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Original SubmissionJuly 29, 2024
Decision Letter - Vasu Appanna, Editor

PONE-D-24-31234Metabolic versatility and nitrate reduction pathways of a new thermophilic bacterium of the Deferrivibrionaceae: Deferrivibrio metallireducens sp. nov isolated from hot sediments of Vulcano Island, ItalyPLOS ONE

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Dear Dr. Gales

Your manuscript titled "Metabolic versatility and nitrate reduction pathways of a new thermophilic bacterium of the Deferrivibrionaceae: Deferrivibrio metallireducens sp. nov isolated from hot sediments of Vulcano Island, Italy" has been reviewed and has been found acceptable for publication with minor revision. The work has revealed some interesting metabolic attributes of this thermophilic bacterium, however, it is important to limit the discussion section to the results obtained. Please take into account the suggestions of the reviewers in regard to the points raised while framing the revised version of the manuscript.

Thank you

Vasu D. Appanna PhD

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1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions?

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: N/A

Reviewer #2: N/A

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: The article by Grégoire et al. describes the isolation of a novel thermophilic bacterium.

The manuscript is of interest, and the data support the conclusions.

I only have minor recommendations:

- Figure 6, FN graph: It is difficult to discern between the groups. Please change one to an open box or something more recognizable.

- Figure 7: The X axis is cut off for cymA

- Figure captions: What is your n value for the studies? Please list in figure captions (for all figures). For the TEM, was this a representative image? How many images were captured?

- The Results and Discussion section is quite long (90 references) and contains a lot of hand-waving. For example, you discuss the roTCA cycle, and other enzymes that "could be" at work, but provide no functional evidence for many of them. I recommend trimming this section down by 2-3 pages and focusing on what was discovered and not what you believe may be happening

Reviewer #2: Dear Editor,

I have thoroughly reviewed the manuscript entitled "Metabolic versatility and nitrate reduction pathways of a new thermophilic bacterium of the Deferrivibrionaceae: Deferrivibrio metallireducens sp. nov. isolated from hot sediments of Vulcano Island, Italy," and I would like to offer the following comments for improvement: I have also mentined the some changes in the MS pdf.

*Please remove any unnecessary paragraphs from the abstract for better clarity.

*Ensure consistent formatting for temperature symbols (Celsius) throughout the manuscript.

*Properly align the tables and address any missing entries.

*Avoid the use of capitalized words inappropriately throughout the manuscript. Additionally, the manuscript requires English language corrections.

*Ensure proper referencing style and maintain consistency in the reference format.

*Italicize all scientific names and follow the standard rules of scientific nomenclature.

*In the Materials & Methods section, include the concentrations of the PCR components and provide details of the PCR programs used.

*Consider using iTOL tools for better representation of the phylogenetic analysis figure.

*Correct any grammatical and language errors throughout the manuscript.

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Reviewer #1: No

Reviewer #2: No

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Submitted filename: Reviewd 9.9.2024.pdf
Revision 1

Dear Professor Appanna,

I am grateful to you and the two reviewers for your contributions. As a result, we have improved the quality and relevance of our article. The publisher and the two reviewers were correct in noting that the results and discussion section was too long and speculative. We have reduced the article by two or three pages and withdrawn ten references. We have focused on what we can demonstrate and eliminated hand-waving. We are confident you will find the corrections to the manuscript convincing.

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This section is irrelevant to our manuscript. We simply benefited from the help of Italian colleagues, who are mentioned in the acknowledgments.

3. In your Methods section, please provide additional information regarding the permits you obtained for the work. Please ensure you have included the full name of the authority that approved the field site access and, if no permits were required, a brief statement explaining why.

No permits were required, as Italy is not a signatory to the Nagoya Protocol. We introduced the M&M section by saying: “Although Italy is not a signatory to the Nagoya Protocol, we carried out the sampling with the authorization of our collaborators from the INGV Palermo (Italy), as stated in the acknowledgments.”

Indeed, we (Galès, Postec & Erauso) published last year a strain characterization in IJSEM from comparable samples:” Marinitoga aeolica sp. nov., a novel thermophilic anaerobic heterotroph isolated from a shallow hydrothermal field of Panarea Island in the Aeolian archipelago, Italy.”

4. Please include a separate caption for each figure in your manuscript.

It has been done.

5. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice.

It has been done. No cited article has been retracted yet. As requested by the first reviewer, we have reduced the list of references (ten references withdrawn).

Reviewer #1: The article by Grégoire et al. describes the isolation of a novel thermophilic bacterium.

The manuscript is of interest, and the data support the conclusions.

I only have minor recommendations:

- Figure 6, FN graph: It is difficult to discern between the groups. Please change one to an open box or something more recognizable.

It has been done. Nitrate is shown in an open box. This makes the figure easier to understand.

- Figure 7: The X axis is cut off for cymA

It has been corrected.

- Figure captions: What is your n value for the studies? Please list in figure captions (for all figures). For the TEM, was this a representative image? How many images were captured?

All experiments were performed in triplicate. About 25 TEM images were taken, from which we selected Figure 3. For the RT-qPCR experiments, three dilutions were analyzed. These clarifications have been included in the text and figure legends.

- The Results and Discussion section is quite long (90 references) and contains a lot of hand-waving. For example, you discuss the roTCA cycle, and other enzymes that “could be” at work, but provide no functional evidence for many of them. I recommend trimming this section down by 2-3 pages and focusing on what was discovered and not what you believe may be happening

The Results and Discussion section has been significantly reduced, as the reviewer asked. We have removed all sections deemed too speculative. The relevant section is now more than two pages shorter than initially planned, which improves the manuscript. Ten references have been withdrawn. We have eliminated the lengthy discussion of the roTCA cycle and the denitrification/DNRA switch regulation, which will be the subject of further research.

Reviewer #2: Dear Editor,

I have thoroughly reviewed the manuscript entitled "Metabolic versatility and nitrate reduction pathways of a new thermophilic bacterium of the Deferrivibrionaceae: Deferrivibrio metallireducens sp. nov. isolated from hot sediments of Vulcano Island, Italy," and I would like to offer the following comments for improvement: I have also mentined the some changes in the MS pdf.

*Please remove any unnecessary paragraphs from the abstract for better clarity.

There have been none in accordance with the wishes of the first reviewer.

*Ensure consistent formatting for temperature symbols (Celsius) throughout the manuscript.

It has been done throughout the text.

*Properly align the tables and address any missing entries.

This has been done.

*Avoid the use of capitalized words inappropriately throughout the manuscript. Additionally, the manuscript requires English language corrections.

This has been corrected.

*Ensure proper referencing style and maintain consistency in the reference format.

This has been done.

*Italicize all scientific names and follow the standard rules of scientific nomenclature.

This has been done.

*In the Materials & Methods section, include the concentrations of the PCR components and provide details of the PCR programs used.

This has been done.

In the text: “Quantitative PCR was performed with 2 L cDNA (directly reverse transcribed DNA and 10-1/10-2 dilutions), 0.25 L of each 10 M primer, 10 L of 2X SyberGreen and 7.5 L of ultrapure RNAse/DNAse-Free distilled water (Thermofisher). Thermal cycling conditions were as follows: 2 min at 98°C, followed by 30 cycles of 5 s at 98°C, 30 s at 61°C, and 20 s at 72°C. Data collection was performed during each annealing phase.”

*Consider using iTOL tools for better representation of the phylogenetic analysis figure.

Thank you for your valuable feedback regarding the phylogenetic analysis figures. We want to clarify that the phylogenetic trees presented in Figures 1 and 2 have already been generated using iTOL. To enhance clarity and provide a more detailed response to the reviewer, we have updated the legends for both figures accordingly.

*Correct any grammatical and language errors throughout the manuscript.

This has been done, we hope our efforts will be seen and appreciated.

We hope you will enjoy reading the corrections to this article. If you have any questions, please don’t hesitate to contact us.

The corresponding authors

Grégoire Galès

gregoire.gales@univ-amu.fr

Gaël Erauso

gael.erauso@univ-amu.fr

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Decision Letter - Vasu Appanna, Editor

Metabolic versatility and nitrate reduction pathways of a new thermophilic bacterium of the Deferrivibrionaceae: Deferrivibrio metallireducens sp. nov isolated from hot sediments of Vulcano Island, Italy

PONE-D-24-31234R1

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Academic Editor

PLOS ONE

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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed

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2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions?

The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented.

Reviewer #1: (No Response)

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3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: (No Response)

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4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available?

The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.

Reviewer #1: (No Response)

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5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English?

PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.

Reviewer #1: (No Response)

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6. Review Comments to the Author

Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)

Reviewer #1: (No Response)

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Reviewer #1: No

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Formally Accepted
Acceptance Letter - Vasu Appanna, Editor

PONE-D-24-31234R1

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