Peer Review History
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PONE-D-24-40473The impact of straw and its post-pyrolysis incorporation on functional microbes and mineralization of organic carbon in yellow paddy soilPLOS ONE Dear Dr. wang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 02 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Comments The research article by Fangchi Wang et al., titled “The impact of straw and its post-pyrolysis incorporation on functional microbes and mineralization of organic carbon in yellow paddy soil,” provides valuable insights into establishing a theoretical framework for the microecological mechanisms of soil carbon sequestration and informing rational fertilization practices for Guizhou's yellow paddy soils. The study is based on a five-year field experiment with four treatments: no fertilizer application (CK), chemical fertilizer only (NPK), straw combined with chemical fertilizer (NPKS), and biochar combined with chemical fertilizer (NPKB). By integrating indoor mineralization culture with metagenomic approaches, the authors analyzed the response of organic carbon mineralization and carbon cycle genes in typical paddy soil from Guizhou Province, China, to different fertilization treatments. The manuscript presents interesting results and could be accepted after necessary major revisions. Below, I provide specific comments to help improve the manuscript. Specific comments: Abstracts should provide a clear and concise summary of the study's purpose, methods, and key findings. Overly detailed or lengthy descriptions can detract from the immediate accessibility of the information. Summarizing the core outcomes more directly will help ensure the abstract captures readers' attention and communicates the research's significance effectively. Other comments Line 20: There is a typographical error with the use of 'The' in the middle. Please check for similar issues throughout the manuscript. Present the percentage increase, decrease, or values of the indicators that were altered among the treatments. What are the suggestions for future research based on your study? Please add this information at the end of the abstract. Line 105-107: The stated objective of the study, which suggests providing a theoretical framework for the microecological mechanisms of soil carbon sequestration and informing fertilization practices, does not seem accurately aligned with the actual goals of the research. Could you please clarify the true objectives? What specific issues were you aiming to address? What practical outcomes did you hope to implement, and what problem are you trying to solve with this research? Line 87: The sentence “Research indicates that the application of straw and biochar markedly influences genes associated with soil carbon fixation and degradation” add this sentence here “Additionally, combined straw return and other fertilizer significantly enhanced soil fertility and beneficial bacterial abundance, with soil organic carbon being the primary factor influencing bacterial community structure (Borny et al., 2024)” https://doi.org/10.56946/jspae.v3i1.404” and try to add recent citations in the introduction section. Line 136: correct “phas e” remove the space. Line 209-223, Please rewrite this section to improve the flow of the text. Avoid using the same terms repeatedly in consecutive sentences Table 1: The statistical lettering seems incorrect. I recommend reanalyzing the table data or reviewing the analysis, as there may be errors in how it was reported. For example in DOC 226 is ab while 196 is a. Many other mistakes are existed in the manuscript such as grammatical, extra spacing, etc which all should be addressed. Regards Izhar Ali Reviewer #2: Comments on PONE-D-24-40473 In this manuscript, a 30-day indoor soil mineralization culture test was conducted based on a five-year experimental field to investigate the effects of straw and biochar amendments on soil carbon mineralization and the functional genes of microbial communities. The study is relevant to soil management practices, particularly in the context of sustainable agriculture and carbon sequestration. However, it requires some revisions to improve clarity, depth, and coherence. Below are specific comments and suggestions. Specific comments 1. Soil and experimental design: It is necessary to clarify whether the application of straw and biochar was conducted solely in the first year or if it was supplemented annually. 2. Could you please explain in detail why MBC were high under NPKS and NPKB treatments (Table 1), while the mineralization rate (Table 2, k) of NPKB showed no significant difference from the control? 3. The description of the treatments is clear, but consider summarizing them in a table format for quick reference. 4. Your discussion of the contrasting effects of straw and biochar on SOC mineralization is compelling. Highlight the long-term implications of these findings for soil management practices, particularly in terms of balancing immediate nutrient availability with long-term carbon sequestration. 5. Line287: It appears that Figure 2 does not clearly demonstrate that endochitinase (E3.2.1.14) exhibited the highest abundance under the NPKS treatment. 6. Line298-299: How does Figure 3 demonstrate that NPKS increased the gene abundance of MCEE, rbcL, and GAPDH? 7. Line 321: ‘MOO375’ should be amended to ‘M00375’. What do red and blue represent, respectively? 8. Line 339: Could you provide evidence that the carbon sequestration pathway is significantly positively correlated with pH? I cannot find it directly. 9. Line 346: It is more appropriate to modify (a) and (b) to ‘Abundance of Carbon Degrading Bacteria’ and ‘Abundance of Carbon Fixing Bacteria’. 10. Line 374: When using terms like ‘soil active organic carbon’, consider providing brief definitions or examples to ensure clarity. For instance, explain what constitutes active organic carbon in practical terms and how they differ from labile carbon. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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The impact of straw and its post-pyrolysis incorporation on functional microbes and mineralization of organic carbon in yellow paddy soil PONE-D-24-40473R1 Dear Dr. wang, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Dafeng Hui, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): The authors made great efforts and addressed the reviewers' concerns. I recommend Accept. Minor changes: L28: delete "Overall," L223: delete "and analysis" L535-539: please use past tense to describe the results here. For example, change are to were, activates to activated, alters to altered, accelerates to accelerated, does to did, elevates to elevated. Reviewers' comments: |
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