Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 18, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-09979External negative pressure transiently reduces intravenous pressure and augments the arteriovenous pressure gradient in the affected limb segmentPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Callender, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 27 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please include your updated Competing Interests statement in your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf. 4. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: ”Saphenous venous (n = 15), and dorsalis pedis artery pressure (n = 3) were recorded via pressure catheter, alongside beat-by-beat systemic cardiovascular parameters.“ Can you clarify the precise meaning of "N"? If "N" represents the number of different measurement points, then it seems that the measurement errors for arteriovenous pressure are not at the same level. Reviewer #2: Callender and colleagues sought to determine the intravascular pressure responses to intermittent negative pressure (INP) in the supine and seated postures. They observed that INP induced a transient decrease in leg intravenous, but not intraarterial pressure in both postures, though the effect was more pronounced in the supine position. Overall, the study is well written and the findings are interesting. I have only a few suggestions for the authors to consider. The authors should add the skin blood flux measurements in the methods section and describe the results accordingly (excluding its reference from the introduction line 66). Lines 121-127: Please add the author’s hypotheses. Lines 144-146: What is the rationale for this intermittent protocol (i.e., pressure applied and cycle time)? Was it based on previous studies? If so, please provide the references. The data from the Supplementary Figure is important and should be included in the main manuscript. Figure 2: It is recommended to add a panel with the group average and individual data of the nadir responses. This will help the readers to better visualize the interindividual variability. Reviewer #3: This manuscript describes a study investigating the effect of an intermittent negative pressure treatment on the intravenous and intraarterial pressure in a cohort of volunteers. The authors concluded that the treatment resulted in a significant decrease in the intravenous pressure and therefore in an increase in the pressure gradient both in the supine and in the sitting position. The conclusion is well supported by the data. The study is well conducted, the methodology is sound, the statistical analysis has been performed appropriately and rigorously and the manuscript is overall well written. All data underlying the findings have been made fully available by the authors. Minor proofreading is needed. Line 59 to 61 - The authors wrote: Although the systemic effects of LBNP are well documented (3), the mechanisms underlying the positive clinical effect of INP remain unclear, but may relate to oscillations in shear stress within the macro (4) and micro - vasculature (5,6) Since this is the first time the acronym LBPN appears in the text, you should spell it out. Lines 286: The authors wrote: Temporal changes during the during both postures are presented in Figure 1. I think this should be Temporal changes during both postures are presented in Figure 1 Line 469 to 472 - The authors wrote: Similarly, the arterial pressure measurements we obtained were sensitive to changes in limb position, and mechanical perturbation (e.g. tapping or flushing) of the artery itself, therefore, we are therefore confident that our local arterial pressure measures would detect any relevant influence of an external pressure change. The word therefore is spelled twice. Please correct into Similarly, the arterial pressure measurements we obtained were sensitive to changes in limb position, and mechanical perturbation (e.g. tapping or flushing) of the artery itself, therefore, we are confident that our local arterial pressure measures would detect any relevant influence of an external pressure change This manuscript describes a study investigating the effect of an intermittent negative pressure treatment on the intravenous and intraarterial pressure in a cohort of volunteers. The authors concluded that the treatment resulted in a significant decrease in the intravenous pressure and therefore in an increase in the pressure gradient both in the supine and in the sitting position. The conclusion is well supported by the data. The study is well conducted, the methodology is sound, the statistical analysis has been performed appropriately and rigorously and the manuscript is overall well written. All data underlying the findings have been made fully available by the authors. Minor proofreading is needed ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-24-09979R1External negative pressure transiently reduces intravenous pressure and augments the arteriovenous pressure gradient in the affected limb segmentPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Callender, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 12 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Haipeng Liu Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments : Dear Authors, Thanks for the update. The early comments have been largely addressed, while some minor issues need further improvement. Please revise according to the reviewer's comments. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #4: (No Response) Reviewer #5: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #4: (No Response) Reviewer #5: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #4: Improvements in transitions, linking the literature review more closely to the study’s aims, and clarifying complex terminology would enhance its accessibility and impact. The Methods section is thorough, but minor adjustments are needed in participant recruitment, data handling, and statistical analysis to ensure reproducibility. The Results section presents robust, relevant data, but could be strengthened by improving data presentation clarity, providing more context, and discussing the physiological relevance in greater depth. The discussion is solid, offering meaningful comparisons with existing literature and highlighting clinical implications, but would benefit from deeper mechanistic insights, more exploration of arterial data, and clearer articulation of clinical relevance. These enhancements would position the study more effectively within vascular research and increase its potential impact on future clinical applications. Reviewer #5: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #4: Yes: ERNEST MUSEKWA Reviewer #5: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. 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External negative pressure transiently reduces intravenous pressure and augments the arteriovenous pressure gradient in the affected limb segment PONE-D-24-09979R2 Dear Dr. Callender, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #4: (No Response) Reviewer #6: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #7: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #4: (No Response) Reviewer #6: Yes Reviewer #7: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #4: (No Response) Reviewer #6: Yes Reviewer #7: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #4: (No Response) Reviewer #6: Yes Reviewer #7: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #4: (No Response) Reviewer #6: Yes Reviewer #7: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #4: (No Response) Reviewer #6: This is a high quality manuscript which has adequately addressed all previous revisions and offers a preliminary but insightful investigation into the role of INP for future clinical purposes. Research ethics and methodology are clearly illustrated highlighting rigour of the work provided. Reviewer #7: Thank you for the opportunity to review the paper "External negative pressure transiently reduces intravenous pressure and augments the arteriovenous pressure gradient in the affected limb segment", presenting basic research about the effects of intermittent external negative pressure on intraarterial and intravenous blood pressure. I have not reviewed this paper previously, therefore i cannot answer the question whether my previous comments have been addressed. From the R2 document it appears to me that the comments of the other reviewers have been addressed adequately, however the final decision about this is obviously up to the reviewer who made the comment. Generally this study addresses a highly complex issue, with rather little previous knowledge, and has clear conclusions regarding the measured effects, which in my opinion merits publication. Introduction and methods section are thorough, and rather long, however, I consider this necessary given the complexity of the subject. The same appears for the results section. Regarding the discussion, the authors have already addressed my major concern, that this study was performed in young, healthy participants, and not in vascular patients, and proposed further studies to investigate blood pressure changes in vascular patients. In my opinion, this is obviously necessary, maybe one should even compare patients where intermittent negative pressure therapy contributes to wound healing, and patients where this therapy does not succeed. I have not found any minor issues to be corrected in the manuscript, and suggest that it is accepted for publication. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #4: Yes: ERNEST MUSEKWA Reviewer #6: Yes: Niraj S Kumar Reviewer #7: Yes: Martin Altreuther ********** |
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