Peer Review History
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PONE-D-24-21189Effects of core stability exercises on balance ability of children and adolescents with intellectual disabilities: A systematic review and meta-analysisPLOS ONE Dear Dr. xu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 30 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Partly Reviewer #6: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: N/A Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes Reviewer #6: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes Reviewer #6: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes Reviewer #6: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I think it is a different field that can be reviewed. but I do not find it appropriate to publish it because I think that the existing studies are not sufficient for meta-analysis and the results will be misleading. Reviewer #2: In this manuscript, the authors summarise the available evidence on the effectiveness of core stability exercises in improving balance in children and adolescents with intellectual disabilities. The topic is clinically relevant and the results emphasise the need for more primary studies on the subject. However, some questions need to be properly addressed: Abstract Line 39/41- “Core stability exercises are effective in improving dynamic balance in children and adolescents with ID. However, no significant effects were found on the improvement in static and static-dynamic balance in this population”. Please consider clarifying the content of this sentence adding information about heterogeneity in the included sources of evidence, and the lack of significant improvements in comparison with the control group. Methods Line 126/127- According to the inclusion criteria, the average age of the participants should be < 18 years. However, the mean is a measure of central location, not indicate sample extremes. For example, in a hypothetical sample of 2 participants, if one is 30 years old and the other is 2 years old, the average will be 16 years old. Line 128/129- The comparator is not properly described. The review aims to assess the effectiveness of core stability exercises against which intervention? Active? passive? placebo? The lack of a well-defined comparator may have resulted in the found heterogeneity. Line 134- In the methods section, specifically in the "data extraction" subsection, the data extraction tool is not described, nor is the data extracted from each study. While the PRISMA checklist states that page 9 describes the methods for assessing certainty in the evidence, no such procedure was carried out. Considering the Joanna Briggs Institute and Cochrane guidelines for systematic reviews of effectiveness, assessing the certainty of the evidence is a mandatory step in this type of review, and provides the reader with an indication of the strength of the evidence produced by the systematic review. In agreement, authors should consider assessing the certainty of the results using the GRADE approach. Results Line 198/199- “As illustrated in Table 1, three studies were conducted in Iran, followed by Egypt and Pakistan”. Please clarify this sentence. How many studies were conducted in Egypt and Pakistan? Table 1. While categories for severity of intellectual disability are presented in the results section, the reader is not previously informed on which system this classification is based. Table 3. Consider providing values for the intervention/ control effects. According to relevant guidelines, a summary of findings table should be provided. Consider adding this table in the final of the results section accompanied by a grading of the certainty in the evidence. Conclusion In this section, consider providing information regarding the effectiveness of core stability exercises in improving each of the outcomes of interest in light of the certainty in the summarized evidence. Reviewer #3: 1- number of articles in systematic review is very few 2- My major concern is that core stability exercises are not very useful and functional, nowadays. For example, functional training and postural re-education are very noticeable at the time being. Reviewer #4: 1. Please kindly make the necessary corrections in line 69 (Studies have shown that individual's balance performance is associated with their core stability and not individuals balance). 2. Please kindly indicate the number/percentage of articles conducted in the various countries (Line 198) Reviewer #5: Abstract This abstract needs to be written more robustly. Firstly, it not clear what the rationale or significance of the study is from the back ground. There methods section is extremely brief and the results need to be presented more succinctly. Your conclusion appears exaggerated especially based on two studies for a narrative synthesis and four studies for a meta-analysis. I suggest that you consider being more measured in your conclusions based on limited data/evidence. Introduction Well done on your introduction. Please consider these to improve the coherence. Discuss the burden/epidemiological data around balance in your population of interest (ID). Based on this discuss the need for balance training amongst this population. Discuss the effects of balance training. Consider reducing the definitions and critique the existing literature around the phenomenon. You say there are studies existing in this area but these studies have not been systematically reviewed. Is that the rationale for your study? You need to be clear why there needs to be a systematic review in this area. Are these studies contrasting? Do you need to pull them together to firm up their conclusions although they all conclude on the same things? The biomechanics of core stability should be discussed robustly as well to link to the need to conduct this systematic review. Please consider these to improve the introduction. Information sources and search strategy What process will you use to ensure or assess inter-rater reliability of the data search, identification and extraction? Inclusion criteria Consider using a more robust and scientific approach to writing your inclusion criteria. Also, you need to provide an exclusion criteria. Data extraction What evidence informed your approach to data extraction? Again, this needs to be written more scientifically and backed by evidence. Discussion Your discussion is well written. However, I'm concerned about the firm conclusions you are drawing on effectiveness based on six studies. You need to consider whether the effect sizes are clinically meaningful also. Again, there should be a section that discusses the evidence for core stability exercises and its effect on balance more clearly. The strength of existing evidence should be discussed. Reviewer #6: I am happy to read through this systematic review and metanalysis of the effects of core stability exercises on balance ability of children and adolescents with intellectual disabilities. To the best of my knowledge, the manuscript is sound and analysis well presented. I recommend that the work be accepted for publication if the necessary grammatical check is completed. Thank you ********** 6. 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PONE-D-24-21189R1Effects of core stability exercises on balance ability of children and adolescents with intellectual disabilities: A systematic review and meta-analysisPLOS ONE Dear Dr. xu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 07 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #5: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: I congratulate the authors as the new version of the manuscript presents substantial improvements. All my initial concerns were addressed by the authors in the first review of the manuscript. The conclusion described in the abstract ‘Core stability exercises appear to be a promising and acceptable intervention for the improvement of dynamic balance in children and adolescents with ID’ seems abusive to me, considering the scarcity of studies included, the results of the studies and the certainty of the evidence synthesised. In order to be published, the manuscript must be reviewed idiomatically and scientifically in terms of writing style. Reviewer #5: Well done on putting this manuscript together. You have addressed all my comments very well. All the best! ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #5: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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