Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 8, 2024 |
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Relation between motor competence and academic achievement: the mediating role of fitness and cognition in boys and girls PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Ruiz-Hermosa, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 31 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Thank you for stating the following financial disclosure: “The Ministry of Economy and Competitiveness-Carlos III Health Institute (FIS PI16/01919) funded this study. Additional funding was obtained from the Research Network on Preventative Activities and Health Promotion (RD12/0005/0009). Furthermore, Andrés Redondo-Tébar and Abel Ruiz-Hermosa are postdoctoral researchers funded by the Margarita Salas Fellowship through the University of Castilla-La Mancha “Next Generation EU” (2022-POST-21124 and 2021-MS-20547, respectively).” Please state what role the funders took in the study. If the funders had no role, please state: "The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript." If this statement is not correct you must amend it as needed. Please include this amended Role of Funder statement in your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf. 5. 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Please ensure that you have an ORCID iD and that it is validated in Editorial Manager. To do this, go to ‘Update my Information’ (in the upper left-hand corner of the main menu), and click on the Fetch/Validate link next to the ORCID field. This will take you to the ORCID site and allow you to create a new iD or authenticate a pre-existing iD in Editorial Manager. Additional Editor Comments: Dear authors, I'm sorry for the delay in providing our feedback. We were in the process of seeking additional reviewers after identifying a potential conflict of interest between at least one of the initial reviewers and the research team. Unfortunately, we were not very successful in recruiting new reviewers. To avoid any further delay, I have reviewed the manuscript myself. In my assessment, the study is well designed and executed. The topic is both interesting and relevant, and to the best of my knowledge, it has not been previously addressed, making it a novel contribution. The sample size is appropriate, and the main findings are compelling. They lay a strong foundation for future research to replicate the results and explore the potential role of sex as a moderating variable. Please make sure to address all reviewers’ comments and suggestions in a point-by-point response and implement the corresponding amendments to the manuscript where appropriate. I'm looking forward to receive the revised version. All the best, Helmi Chaabene [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: I would like to thank authors for this interesting study. Academic achievement is an important subject and it has a relation with physical fitness. I believe this study has many strengths. First, it has a very good sample size and tests and measurements are appropriate. In addition, it has a strong results and discussion sections. However, authors need to report reliability and validity of tests and measurements. In addition, this study needs a stronger conclusion section with future perspectives and practical applications. Lastly, this study needs more up to date (2022 and above literature review. I look forward to seeing edited version of this manuscript. Best regards. Reviewer #2: Este artículo entrega respuestas a una serie de inquietudes que se presentan en el campo de la educación. La indagación tiene un correcto desarrollo que ayuda a ampliar el conocimiento respecto a la temática en cuestión. Por tanto, el presente artículo cumple correctamente las etapas en cuanto a forma y fondo. Reviewer #3: REVIEW REPORT (PONE-D-24-52528) Relation between motor competence and academic achievement: the mediating role of fitness and cognition in boys and girls ABSTRACT - Please adjust the acronym “AA” that was used without definition and review the presentation of the percentages and effect coefficients for adequate contextualization, focusing more on the main findings in interpretative language (for example, “cognitive mediation was more important in boys, while fitness was more expressive in girls”). INTRODUCTION - Overall, it is ok. But I believe that the hypothesis needs to be more evident, such as “it is expected that executive functions and fitness components partially mediate the relationship between motor competence and academic performance, with variations according to sex”. - How does the present study differ from previous studies reporting the absence or presence of mediation? Methodological inconsistencies? Different samples or measures of physical fitness? METHODS - Were only students with complete data included? Were students with disabilities excluded? Please clarify. - I recommend a better explanation of the z-score procedure for GMC and EF. Is it a standardization within the sample? Between age groups? - Was there standardization of grades among schools, that is, were the evaluation criteria uniform? Please include this information. RESULTS - I really believe that tables 1 and 2 should contain clearer notes about the units and meaning of the tests, such as "the higher, the better", or "shorter time = better agility". In addition, use the magnitude of the effects explicitly if the effect is small, medium or large as suggested by Cohen, especially in indirect effects. - The results are ok, with no evidence of artificial homogeneity or variance suppression, but ambiguity about causality is needed and to avoid undue temporal inference in a cross-sectional study. Please review this throughout the text. DISCUSSION - It is well written, but, in general, the authors should condense the paragraphs, avoiding repeating previous numerical results. - The authors should moderate the first paragraph to use more accessible language instead of excessively technical. The text should convey the main message to all readers and not just the specialized ones. For example, boys showed exclusive cognitive mediation, while girls had multiple mediation pathways. - The authors mention the general results and highlight the importance of the cognitive pathway in boys, but it is not clear why the physical components UBS and LBS did not act as mediators for them, contrary to what occurred in part with girls. Please review this, albeit objectively. - How can PE teachers or policy makers use this evidence? This is not clear. - The authors also inform the limitation of not measuring physical activity or sleep. Objectively, I suggest including objective information with suggestions on how to overcome this in future studies. Reviewer #4: I appreciate the opportunity to review this manuscript titled “Relation between motor competence and academic achievement: The mediating role of fitness and cognition in boys and girls”. In this study, the authors assess the mediating role of fitness and executive functions on the motor competence and academic achievement relationship. I think that a major revision is necessary before accepting it for publication. ABSTRACT Although, in general, I consider that the abstract is well synthesized and provides the necessary information, it would be advisable to specify and/or define what is meant by multiple path in the results section. It is explained in the full text of the article, but if you have not read it beforehand, this aspect is not clear in the abstract.. INTRODUCTION The introduction is well-written and the objectives are clearly stated. In this respect, no suggestions for improvement are made. METHODS The methodology used in the research is well explained and appropriate to achieve the objectives of the work. RESULTS - Referring to Table 1, it would be appropriate to add the effect size (Cohen's d) of the t-tests. - The authors show in Table 2 the total and group-wise correlations for the main study variables. In relation to these results, it would perhaps be interesting to also add a statistical test (e.g. Fisher's Z-transformation) that allows to know concretely which specific correlations are statistically significantly different according to gender. DISCUSSION - The discussion is well-written. In this respect, no suggestions for improvement are made. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Relation between motor competence and academic achievement: the mediating role of fitness and cognition in boys and girls PONE-D-24-52528R1 Dear Dr. Ruiz-Hermosa, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Helmi Chaabène Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Thank you for addressing all the reviewers' comments and for revising your manuscript. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: I would like to thank authors for this edited version of the manuscript. I believe this current version is acceptable for publication. Thank you. Reviewer #4: (No Response) ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Ferman Konukman Reviewer #4: No ********** |
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