists, dentists, midwives, and pharmacists with respect to addictive disorder screening in primary care: a qualitative study PONE-D-24-11025R1 Dear Dr. Pautrat We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Mohammad Sidiq, PhD Pain Sciences Physiotherapy Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Authors have addressed the issues raised by reviewers, and I am satisfied with the revision, and the manuscript can be accepted for publication. Congratulations to the authors. Reviewers' comments: |
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