Peer Review History
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PONE-D-24-44796Association Study of Depression and Periodontitis in an Obese Population: Analysis Based on NHANES Data from 2009 to 2014PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Li, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 04 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This manuscript examines the association between depressive symptoms and periodontitis in an obese population, using NHANES data (2009-2014). The study reveals an unexpected finding: a negative association between depressive symptoms and periodontitis, suggesting that depressive symptoms might act as a protective factor against periodontitis in obese individuals. This result diverges from most existing research, which links depression with an increased risk of periodontitis, likely due to behavioral and biological mechanisms such as systemic inflammation and reduced motivation for self-care. Major Points 1. Explanation of Unexpected Results: o The authors attempt to explain the inverse association observed by proposing mechanisms unique to obesity. These include metabolic and inflammatory pathways influenced by adipokines, as well as behavioral coping factors. While these suggestions are interesting, they are largely speculative and would benefit from further empirical support or a more in-depth review of relevant literature. o The manuscript would be strengthened by a deeper exploration of how obesity uniquely alters the inflammatory and immune response, particularly focusing on how these changes might interact with depression to impact periodontal health. Specific references to literature on adipokines (e.g., leptin, adiponectin) and systemic inflammatory markers would provide a stronger foundation for the proposed mechanisms. 2. Consideration of Additional Comparison Groups: o The study’s insights would be enhanced by including additional comparison groups, specifically a depressed, non-obese group and a non-depressed, non-obese group. This addition would allow for a clearer comparison and could help determine if the negative association between depressive symptoms and periodontitis is unique to the obese population or is an artifact of the study design. o Including these groups would also help contextualize the findings within broader population health and clarify whether obesity alone accounts for the protective association observed. 3. Terminology Consistency: o The study relies on the PHQ-9 to measure depressive symptoms, which captures recent emotional states rather than diagnosing chronic or clinical depression. Thus, it is crucial to refer consistently to participants as having "depressive symptoms" rather than as being “depressed.” Using “depressed” might imply a clinical diagnosis, which the PHQ-9 does not provide. Maintaining consistent terminology would more accurately reflect the study's methodology and prevent potential misinterpretation of the findings. 4. Limitations of the PHQ-9 Questionnaire: o The PHQ-9 reflects recent symptoms (over the past two weeks), and thus might capture transient emotional states rather than chronic depressive disorders. This could lead to misclassification, as some individuals scoring high might not have clinical depression but could be experiencing temporary stress or emotional fluctuations. Acknowledging this limitation in the manuscript would enhance transparency and help readers interpret the findings cautiously. For future studies, the authors could consider using longitudinal measures or clinical diagnostic tools to distinguish between temporary and chronic depressive conditions. 5. Context in Existing Literature: o The manuscript would benefit from an expanded introduction to contextualize the effects of both obesity and depression on periodontitis individually. � Obesity and Periodontitis: The literature generally supports a positive association between obesity and periodontitis due to factors like systemic inflammation, insulin resistance, and immune dysfunction caused by excess adipose tissue. These conditions contribute to periodontal tissue degradation, increasing periodontitis risk. A more detailed background on obesity’s direct influence on periodontitis would strengthen the reader’s understanding of why this population might experience unique associations with depressive symptoms and periodontal health. � Depression and Periodontitis: Similarly, depression is known to be associated with a higher risk of periodontitis. This link is commonly attributed to decreased motivation for oral hygiene, increased inflammation, and immune dysregulation associated with depressive states. These insights would better frame the current study’s novelty and emphasize the surprising nature of the observed negative association in an obese population. 6. Behavioral Factors and Health-Seeking Assumptions: o The authors suggest that depressed individuals may engage in certain coping mechanisms or seek mental health support, indirectly benefiting their oral health. However, these behavioral assumptions are not directly supported by data within the study, as no information on coping strategies or health behaviors was collected. If the authors are to suggest behavioral coping as a factor, future studies should collect data on participants’ health-seeking behaviors, mental health management, and oral hygiene practices to substantiate this claim. 7. Unexplored Biological Pathways: o While the authors suggest that metabolic changes in obese individuals might alter inflammatory responses to depressive symptoms, this hypothesis is not directly tested in the study. The inclusion of specific physiological markers, such as cortisol levels, cytokines, or adipokines, could have provided more concrete insights into how depressive symptoms interact with obesity-related inflammatory processes to impact periodontal health. Future studies that incorporate these biomarkers would enable a more direct investigation into the proposed mechanisms. Strengths: • Novel Research Focus: This study addresses a previously unexplored association between depression and periodontitis within an obese population, filling a gap in the literature and opening avenues for further research. • Large Sample Size: The NHANES data provides a large, representative sample, which enhances the reliability and statistical power of the findings. • Comprehensive Covariate Adjustment: The use of multivariable logistic regression with numerous covariates (age, race, education, etc.) strengthens the credibility of the findings by minimizing confounding effects. Weaknesses: • Speculative Explanations: The biological and behavioral explanations provided are plausible but lack empirical support, as no biomarkers or behavioral data were collected to substantiate these claims. • Inadequate Exploration of Relevant Pathways: More depth in discussing obesity’s effects on immune function and inflammation would provide a stronger theoretical basis for the study’s findings. • Behavioral Assumptions without Supporting Data: The authors suggest coping behaviors as a factor in the observed association but lack direct data on health-seeking behaviors, mental health support, or oral hygiene practices, weakening this explanation. • Terminology and Measurement Limitations: The reliance on PHQ-9 without clinical diagnosis could lead to misclassification, as it captures recent depressive symptoms rather than chronic depression. Consistent use of “depressive symptoms” is recommended for clarity. This study provides valuable insights into the relationship between depressive symptoms and periodontitis in an obese population, challenging established assumptions. While the findings are intriguing, the speculative nature of the explanations and lack of additional comparison groups limit the interpretability. Future research should: • Incorporate non-obese comparison groups to assess whether the observed associations are specific to obesity. • Use longitudinal designs to explore the stability and causality of these associations over time. • Collect biomarker data and behavioral information to substantiate proposed biological and psychological mechanisms. Addressing these areas in future studies will enhance the rigor and applicability of the findings, contributing to a more nuanced understanding of how mental health and periodontal health intersect within unique populations. Reviewer #2: Interesting results, definitely not something we are used to see in terms of the results and negative correlation of periodontitis and depression. Please see below, some of my comments. Introduction: • “and its prevalence has significantly increased globally, with 1.5 billion adults being overweight in 2008 and obesity rates tripling by 2016.” Long sentence and the information seem redundant. Consider splitting to two sentences. • Hypotheses are not clearly defined in the introduction, what are/is your null and alternative hypotheses? Methods: • “A periodontitis that was classified as moderate was defined as two adjacent alveoli (AL)” alveoli? That is a typo, you mean attachment loss? • I understand that you mentioned that covariates were picked in accordance of clinical expertise and research, however, I feel a shortcoming is that periodontitis is more complex than that, there are more environmental, habitual and systemic factors that play a role that were not mentioned or included. Discussion: • You use of the word “protective” factor against periodontal disease is a little misleading. Periodontal disease is a very complex disease with a very complex pathogenesis, I would not say depression is a protective factor against periodontal disease against obesity. • You did mention a couple of mechanisms of why the association between periodontitis and depression is negatively correlated in obese patients, however, I think you need to stress more on these mechanisms, because your results are only looking at retrospective data and patient questionnaires. Again, periodontitis is pretty complex and has a complex pathogenesis, this needs to be emphasized in introduction and discussion. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Omar Al-karadsheh Reviewer #2: Yes: Hawra AlQallaf, BDM, MSD ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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