Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 24, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-36704DESIGN AND IMPLEMENTATION OF COMPRESSOR DATA VARIATION SAFETY MONITORING AND INDUCEMENT TRACEABILITY EXPERT SYSTEMPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Hu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 11 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In this paper, the authors have conducted a study on the enhancement of compressor fault diagnosis by developing a knowledge-based expert system that integrates PCA-SPE-CNN, dynamic knowledge graphs, and natural language processing (NLP). While the research addresses an important problem in predictive maintenance for petrochemical equipment, a few suggestions are provided to enhance the clarity and depth of the methodology before recommending it for publication: 1. The authors need to revise the numerical enumeration of Sections in the manuscript. For example, the numbering of Section 2 is repeated twice. 2. While abbreviations like PCA-SPE and CNN are common in the field, providing a brief explanation of each in the abstract would help readers unfamiliar with these terms. 3. I would recommend combining PCA-SPE with other dimensionality reduction techniques or neural networks) which could possibly increase robustness in different operational conditions. 4. I would highly suggest the authors to add a Related Works section that provides information on the previous researches that were conducted in the same field and identify ways that this research has contributed to the previous ones. Perhaps, whether the research conducted was an idea obtained from previous work's future directions. 5. The authors should provide a more clear and high resolution image for Figure 14. The text is barely visible even when the image is largely scaled. Same goes for Figure 6. 6. Since the method is intended for real-time fault detection, discussing how it deals with noisy, incomplete, or anomalous data in real-world settings would be valuable. 7. I would suggest the authors to provide more details on the real-time updating mechanism of the dynamic knowledge graph. Specifically, explain how the system handles large, incremental updates and maintains accuracy without introducing delays or compromising system efficiency. 8. The authors should consider restructuring the sections so that there is a clear progression from data collection and processing to knowledge graph construction, and finally, to fault diagnosis and traceability. Reviewer #2: The article titled “Design and implementation of compressor data variation safety monitoring and inducement traceability expert system”, proposes an approach for compressor data security monitoring and trigger source identification using a dynamic knowledge graph. The approach aims to overcome the limitations in current petrochemical safety monitoring technologies and conventional expert systems by addressing the challenge of distinguishing between instrument anomalies and equipment failures As observed from the review of the manuscript, its topic is generally of interest to the readership. However, some comments and suggestions for improving the quality of the paper, are outlined below: -It is strongly recommended that the authors either expand the introduction or add a new separate section reviewing related works in the field. This would help better substantiate the innovative aspects of the research and highlight how it addresses a specific gap, contributing to the existing body of knowledge. Attention should be paid to the fact that the references already included in this article are relatively limited and do not feature particularly research studies (i.e. from the last five years), constraining both the quality and the potential impact of the article. -The methodology underlying the proposed approach is adequately defined, and its performance is sufficiently evaluated, yielding results that could enable other researchers to replicate certain aspects. Furthermore, the analysis of the methodology and the results of the proposed solution are well-supported by a sufficient number of effectively presented charts and tables. -The authors are strongly encouraged to revise the structure of the manuscript. In particular, careful attention has to be paid to the proper numbering of the sections. For instance, Section 2 is attributed both to “CONSTRUCTION OF A RESIDUAL GENERATION AND DATA VARIANCE MONITORING ALGORITHM BASED ON FAULT-TOLERANT FILTERING” and “CONSTRUCTION OF A DEEP LEARNING BASED SYSTEM FAULT CLASSIFIER”. Moreover, subsections should not include only a paragraph (i.e. subsection 4.4) or a Figure (i.e. subsection 4.6). -Outlining potential directions for future research in the conclusions section, could enhance the impact of the research outcomes. Structure and English Language: The paper is written in appropriate English language according to the standards of the Journal, however the authors are strongly recommended to conduct some proofreading and spell-checking. Reviewer #3: -Abstract clearly states the challenge of “Fault diagnosis”, in oil and gas industry but information on models and performance metric is not clear. -Data is not explained, descriptive stats about data is missing, shape of data, features in data, distribution of class etc. -Page 25 – “the convolution kernel is 1*3, the number of convolution kernels is 16, 16, 64, 64, 256, 256, the activation function is the function, and the pooling layer is the maximum pooling and average pooling.” What is meant by the activation function is the function”? -The introduction part is not explained well, no literature review. -“hyperparameters not listed. -Future study directions that concentrate on different tracks have not been added by the writers for the benefit of upcoming scholars who wish to further the academics in this sector. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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PONE-D-24-36704R1Design and Realization of Compressor Data Abnormality Safety Monitoring AND INDUCEMENT TRACEABILITY EXPERT SYSTEMPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Hu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 03 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #4: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: 1. The authors have done a well job in constructing the abstract as it is presented very effectively and summarizes the key contributions of the research 2. The authors have chosen 5 as the value for their default k-parameter in the sliding window method. Perhaps they should explain more as to why they have chosen 5? 3. The authors should explain more about the dataset that they have used for training and validation 5. To ease off the comprehension factor for readers, the authors should try to add more simple termed notes for the complex mathematical formulas that are presented in the manuscript 5. The authors should revise the citations and make sure that there is a consistent citation style throughout the manuscript Reviewer #4: The research focuses on creating a security monitoring and root cause tracing method for compressor data anomalies which is a great initiative especially since security is fundamental in such cases. Below are comments in relation to a few suggestions: - The authors are highly recommended to re-enumerate the sections properly. For example, first Section should begin with 1, and not 0. Additionally, it should be in a high priority since it was already stated in previous revision to re-enumerate properly. - There is very minimal information provided in terms of overview even for major section headings such as Section 2. - The authors are suggested to provide an overview for major headings such as Section 4 before straightly jumping to subsections, in this case, subsection 4.1. - Why is subsection 4.6 left empty and there is no content presented within it? ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #4: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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