Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionNovember 16, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-52113Towards robust machine olfaction: debiasing GC-MS data enhances prostate cancer diagnosis from urine volatilesPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Rotteveel, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 31 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please include your updated Competing Interests statement in your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf. 4. In the online submission form, you indicated that “The data underlying the results presented in the study are available from Prof Wen-Yee Lee (contact via email wylee@utep.edu)” All PLOS journals now require all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript to be freely available to other researchers, either 1. In a public repository, 2. Within the manuscript itself, or 3. Uploaded as supplementary information. This policy applies to all data except where public deposition would breach compliance with the protocol approved by your research ethics board. If your data cannot be made publicly available for ethical or legal reasons (e.g., public availability would compromise patient privacy), please explain your reasons on resubmission and your exemption request will be escalated for approval. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is amazing work. Although, as the limitations rightly acknowledge, the true mimicry of the original concept may be too far off at this point, the attempt itself to apply both MS and ML to olfactory senses in diagnosing PCa is a brilliant idea and fully worth pursuing in the future. However, I do recommend some additional corrections to improve readability. 1. Workflow of data. As with most ML papers, a comprehensive workflow of how the data was processed would improve understanding. A diagram depicting the 4th paragraph of the methods would help improve understanding. 2. CNN for MS signals? My understanding of the methods, thus, may be unclear, but is it correct for me to understand that you have processed the MS signals through Resnes as images? While GS-MS outputs are, in someway, 2 dimensional, it could hardly be considered an 'image' that should/could be processed through a CNN, as the 2 dimensional array is only something based on charge/size and doesn't convey any comprehensive information of individual identities of the molecules in the array. For instance, wouldn't a configuration of similarly distributed charge/size molecules, but in an entirely unrelated molecular composition be deemed similar? TL;DR: Please, help me understand the wisdom behind applying 2 dimensional image analysis to a molecular array. 3. Small sample. Primarily as a urologic surgeon, I am more curious as to why the authors chose to use such a diverse patient group. Limiting them to a limited Gleason Score group might have homogenized the characteristics better. 400 or so samples are too few to train a model. Could you offer a reply? Thank you. Reviewer #2: This study proposes an innovative approach to enhance machine olfaction for prostate cancer (PCa) diagnosis using gas chromatography-mass spectrometry (GC-MS) data. The authors introduce a novel debiasing method to address source-related biases and employ machine learning techniques to classify urinary samples. The topic is highly relevant, especially given the need for non-invasive diagnostic tools for PCa. The manuscript is well-structured and clearly presents the motivation, methodology, and results. However, there are several areas where the manuscript can be improved to meet the standards of a high-impact international journal. These areas relate to methodological transparency, scientific rigor, and presentation. 1. The introduction is well-written but could benefit from a stronger emphasis on the novelty of the "scent character" approach 2. Provide more detail on the configuration of the Empirical Bayes debiasing technique, such as the exact distributions used and how they were validated. 3. Elaborate on how hyperparameters for the convolutional neural network (CNN) and ResNet18 were selected. Was there any hyperparameter tuning process? 4. Clarify the rationale for transforming GC-MS data into 3D images instead of other approaches, such as feature extraction or embeddings. 5. Provide access to the Python code or pseudo-code of the debiasing pipeline to ensure reproducibility. 6. Provide a brief explanation of how the “emergent scent character” relates to standard biomarkers and how it advances existing methodologies. 7. Potential data imbalance and demographic bias could influence the model's performance. Quantify and report the impact of these imbalances on model performance using metrics like accuracy, precision, recall, and F1. 8. Provide a confusion matrix and classification report, including sensitivity, specificity, and AUC, for a complete evaluation of model performance. 9. Improve the clarity of figures by adding descriptive legends and using distinct colors for different categories. Reviewer #3: 1) The abstract is not expressing the novelty of the proposed approach. The whole abstract is not impressive and needs to be rewritten. Should focus on what is problem, why it is important to be solved. How it is solved and what are findings. 2) Introduction section requires reorganization and missing the novelty of the proposed approach, hence, the author is suggested to rewrite the introduction section. 3) The author is requested to include literature review section within the manuscript and here should be some lines of text between the main and sub heading. This rule should be follow in whole paper. 4) Data characteristic should be place in experiments or result section. In the meantime, the methodology section needs the revision and major attention of the author. 5) Results section needs major revision which demonstrates the training as well the testing results. In the meantime the impacts of each consider parameter in a detailed manner which improves the validity of the approach and quality of the manuscript. Reviewer #4: The research is inspiring. Suggest it be accepted. However, improvement is needed: For example: Readability: (1)Prostate cancer (PCa) is the second most frequent cancer globally in men in 2022, while being the first most frequent cancer for men in 118 countries (2)Conventional prostate-specific antigen (PSA) blood tests and digital rectal examinations (DRE) are widely used at the initial detection stage of prostate cancer, when combined, the probability of prostate cancer evading detection, when the results are within normal levels, is only 10% [5]. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Jin Wook Kim Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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PONE-D-24-52113R1Towards robust machine olfaction: debiasing GC-MS data enhances prostate cancer diagnosis from urine volatilesPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Rotteveel, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 28 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Li Yang, M.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: The authors have satisfactorily addressed all of the concerns and suggestions raised in my previous review. The revised manuscript demonstrates a clear improvement in response to the feedback, and the authors have provided adequate explanations for all modifications made. Reviewer #3: (No Response) Reviewer #4: All the concerns have been accepted. Suggest it be accepted. However, pls note that some descriptions can be optimized. One example: Various studies have identified different lists of VOCs that all show a significant correlation with cancer in their specific datasets, yet these sets of VOCs often differ completely drastically and do not generalize from one study to another . ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. 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Towards robust machine olfaction: debiasing GC-MS data enhances prostate cancer diagnosis from urine volatiles PONE-D-24-52113R2 Dear Dr. Rotteveel, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Li Yang, M.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Thanks for the authors' efforts to comprehensively improve your manuscript according to editor's and reviewers' comments. I am pleased to inform you that your paper can be accepted for publication now. Thanks for the chance to assess your interesting and important work. Additionally, many thanks for all the reviewers' precious inputs. Reviewers' comments: |
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