Peer Review History
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PONE-D-24-24628Validation of an activity-based therapy tracking tool for people living with spinal cord injury or disease using cognitive debriefing interviewsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Musselman, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 08 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Can you please confirm that all participants gave consent for interview transcript to be published? If they DID provide consent for these transcripts to be published, please also confirm that the transcripts do not contain any potentially identifying information (or let us know if the participants consented to having their personal details published and made publicly available). We consider the following details to be identifying information: - Names, nicknames, and initials - Age more specific than round numbers - GPS coordinates, physical addresses, IP addresses, email addresses - Information in small sample sizes (e.g. 40 students from X class in X year at X university) - Specific dates (e.g. visit dates, interview dates) - ID numbers Or, if the participants DID NOT provide consent for these transcripts to be published: - Provide a de-identified version of the data or excerpts of interview responses - Provide information regarding how these transcripts can be accessed by researchers who meet the criteria for access to confidential data, including: a) the grounds for restriction b) the name of the ethics committee, Institutional Review Board, or third-party organization that is imposing sharing restrictions on the data c) a non-author, institutional point of contact that is able to field data access queries, in the interest of maintaining long-term data accessibility. d) Any relevant data set names, URLs, DOIs, etc. that an independent researcher would need in order to request your minimal data set. 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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). 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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This study provides insight about the content validity of an activity-based therapy (ABT) tracking tool using feedback from different types of community clinicians, and people with lived experience. These are the two target groups that would use the ABT tool in the foreseeable future. Furthermore, this research provides an excellent background on not only the content of the tracking tool, but also potential implementation considerations and strategies. The introduction and methods sections were particularly strong. The authors did an excellent job of describing previous work and demonstrating how this study was the next logical step moving towards implementation. Major points for revision or clarification: 1. Introduction. (Line 107) The purpose is apparent within the abstract. However, within the introduction, the wording should be revised to emphasize that this is the purpose/aim in the body of the manuscript (e.g., the purpose/aim was to evaluate….) 2. Introduction. There is no mention within the introduction that this tracking tool is specific to the community setting. This is my interpretation based on the methods, please clarify whether the tool is targeted towards the community and/or other settings. 3. Methods. The background of the research team members is unclear. I suggest including these details. 4. Methods. (Line 115-118) You suggest that probing is “a technique”. If it is a “type” of cognitive debriefing interview, I suggest making this correction. If probing is a technique that is part of a cognitive debriefing interview, include a line to further define what a cognitive debriefing interview is. 5. Results. (Line 184 -193) Although your references (30,31) suggest abstraction into themes it may be more appropriate to use “categories” and “subcategories” to avoid confusion with thematic analysis or variants (Example Vears & Gillam 2022). Consider and/or clarify your position. 6. Discussion and conclusions. (Line 487-509) Was the app the only suggestion made by participants? Was this prompted? 7. Discussion and conclusions. You have described a stand-alone app to track ABT activities. Have you considered making this app part of an existing documentation app or software? This could be part of the discussion or future directions. Minor points for revision or clarification: 1. Title. Suggest including “community” in the title. 2. References. Review the references. I noticed some included the term “(journal article)”. Also check journal abbreviations. 3. Line 162. Typographical error “of” should be “about”. 4. Line 205. Report demographic information of study dropout, if known. 5. Line 235. Place words used to describe the tool in “quotations” if they are direct quotes. 6. Line 293. Check that this quote was from a person with SCI/D, it seems like it may be a quote from a clinician. 7. Line 381. Clarify that this is the [National] SCI conference, if that is what the participant meant. 8. Line 242-245. Remind the reader which themes (categories) were deductive, and which were inductive. Reviewer #2: The authors have developed a new tracking tool for Activity Based Therapy for persons with SCI/D and they outline very well the reason for creating such a tool as the current available tools leave a clinical gap. The methodology is well described and appropriate. The complete dataset is not made available by the authors as they report that they are unable to share the interview transcripts (hence the "No" to question 3 above). The results, discussion explain the discrepancies between the planned methodology and the actual sample (see below) and cover the limitations of the study well. The conclusion gives a good summation and the authors used appropriate language in stating that the results support use for "community-based" clinics since those interviewed for this project came from that background. I did not identify any major issues in the paper. I did identify 1 minor issue: 1. Between lines 139-143 the authors outline the proposed sample that they intended to interview based on sample size calculations. This included 10-12 clinicians and 10-12 individuals with SCI/D. The individuals with SCI/D were further planned to include an equal distribution of participants living with tetraplegia and paraplegia. In Table 2 (beginning on line 208) it shows that there were 9 clinicians interviewed (close to the expectations) but only 5 individuals with SCI/D (with all 5 having tetraplegia). It is later explained that the recruitment occurred during the COVID-19 pandemic which impacted the sample size. The authors describe in the Limitations section that their sample size is sufficient to reach consensus but fail to mention whether there is an impact from not having any individuals with paraplegia among their interviewees. I have this listed as a minor issue as the authors do not make any claims that the tool will work for all persons with SCI/D so they keep their conclusions in line with the cohort that they were able to interview. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Content validation of an activity-based therapy tracking tool in a community setting for people living with spinal cord injury or disease using cognitive debriefing interviews PONE-D-24-24628R1 Dear Dr. Musselman, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Zheng Su Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Accept Reviewers' comments: |
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