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PONE-D-24-31113Identification of novel antiviral host factors by functional gene expression analysis using in vitro HBV infection assay systemsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Nakamoto, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 07 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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We noticed you have some minor occurrence of overlapping text with the following previous publication(s), which needs to be addressed: https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/10.1111/hepr.13722 https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/abs/10.1002/jmv.23916 https://www.dovepress.com/molecular-pharmacodynamics-of-new-oral-drugs-used-in-the-treatment-of--peer-reviewed-fulltext-article-DDDT https://jbiomedsci.biomedcentral.com/articles/10.1186/s12929-023-00899-2 https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0006295222001204?via%3Dihub In your revision ensure you cite all your sources (including your own works), and quote or rephrase any duplicated text outside the methods section. Further consideration is dependent on these concerns being addressed. 3. 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Additional Editor Comments: We invite you to submit a revised manuscript that addresses the points below. Specifically, different results from the infection and transfection experiments using PXB cells and HepG2-D11 cells need to be addressed. In addition, a rationale for HepG2 cells instead of HepG2-NTCP cells needs to be provided. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The study by Nosaka et al. describes fumarylacetoacetate hydrolase (FAH) as a novel antiviral host factor against HBV. The authors found that siRNA-mediated knockdown of STAT1 unexpectedly reduced HBV replication in primary human hepatocytes (PXB cells). They then performed RNA microarray and identified 43 host genes that upregulated in the absence of STAT1 in PXB cells. Individual knockdown of these 43 genes revealed FAH as an antiviral host factor in PXB cells as well as in HepG2 cells. Furthermore, overexpression of FAH or addition of dimethyl fumarate (DMF), an FAH metabolite, reduced HBV replication in a STAT1-independent manner. The study is important since HBV remains uncurable and identifying new host factors may inform new antiviral strategies. However, the study contains several issues that need to be addressed. 1. The authors performed infection-based experiments in PXB cells and transfection-based experiments in HepG2 cells. This is not a fair comparison. The authors should use HepG2 cells stably expressing the HBV receptor NTCP and perform infection experiments in these cells so that the results from the two different cell culture systems can be compared. 2. Fig. 1, siRNA was transfected 4 days before infection, but the experiment lasted 13 days. Since siRNA-mediated gene knockdown is transient, the knockdown efficiency during infection day 4-13 is problematic which can be an issue in data interpretation. 3. Fig. 1D, the arrow for the day 1 label should be extended to the text above it. It’s confusing otherwise. 4. Figure 2B, I understand that the genes are chosen focused on PXB but indicating the number of genes that differ with treatment on the HepG2.D11 graph could be informative. Or point out the genes of interest for the other cell type on this graph too. 5. Figure 2C, asterisk is not explained. 6. Fig. 3, qPCR validation of the knockdowns is needed. Axes that say “relative expressions” should be “relative expression” singular. Lines labeled “folds” should say “fold” or “fold change” singular. Also, whether the red color represents significance is not explained. 7. Clarification that any comparisons not shown on graphs are non-significant would be useful. 8. In some graphs the authors indicate n=3 and show the mean. It would be better to show individual data points. If n= 3 means total data points (not 3 experimental replicates) the data pool is a little small. 9. Line 266, should “transfection” be “replication”? 10. Line 270, 1.2-fold is a rather marginal effect. Is this difference biologically meaningful? 11. Line 275, should “extracellular” be “intracellular”? 12. The sentence on lines 278-280 is confusing, I suggest it’s changed to "these results suggest that FAH has anti-HBV effects, as determined by siRNA screening of genes altered by STAT1 knockdown in PXB cells.” 13. Fig. 5F is quite zoomed out, I wonder if a slightly closer view would show cell morphology better. 14. Line 367, the sentence reads as if this is a conclusion, but the data do not really establish that DMF exerts its antiviral effect by inducing autophagy and anti-HBV related genes. 15. Line 371, what does “human biotransformation experiment” mean? Reviewer #2: Authors of this manuscript investigated that fumarylacetoacetate hydrolase (FAH) is an antiviral host factor and methyl ester of FAH metabolite, dimethyl fumarate (DMF) has the antiviral effect in STAT1-independent pathway. First of all, authors explained that knockdown of STAT1 increased viral products in HBV-transfected HepG2 cells therefore STAT1 is antiviral. And then decreased HBV replication and products in STAT1-KD, HBV-infected PXB cells is that HBV replication is reduced by STAT1-KD. The explanation by authors was not clear and the opposite results from the infection and transfection experiment should be thoroughly investigated. To claim that STAT1 is antiviral, STAT1 overexpression should be conducted in HepG2-D11 cells with Western blotting with STAT1 and HBc and Northern and Southern blotting for HBV RNA and HBV DNA. If possible, also in PXB cells, too. Since working with PXB cell may have some limitations, authors did not conduct Northern and Southern blotting for HBV RNA and DNA with PXB cells. Then, Northern and Southern blotting should be conducted in si-STAT-RNA transfected cells HepG2-D11 cell for clarification. Again, Fig. 2 was a continuation of the opposite results between PXB and HepG2-D11 cells and the explanation was not clear. In the Fig. 3A, FAH KD increased HBsAg in PXB cells and in the Fig 3B, FAH and STAT1 double KD increased HBsAg and intracellular DNA with decreased HBV DNA and HBsAg in STAT1 single KD. In should be included with FAH single KD in Fig 3B (right graph) to compare intracellular DNA level. In Fig. 3D, intracellular DNA level was 25 times higher in FAH KD HepG2-D11 cells than control KD cells then why RNA level was only 2 times higher and extracellular DNA level was only increased little compared to intracellular DNA? Southern blotting for intracellular DNA and extracellular DNA should be conducted. Northern blotting for RNA should be conducted to compare with pgRNA, S and X mRNAs. At the same time, RT-qPCR for pgRNA only and for total RNA should be conducted. Again, in Fig 4D in FAH overexpression, compare to HBV RNA, intracellular DNA level was decreased so much and extracellular DNA level was not decreased significantly. Southern blotting to compare RC DNA and DL DNA levels and Northern blotting for pgRNA, S and X mRNAs are needed. Since DMF increased NRF2 expression (Fig 5G) and NRF2 regulate HMOX-1, then why HMOX-1 is not increased? It needs to be explained and/or speculated why so. Minor points, In lane 64, cccDNA drug resistance should be corrected to cccDNA persistence or else. In lanes 141, ‘the selected target genes’ and 96 primers were used. How these gene were selected? I cannot find in the manuscript. And primer information was hard to find (Table 2). In lanes 189, radioimmunoprecipitation assay (RIPA) lysis buffer was used for Western blotting. It is better to show the composition of the buffer, since there are many versions. Lanes 407-409, it was not clear. Lanes 421-423, this conclusion is not clear, which I already mentioned above. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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<div>PONE-D-24-31113R1Identification of novel antiviral host factors by functional gene expression analysis using in vitro HBV infection assay systemsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Nakamoto, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The revised manuscript improved to make better understanding. However, a few things need to be corrected. Figures 1, 3, and S1 still contain plural descriptions in graph description and line labeling. A reference in line 164 needs to be formatted as other ones. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 22 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . 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