Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 13, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-23038Determining an optimal case definition using mid-upper arm circumference with or without weight for age to identify childhood wasting in the PhilippinesPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Casas, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. I would like to sincerely apologise for the delay you have incurred with your submission. It has been exceptionally difficult to secure reviewers to evaluate your study. We have now received the completed reviews; the comments are available below. The reviewers have raised significant scientific concerns about the study that need to be addressed in a revision. Please pay particular attention to Reviewer#2's comments. Please revise the manuscript to address all the reviewer's comments in a point-by-point response in order to ensure it is meeting the journal's publication criteria. Please note that the revised manuscript will need to undergo further review, we thus cannot at this point anticipate the outcome of the evaluation process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 01 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: MUAC cut offs were largely based on risk of mortality. There are several studies to suggest that MUAC less than 11.5 Cm have higher risk of mortality. However, there is definite need for finding other criteria which has better sensitivity for screening in the community . Reviewer #2: Dear authors, Thank you for the opportunity to review your paper on an adjusted MUAC cut-off in combination with WAZ for identifying acute malnutrition in the Philippines. Please find my feedback on your article below: It would be good to provide more rationale for using MUAC in combination with WAZ- WAZ not an indicator for acute malnutrition. Familiar with health workers, but potential for misclassification, especially if low WAZ is due to low HAZ. Additionally, it loses practical field advantages of WHZ and MUAC in that age in months is required for plotting/calculating WAZ but not needed for MUAC and WHZ. I disagree with the definition provided from line 138 on page 5- that a child should be classified as moderately wasted if their weight-for-age Z-score is -2SD<waz<-3, and="" if="" severely="" wasted="" waz="">Area under the ROC was used as the indicator of the best-performing MUAC cut-off value- why was something like Youden’s J not used? This would give a better indication of the balance between sensitivity and specificity- the AUROC will only give an indication of the diagnostic accuracy of the test. In table 4, raised MUAC cut-offs are recommended that raise the sensitivity of MUAC to approximately 80%, however this comes at a cost of ~30% lower specificity. Results describe 4.6% severely wasted (WHZ) of 30522= 1419 children; 5.3% (1626 of 30522) severely wasted according to MUAC. Given the numbers presented in the study, sensitivity is 83.23% and specificity is 79.79% for the alternative MUAC, raising the cut-off would result in 1353 correctly classified as true positives, but with a corresponding increase in false positives to approximately 5800. This represents a marked improvement on the number of true positive cases identified by MUAC, but with a correspondingly exponential increase in the number of false positives identified. The much higher absolute number of false positives is due to the relatively low prevalence of the condition in the general population. This point is conceded in the discussion, and table 6 presents and interesting analysis of the misclassifications- this on its own would make for an interesting article when assessing current MUAC recommendations. Misclassification often results in eroded trust in health systems, opportunity costs for caregivers and a higher burden of health systems, which needs to be considered in this paper. While I agree that nutritionally vulnerable children would benefit from earlier intervention, treatment for severe and moderate acute malnutrition is markedly different from treatment for stunting and related underweight for age. For example, improving dietary diversity as mentioned as a risk factor in these children in the paper may be a good way to treat stunting, and possibly underweight, but will not be affected by programmes treating acute malnutrition with F-75 and F-100 based products. Overall it is an interesting idea, however, more consideration needs to be given to the practical implications of the changed MUAC cut-off values presented.</waz<-3,> Reviewer #3: This manuscript describes a secondary analysis of data from a national survey to identify alternative MUAC cut-offs to better identify wasting in young children in the Philippines. Overall this paper is well written and logical with outcomes that, while not perfect, may offer an opportunity for improved identification of wasting in this vulnerable group. P4, line 111 - were potential participants able to decline to participate? P5, line 124 - was the sample still representative after removal of incomplete cases? Was there anything about this group that may have been different? eg more remote? Does that matter? P5, line 133 - need refs in this sentence for the method of calculating Sn, Sp, PPV and NPV. Table 1 - add (months) to age; double check % within subgroups as some do not appear to be correct. If I am misinterpreting I suggest that the table should be reformatted to be clearer. P9, line 175 - please define the cut-offs for performance for your AUROC. Probably best placed in the methods but if you are going to say they performed poorly what is the criterion for performance. Tables 2 and 3 - indication of how Sn and Sp were calculated would help your reader. P13, line 234 - I am not clear why this section or Table 6 are included. I cannot see in the methods that this was planned and there appears to be no mention of diet in the methods at all. Similarly the discussion of this content. If it is to be included there needs to be better alignment through the methods and ideally the same content provided for all children for more transparent comparison. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Determining an optimal case definition using mid-upper arm circumference with or without weight for age to identify childhood wasting in the Philippines PONE-D-24-23038R1 Dear Dr. Casas, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. 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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Although higher cutoffs is definitely going to improve sensitivity and will be useful still WFH will be helpful in identifying children having multiple anthro deficit Reviewer #3: Thank you for the time taken to address the comments provided at review. Please add a footnote to table 1 to account for differences due to rounding. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Dr Praveen Kumar Reviewer #3: No ********** |
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